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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moumimon

So It's Rathore's love story...interesting...continue soon...



it's our love story...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kbhavani

hey gud one yaar...hope it happens...



me too...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww.. Mrinalini ji u nailed it girl! Gawd... I knew its ur name but still I scrolled down n found u have answered to me b4 I could ask... Nowadays u r tracing my mind!
Okay Mrinalini is beautiful name, as far as I remember its wat Noble laurete Rabindranath Tagore called his wife lovingly!
N story was wow! So, the jodi name is SaNalini this tima okay..?
Loved there first eye-lock n ur fight...
Now fter reading this I want Rathore's opposite to be like u only, seriously!
Give a quick update... Thanks 4 the pm... N take care girl while taking these tom-boish pangas...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghasingh

@shuchi.. mrinalini is my other name... it's my original name which my mom wanted to name me.

thanks meghu... U answered me b4 I could ask. I love u meghu.. Muahh!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow ...Rathore Luv story
OSM start ...love this daring Mirnalini
pls cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

Aww.. Mrinalini ji u nailed it girl! Gawd... I knew its ur name but still I scrolled down n found u have answered to me b4 I could ask... Nowadays u r tracing my mind!
Okay Mrinalini is beautiful name, as far as I remember its wat Noble laurete Rabindranath Tagore called his wife lovingly!
N story was wow! So, the jodi name is SaNalini this tima okay..?
Loved there first eye-lock n ur fight...
Now fter reading this I want Rathore's opposite to be like u only, seriously!
Give a quick update... Thanks 4 the pm... N take care girl while taking these tom-boish pangas...!!!



yep i m learning it from u sweetheart...😊
Sanilini... sounds awesome👏
i know i'm so awesome😉 we'll be a super hot jodi
rathore'll have to take care dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -dia-

Wow ...Rathore Luv story

OSM start ...love this daring Mirnalini
pls cont. soon



thanks dear...
me too love daring characters...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello guys thanks a lot for your appreciation... here is the next part...leave your comments please..

Both moved, but leaving their hearts, and something bothering them, or a wish to meet once again.

Both had turned, when Mrinalini's cell phone rang and she picked it up.

"Hello… hey… oops I'm so sorry sweetheart… just coming… no… no… I'm really sorry… I swear I'll be there in next 20 minutes… pakka… plz baby…" she said.

Rathore had unknowingly turned his face towards her, and a smile was softening his stern face as he saw her smiling, pouting her face, making face on the phone while talking.

However immediately his smile was replaced by a deep pain of very new kind to him, something shattering inside him, and as if he has just lost something very important, as he heard the words sweetheart and baby.

More than that he felt his eyes were moist… he closed his eyes and felt the cold breeze…

Mrinalini's hands were wrapped around Rathore's chest, her head on his back and occasionally kissing on his neck. Rathore arms had encircled her in his deep embrace, and suddenly he twirled her and they came face to face… Both were busy in looking each other's deep eyes…

Rathore's hand reached at her dark deep lock of hair which was coming at her face, he held it with his fingers, playing with it, and bringing her more close to him. Her lips and lips were so close to each and were about to feel….

Suddenly rain drops started to fell, and Rathore looked around but there was no one …. He was alone, and she was long gone…

"Rathore… control yourself… what has happened to you… kya kya soch rahe ho? Don't think about her… she'll drive you crazy… come on… who was she… you don't even know her…now just control….focus… nothing has really happened…fine…. and ..." Rathore thought inside himself as he just remembered his dream.

Rathore has felt really this unknown feeling for the first time in his life, first time this pleasure and pain of meeting someone and then departing, his heart had witnessed. In the last fifty minutes or something like this, he had experienced… probably love.

He picked up the keys of his car which had fallen during the fight, when he saw her purse was lying there. He picked up that and opened it and had a look inside.

That made his stern face to smile once more… apart from her credit cards, money etc. there was a cute picture of her… smiley face, shining black eyes and an unique confidence… he was just mesmerized … but then he remembered that he has to return the purse…

Suddenly the thought of meeting her again, made him happy. He felt an excitement just with the thought of meeting her…

He checked her purse, followed her address and reached in front of a huge mansion which was elegantly decorated.

He entered the mansion, and after entering the inside, he was touched by what he saw…
Mrinalini was celebrating some middle aged woman, looks wise she was looking like just as if she was a servant in that mansion. But Mrinalini was sweetly hugging her and naughtily trying to smear her face in cake…

Suddenly some one entered the hall, and hugged that woman tightly and took her away. Then she sat on a couch, and only then Rathore was seen by her.

"Tum…!! Yahan…" she was shocked beyond limits.

"Vo…vo main…" suddenly he was lost at the words. It had been the first time, when Rathore had lost words to say something.

"Actually main…" he was still lost in her.

"Oh… I left it na….thank you so much…" she had seen her purse in his hand… and just ran to him, and snatched that and hugged him tightly.

"You know what this one is my favorite purse… and if you hadn't bothered then I would had lost it…" she was smiling and lost in her, while Rathore was just busy staring her, observing her sweet cuteness.

"Ooops… I didn't even …gosh… please come inside na… come" she said while holding his hand and taking him inside.

"Anyway… you know what it's so good that you came… you know what…"she was non stop chattering.

"Really…" Rathore said suddenly in between. He felt nice that she was glad that he was here.

"Yep… you know what… cake…?"she stopped in between and asked him.


Rathore was just looking at her mesmerizingly when he felt something near his lips. Mrinalini was waiting for him to open his lips, and was ready to push the cake inside…

Although he didn't liked cake, but this time he ate a bit, and loved it too, then he felt a strange ticklish feeling as he saw Mrinalini eating the cake, from the same place where he had bit the cake.

"Tumhe chocolate cake bahut pasand hai…" these words escaped his lips as he saw her licking her fingers smeared in chocolate.

"My favorite…. Actually for me… chocolate is more important for me than oxygen… I just can't live without it… you know what I think, chocolates are one of the best eatables humans had ever made… I really salute the person whoever invented how to make chocolates. Anyway… wait a minute… what's your name… you told me Rathore.. that doesn't sounds like a name but like surname… I mean it's fine as formal intro, but ab to hum friends hain na…"

Rathore was glad when she said 'friends'… she said that they were friends…. Then he answered…

"Hi… I'm Sameer Rathore."

"Okay… so Sameer… hey… come on sit na…"and she pulled him on the couch.


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