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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

They drop shree and chottu to their home.rathore ask sia to give her home address .
suddenly rain start they go their rathore say arjun to pick sia arjun pick her .they was going on stairs suddenly arju's his feet slip rathore hold hum from back and say dhayaan se charho rawte .rawte ring the door bell and sia's friend nandini open the door.she ask sia ye kya hua tujhe aur ye kon hain???
arjun put sia on sofa .she tell nandini how i fell down and they halp me alot...

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rathore : acha ab hum chalte hain.
sia : arre raat bohat ho chuki hai aap kal chale jaiyega waise bhi aap dono bohat bheeg gaye hain.
rawte : arre nahi aap dono ko takleef hogi hum chalte hain
sia : arre dekho aap ne mujhe ghar drop karne ko kaha tha to mene maan liya iss liye ab aap meri baat manenge.
rathore :ok as your wish...
sia: smile and say acha mein change kar ke aati hoon.aur haan aap dono bhi change kar lo.

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rathore: hum kaise hamare paas toh...
sia: pata hai mere bhai ke cloth hain abhi laati hoon warna aap dono ko thand lag jayegi
she bring the cloth and give to them.
yeh kya hai dhoti kurta (hum ne pehle kabhi pehne nahi)
sia : to kya hua ab pehan lo aap logon ko bhuk (hungry)lagi hogi aap change karo hum khana lagte hain.arjun and rathore change their clothes.sia and nandini put the food on dining table.
sia ask for them.nandini say i dont know.

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sia: ok ek kaam karte hain tum wo rathore g aur mein arjun g ko bulati hoon.they both go to the room's where they was changing their clothes.nandini knock the door where rathore was changing rathore open the door wearing dhoti kurta.nandini get shocked seeing rathore and just star laughing laudly.
rathore :kya hua mene dhoti ghalat baandh li kya???
nandini laughing and say nahi wo bs aap ko dekh ke hansi aagayi sorry wo i think aap ko bura laga she say him feeling guilty.
nahi nahi mujhe bura nahi jaga mein to ek dam aap ko dekh ke chonk gaya tha say rathore.on the other side sia was going to knock the door suddenly arjun open the door by himself.arjun ask tum yahaan??

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sia : haan wo mein aap ko dinner ke liye bulane aayi thi
arjun: haan mein taiyaar hoon chalo.he leave and go to dining table.sia from back was laughing without voice.nandini and rathore also come to dining table.sia serve food to arjun he say thanks.and nandini serve food to rathore rathore smile and say thankyou. they all four finish their food.sia tell them that this you both's room's it's too late you both go and sleep now.sia and nandini also go and sleep in their room...
to be continue...

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ok guys now it's time to do comment's
leave your feedback
Saba
Edited by saba.ali81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
hey it was :) nice dear juldi update krna huggiee
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
loved the story concept, sorry with everything havent felt at reading any FF or SS, only now checking both updates.
But do continue, it's very interesting👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
loved the concept
really miss riya
thnks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
wow awsome update
plz continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Really nyc
Loved d start
plz contiue asap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow yar great plss continue
Thx for pm
N plss send the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeypanjwani

Wow yar great plss continue

Thx for pm
N plss send the next part


sure dear i'll pm you first😆
thanx for liking my concept😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3
in etf headquarter

everyone was sitting on their chair's thinking deeply .

mujhe toh kuch samajh nehi aarahi wo riya hi thi na say shree confused.

haan yaar i'm also confused wohi chehra wohi smile wohi style say's chottu

lekin wo riya kaise ho sakti hia humne tho apne haathon se usska antim sanskar kiya tha phir ye sab kaise...said rathore

but sir aisa bhi tho hosakta hai na ke wo riya ki humshakal ho said shree

maan liya ke wo riya ki humshakal hai par wo yahaan humein mumbai mein hi kyun mili aur humse hi kyun...

suddenly rathore cell rang he pick the phone.after the phone call rathore tell to everyone that abhi sir ki call thi etf mein 5th place yaani riya ki jage koi aur aaraha hai.bs abhi aata hoga.

nahi chottu bhale usse iss team mein jaga mill jaye lekin hamare dil mein wo ri ki jaga kabhi nahi le sakta said shree.

ad from back a girl was comming in salwar kameez.saying hello sir can i come in she ask.

everyone turn back they get surprised and their eyes was just stairing on her

rathore: riya i mean sia tum yahaan??
sia arre aap log to wohi hain na jo kal haan mein aap logon ko kaise bhull sakti hoon.but aap log yahaan kya kar rahe hain???

shree:ab...ye hamara office hai ye rathore sir yahaan ke chief hain.

ohhh...to aap hain yahaan ke chief say riya smiling.

later in present day

sia ask for an extra drawer.

shree:yes wo wahaan neeche wala

sia go there and she opened riya's drawer she take out riya's pic and say to everyone ye to meri pic hai but ye yahaan kaise

arjun immidiatly snatch the pic of riya from sia's hand and put in his drawer saying kuch nahi ye tumhari nahi hai.aur ye drawer bhi tumhara nahi hai iss ke saath wala tumhara hai.sia felt bad when arjun snatch the pic from her hand and go out .

shree with chottu:arjun sir ki wo aadat abbhi tak nahi gayi.dekho sia ko bhi riya ki tarha hurt kar diya...

sia bring coffee for everyone .thanks ri then he stop and say sorry sia said shree.

they take a sip of coffee chottu ask sia yeh coffee tumne kahaan se sikhi

sia:pata nahi bs aise hi aaj dil chaha tho bana di kyun coffee achi nahi bani

rathore:nahi coffee achi bani hai

sia get confused that why the say me riya again.she ask them aap sab mujhe dekh kar riya kyun bulate hain aur wo photo aap ne kaha meri nahi hai mujhe tho kuch samajh nahi aaraha

samajh na hi aaye tho behtar hai said arjun rudely...

so sorry for too short update hope you can understand

btw to be continue...do comments

Saba

Edited by saba.ali81 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
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awww both chap2 & 3 were amazing...
Arjun and Rathore in dhoti🤣
but Chap3 was amazing can't wait to know how sia has become an ETF officer...
and if she's related to Riya...
thanks for the quick update and pm dear😊
Edited by funkylicious - 12 years ago

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