Ariya SS: Jab tak hai Jaan..(Epilogue) 29/10

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daisydee425

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

loved it
the letters were beatifully written though they were beautiful nd emotional
this part was heart touching
thnks for pm

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Hasana

@HasanaNowfer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

U have to continue plz plz plz

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Hooria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Aww Awesome Update
Couldnt stop grinning at Rathore's comments at the end
And shree-chotu duo awwrrr
Grinning Arjun blushing Riya Uff Cant Wait
So sweet how riya jus looked at arjun and instantly realised he read her letter tooo
Uff why did u stop??? Cant wait to read next
Update soon and pm me please
Thanksz x

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Nida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Whenever I see that you updated any part of your any story... A big grin appears on my face ... 😃

Even though after reading your previous update my smile turned into tears ... 😭 but still you rocked it as usual ... 👏

I just wish that somehow the CV's come across this wonderful work of yours and make everything happen just like in your SS ...😳

I swear I'm a biggg fan of your writing ... I want you to basically start writing a book on Ariya ... coz I know that you will have everything in it ... and won't disappoint us ... 👍🏼

okay now back to the update ... basically I just lack words to describe how brilliant the update was 👏👏👏

Love every single bit about it ... from the very first line till the ending I just loved it ...❤️❤️❤️

I was so engrossed in it that I had no clue what the hell is happening around me ...

Thanks for the pm n plzzz do keep updating

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: dee86
No words. BRILLIANT! 👏 So happy!! 🤗 🤗 Going to read again...

I love Ariya!!!

I LOVE Rathore!!

I love Chotu-Shree!!

Erm, I'm done... Sorry about that. Emotion mein beh gayi!

Continue soon, ok? Will be waiting!

Thanks for the PM

Haha.. no worries!! Keep reading! More coming up soon.. 😊

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: princess14
that was amazing! loved it and i'm so happy that you updated these back to back! its making this week go ten times faster waiting for saturday!

Thanks!! 😊😊 I wanted to finish it before Saturday.. But alas! tough luck. two chapters coming up today! 😊

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

hellos darlings... Back with the next Chapter..

Chapter 5

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Purva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Me First

yipeee

*EDITED

I m Bored of using d words like 'Awesum', 'wonderful' for ur updates

so dis tym me trying sumthing different

dis is Logic Gate representation ~(Bad)&&(Good) &&( awesum)...

i hope u can decode it

U presented a very beautiful relation'FRIENDSHIP' ...so amazingly

The following lines made me so happy

Waise Priya Bhabhi se kab milva raha hai?'

Rathod grinned, 'Jab tu Riya Bhabhi se milvayega!'

Arjun -rathore n Shree-Riya : Best friends forever

Lastly , i cud Literally hear my heart beats wen Arjun came closer to Ria n told her to discuss LETTER ...WOW👏

Edited by tani23 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#179

fabulous...brilliant...mind blowing...

Rathod was the best in this...kya dialogs tha...

"Woh kya hai na, mere best officer ka dhyaan iss samay case par nahi, kahin aur hai; toh bewajah risk kyun uthana?"

Arjun Rawte ka hi band bajaadiya!! WOW!

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Avantika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
fabulous...brilliant...mind blowing...
Rathod was the best in this...kya dialogs tha...
"Woh kya hai na, mere best officer ka dhyaan iss samay case par nahi, kahin aur hai; toh bewajah risk kyun uthana?"

Arjun Rawte ka hi band bajaadiya!! WOW!

Hey.. thanks! like they say, there's a sava sher for every sher!

Next Chap's up too.. Do read it.. 😊😊