~Phir le aaya Dil SS~ (Part 8 on pg 13) Last part - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: KiSha13

oh toh Ayesha is not Riya..!!! 😭 okk we will adjust,atleast look alike hi sahi 😛

oye how can you say this is a bad update,huh?? I always love to read about detective cases beside romantic angle..so for me it was a superb update babes 👍🏼

This Anand is so bloody playboy..!!! accha hai usse kisine mar diya 😲

great part & update soon dear..please pm me na 😃





Thank you so much dear😊

Sorry I didnt send you PM. Actually I am a newbie and they dont allow me to send more than 10 messages in 24 hrs...😡. So I was not able to send you. But next tym I will surely send the first PM to u. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
@pink_fairy123 are no need to be sorry babes..I understand your problem..well from now on I will be keeping my eyes on your update frequently..you just carry on renaming the title with part number & I will catch the updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
sorry for late comment dear
and wonderful story
So its not Riya but Ayesha
And loved the way Arjun and Rathore sent Chotu and Shree to Ayesha,
they had missed Riya so much
And your case also going strongly dear
Please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome dear!!!!!! plz pm me plz plz!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you for reading the SS and appreciating😃
I am trying to put every emotion I can...

Part 4

Ayesha's House

Knock at the door. Ayesha opens. Shree and Chotu are all smiling.

Shree : "Hi Riya!"
Ayesha : "What!"
Chotu : "He means Ayesha...Ayesha...How are you?"
Ayesha ( smilingly ): "Ya m fine. Please come inside. "
Chotu signaled Shree to control himself.
Ayesha : "I was going to call you today..."
Shree : "Do you also feel some connection..."
Ayesha : "Yes and I..xcuse me wat... wat are you talking about?"
Shree : "Wat are you talking about?"
Ayesha : "About the case ofcourse.."
Shree : "Oh! I thought...never mind. "
Ayesha : "Sir are you ok? Let me bring in some water for you.."
Shree : "Dont call me sir please. You can take my name...its Shreekant Sen."
Ayesha ( thinking for a moment ): "Can I call you Shree?"
Shree ( grinning ) : "Sure! whatever you like."

Ayesha smiles and goes to take some water.

Chotu : "What are you doing?"
Shree : "What? I didn't do anything. Did I?"

Ayesha comes with water. All three are sitting on sofa.

Chotu : "So what were you going to tell us?"
Ayesha : "Ya...the criminal was tall and of strong built. His height must be around 6'2". Before loosing my senses I remember watching a scar on his left hand... a big one. "
Shree : "Wow! Ayesha! You are so observant. You know wat, you can become a good police officer."
Ayesha ( laughs ) : "No I am better off as an Interior designer"
Chotu : "We will soon find the criminal. Arjun and Rathore sir will be joining us soon."
Ayesha : "Till then wat to do? Lets play dart board to pass the tym. "

Soon they were playing just like the old days with Riya. They were watching TV, laughing and chit-chatting as if she was their Riya. Shree was discussing and showing her his new gadgets, Chotu was discussing about his 11:30 girlfiend, his Pomeranian Ruby and Shree and Ayesha were together pulling his leg. Even Ayesha was enjoying it. It was a really very happy moment.

Arjun and Rathore are outside Ayesha's Apartment.
Arjun : "You get down here. I will park the car."
Rathore nodded in yes. He was standing at the apartments gate and waiting for him. Arjun parked the car and was coming checking something in his mobile. Suddenly he ran into a man and his mobile fell down. The man picked it up and gave it to him. Arjun thanked him but the man didn't say anything and quickly ran outside. Arjun found his behaviour strange but than moved to Rathore.

*Door bell rings* Its Arjun and Rathore.
Ayesha is still laughing on some joke of Shree and opens the door. Arjun and Rathore are amazed seeing her like that. They moved inside and saw Shree and Chotu laughing like hell. Arjun got angry.

Arjun ( angrily ): "Wat you two are doing? You were supposed to work on case here."
Shree ( scared ): "Yes sir...Ummm... We are working on it sir."
Arjun (sarcastically, folding his hands on chest): "Oh ya...I can very well see that."
Chotu : "Sir actually..."
Arjun gave a look to them. Shree and Chotu thought it is best to remain silent. TV was switched on.
Arjun : "Oh so you both are watching movie.."
Ayesha : "No Mr. Rawte that was me. I love this movie Pyaar Unlimited starring Riyaaz Khan. He was my favourite hero. I just loved him a lot "

Arjun has flashbacks of Riya when she said the same thing to him. She was so like Riya. Though he was scolding Shree and Chotu for gossiping around here but it was after so many days there was this smile on their faces that used to be at the tym of Riya.

Rathore : "Now would you two keep on standing like statues or tell us about the progress..."
Shree told them about whatever they were told by Ayesha about the criminal. Arjun remembered about that man whom he met at the parking. He was in a hurry, he almost had the same height and built, he was trying to cover his face and yes ... he had the scar...!!!!

Arjun : "Criminal is here Rathore. Chotu come with me"
Rathore : "Wait. But how do you know?"
Arjun : " I dont have tym to explain all that. We are going downstairs. Take care of Ayesha. "

They checked the Apartments nearby area. But he was gone. They quickly came upstairs.

Rathore : "Would you tell me wat is going on?"
Arjun : "Rathore I met a man in the parking area who was exactly similar to the description that Shree was telling us."
Shree : "See his guts! He is not even afraid of us. We have to catch him next tym"

*Phone rings* Its Ayesha's uncle on the phone line.
Ayesha : "Wat? it would take you few more days. But uncle how would I live here alone? I can not even leave the city coz of this case."
R. K. Banerjee : "That is why I was telling you to stay away from all of this. Anyhow I am coming in few days, till now you live in that flat only."

Arjun : "Rathore I don't think its safe for Ayesha here. Inspite of two constables, murderer is easily coming here. He must be waiting for Shree and Chotu to leave."
Chotu : "Sir I'll increase the security"
Rathore : "No Chotu. This wont help. Rawte is right. We cant take risk."
Shree : "Then what to do sir?"
Ayesha comes
Arjun : "Who was there on phone?"
Ayesha : "My uncle. It would take him few more days."
Rathore : "We have to do something. Criminal would definitely try to take advantage of this oppurtunity as she would be all alone here."
Shree : "Sir we can shift her to a place where we all can be around her for her safety"
Rathore : "Ya that would be good. But where?" ( thinking for a moment ) Rawte wat about your place?
Arjun ( shocked ): "What?" ( looks at Ayesha )
Ayesha ( hesitently ): "No I would not like you people to get disturbed coz of me. You are already doing so much for me. And I am safe here"
Rathore : "Its about your security Ayesha. We cant take risk. Pack your luggage."
Ayesha : "Sir but its really late. Its almost night"
Rathore : "It doesnt matter. Make it quick. "

Ayesha goes inside the room to pack her belongings.

Arjun : "Why my place? Why not yours or someone else's?"
Rathore : "Try to understand. Other place would not be so secure and also there will be no one to take care of her. We all will be shifting to your place. There she will always be under our security. Then there is your neighbour Mrs Dsouza who can easily take care of her. Come on Rawte, its just a matter of few days. His uncle would be back till then"
Arjun reluctantly agrees.


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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nice... so ETF along with ayesha goin to stay under same roof... intresting... continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Awesome. arjun and riya under one roof. Cannot wait to read more. Def do continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow riya no no ayesha going 2 live in arjun home. how romantic!!!!!!!!😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye Ayesha is like totaly xerox copy of Riya & she also is sharing great bond with Shree-Chotu just like Riya used to share with..thats realy great 😃

oye hoye I am jumping yaar Ayesha is gonna stay with Arjun..yipeee 😃😉😳

great part dear,do continue soon...thanks for pm 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
wow...awesome update dear...Ayeha n Arjun...worth to c...sry worth to read further!!!!
will b waitng...update soon!!!

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