New ariya os.. please comment!!

Hi!! I am new here!! Its my first OS.. hope u guys would like it.. please read n comment'. Forgive if u find any mistake'

Riya: Oh '..that was too close ''.!!!! Here u go '.puppy ''.i hope u r all right '.

Riya put the puppy aside Did I forgot something . She turned and saw a person in the dark night

Riya: Haaa'ghost ''she started screaming '.the person came to light with an angry face.

Oh u scared the hell out of me sir 'hey y is he herer ??? is mission over this fast??'. what happened ? did I do something wrong?? No I didn't '.then what could be 'I didn't do anything that make sir angry did I ???yeh may be I came here na that will be the reason ''..still ''''

Arjun : what the hell r u doing here Riya???? Didn't I told u to sit in the raft or not ??? u r soo useless idiot 'plz tell me riya u came out here for a gud reason ..plz '.i can't bear any more of ur lame excuses'.plz '.. he seemed fedup n irritated to the core.

Riya:.sir that '..srry sir 'am '.OMG 'wat am I going to say ??? sir will kill me if I told him about the puppy '..any ways 'k!!! I will tell him '.god plz help '..shree, rathod sir ,chottu '.ma ,dad ,'somebody help me 'mujhe yeha se le javo!!!.

Arjun: wat sir sir huh??? Why did u here >????huh? Arjun started questing her.

Riya : sir that puppy 'was alone so '. Arjun couldn't believe what he heard.

Aj; so what 'so what huh????????

Ri: so wanted to get him to a safe place 'sir srry'''.

Aj: puppy here ???r u crazy ??no animals could live here!!!! Plz riya u have to make a gud excuse than that '.!!!

Ri: but sir am telling the truth there was a puppy ''see!!!

Riya turns around and try to show arjun the puppy but it wasn't there ''..

RI:but sir there was a puppy .it will be around here sir''she started looking for the puppy around the place '. She was shocked were did that puppy go ???''.

Arjun pointed out she is telling lame excuse and making him believe 'arjun pulled her hand and made her stand still for a while '.he was soo angry that he had nearly pulled her hand out of its socket ''

Aj: wait 'u want me to believe this nonsense ur saying ???riya ..do u have any idea want have u done ????and were this place is ???or any thing ???

Ri: plz sir plz leave my hand its hurts ''. Arjun thrown her hand in the the air

sir'..i know every thing about this place sir 'it's a isolated island near Andaman Islands..and we were in a mission to catch the drug deals '.thats na and rathod sir told me to sit in the raft '.but I didn't that's all na ..if sir is here that means the mission is successful right? .and all of them will be waiting for me m ofcouse worried coz of me being not der ..so sir came to search for me that's it right??

Aj: u idiot '..didn't u noticed this is a fake isolated island 'even a small movement can sink this damn thing . didn't u heard the explosion ? kuch samjhe ya samjhavoom??

Ri: wat ????????????? riya shocked and looked at arjun''.

So the sound i heard just before was the ex..plo sion '.!!!! '..sir???

Mean while '

rathod and other team mates were waiting for arjun and riya.rathod was trying arjun's phone but it was in not reachable.

Rathod: DAMMIT '.where is this two??huh???its almost midnight ''..rawte 'I don't have any hope in him but were is riya ?????y the hell his cell is coming unreachable??? ''''

Shree whispered chottu ''

Sh: yaar were is riya ????

Ch: yeh were is she? hey she is missing and arjun sir is ALSO missing ..i doubt they went together somewhere ??? chottu winked with a weird smile to shree ,shree also look at chottu like that ''

Sh: r u thinking what am thinking?

Ch: no I think u r thinking what am thinking '.. both laughs making rathod more irritated if that's possible''

Rathod: shree ,chottu haste haste mere mooh kya dekh rahe ho ???? yeho koi circus chal raha hai kya'go and look for them 'we have no time to loose '.. ab jao yeha se rathod said in a hurry

Shree: y sir ..we already got the drug dealers ' aur baath Arjun sir aur riya ki' wo dono aa jayega sir' I think Arjun sir ne doosre raasta doondh nikala hai.

Rathod realizes that these three don't know about the sinking of this island '.

Ra: oh yeah 'shree this is a fake island '..due to the explosion it can sink any time'.

Shree and chottu are soo shocked and runs into the forest to search for them

But shree couldn't locate them '..so they returned and search for any 'clues .. then shree found one of their boat is missing''

Sh: sir '

Ra: kya hai ?

Sh: sir there is no one in this island sir and one of our boat is missing if .i think sir they went behind the remaining goons who escaped from the firing n blast sir!!!

Ra: r u sure there is no body ..??

Sh : I found no body sir '.and there was a scarf of riya near the missing boat ..sir wat we have to do ??

Ra: okay '..they would be in mainland now '.start the boat ..we r leaving this island too '

Sh: yes sir'

Ri plz be care full ''.i know ur with that samjhe ya samjhavoom '.i am sure u will b alright ' kadoos ka itna bharosa tho kar hi saktha hai'kyu??

Chotu: shree tumhe nahi lagtha KUCH TOH CHOOT RAHA HAI??

Before shree could reply rathore gave them a "look".

shree and chottu starts the engine and left the place ..

'''.mean time far behind the forest

Aj: y r u still standing here??? 'come we have to hurry reach the raft before rathod leave the place '. Riya and arjun started running through narrow forest paths 'and reached there.

Wat was I thinking riya and intelligence' in same sentence????Idiot ''..puppy ?????is she kidding ???What a fool''. Yeh ladki toh mujhe zarror pagal bana degi!!

Arjun was soo angry that he walked way ahead of riya . and reached there but it was too late rathod and all have left them ''

Aj: What the ''''''

Ri: sir ''.now what will we do???

Mean time ETF office ''.

Rathod was soo worried'. Were did he go '??and riya were is she ???? DAMMIT

Ra: shree did u started tracking riya's and rawte's phone???

Sh:yes sir but unreachable aa raha hai'. were is riya I thought she will be with arjun sir ''..ri ' kaho ho tum??

Ra: DAMMIT '''..

Ch: rathod sir ,there is no body in their house !!!!

Sh:chottu ..wat do u think were will be ri ?and arjun sir'??

Ch: don't know yaar hope they will be fine '.if they r still in that fake island ??then u will be in danger '..

Sh:me?? how???mein kuch nahi kiya' mein bekazoor.

Ch: yeh ur innocent u said rathod sir that they will be here 'that's y we left there na ''

Sh: so wat ?? I guessed with the clues I got from the raft ,,''hey rathod sir will never scold me for this '

Ch: I mean not rathod sir ..uss samjhe ya samjavum tumhe zaroor samjhakkar hi chodeega!! '.

Shree realized that he was true sir will kill him '''.he remembered how angry he was in that morning

Mean time in the forest '.

Ri: sir ''. what will we do now???

arjun was soo angry at riya that was his limit ''.if he start saying any thing then he will defo kill her so he didn't answer that question 'and sat down under a tree .but they didn't had any choice but to wait for their team to return '..

Aj: we have to wait here for them '.but in a safe place '..we have to find a place hurry '.

Ri: yes sir ..

AJ: kya yes sir.. yes sir.. laga rakha hai?? Sir bolthe hai yes sir.. aur karthe kuch aur hi hai!!

God y him '..on that question she was soo angry '.while she searching .arjun started calling the team mates

Aj: ohh'..pick up the phone rathod 'plz ''..phone ringing ''at last trying for 4 times he got rathod

Aj: hello '.rathod'..

Ra:. rawte??? were r u damn it ???i have told u a million times not to go with out informing me !!''.rathod was soo angry he started shouting '

Aj: rathod 'me and riya r trapped In the island ...he tries to calm down rathod ''.

Ra: wat ???u r still there ?rathod in a shock then were did the missing boat go? and who took that ? is riya with u ???

Aj: u have to come back and pick us up ..i don't have any thing in my hands.. n we r sinking..

Rathore: accha' abhi yaad aaya' hero aur heroine ghooomkar kaha chale gaye they?? Huh?? Rawte tumhare attitude ki waje se aaj ek jumior ki jaan bhi khatre mein hai?? Kya tumhe zara bhi aandaza hai kit um kya kar rahe ho?? DAMMIT!!

To b continued'..

Stuck n island how romantic!!!!... nice concept nd gud start... continue soon...