SS: DIL HAIN TUMHARA chp 2 ,chp 3,chp 4,CHP 5 UPD - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

60

Views

27.4k

Users

29

Likes

234

Frequent Posters

Pumpkinn thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Hey that was amazing ...
Great start ...
Would love to read more ...
Update soon ...
sigmundfreud thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#12
CHAPTER 2

Half an hour has passed they are in the car.. still arjun has not uttered a single word from mouth.. riya is feeling restless of being sitting idle for so much time without talking.. she started looking at arjun frequently..
arjun - kuch kehna hain? ya phir bhookh lagi hain?
riya - nehi sir kuch nehi aise hi..
( arjun is wearing a blue kurta today.. he is looking so handsome in dis indian get up.. traditional dress really siuts him.. thinks riya)
riya - sir mein radio on kar sakti hoon?
arjun - hmm..
(she started teh radio with a remote.. and a RJ is saying.. )
hey guize dis is prateek and u r listening to ur favourite show.. aaj ka weather kitna romantic hain dosto.. aisi weather mein hi toh maaza aata hain apni humsafar k saath koi acchi si long drive pe nikalne ka.. to dosto der kis baat ki.. jaao aur..
riya changed the channel immediatly..
hi guize dis ia neelam.. kya aap apne byfrnd k saath iss romantic weather mein long drive pe nikle ho? toh yeh gaana aap k liye...
arjun and riya glanced at each other through the corner of their eyes and riya immediatly stopped the radio..
riya - sir aapko shaadiya pasnad hain?
arjun - kyon?
riya - nehi baas pooch rahi thi..mujhe itni der bina baat kiye baithne k aadat nehi hain na toh issi liye socha mein hi baat suru karti hoon.. toh bataye na sir..
arjun - pata nehi.. waise bhi riya chotu iss shaadi k liye thoda zaldbazzi kar raha hain.. i mean woh simran ko hardly 6 mahine se jaanta hain.. itni zaldi koi shaadi nehi karta..
riya - arre nehi kyon sir? ( she almost shouted)
arjun gave her a samjhe ya samjhaon look..
riya - nehi sir i mean.. when it is right it is right.. woh kehte hain na ki kabhi kabhi ek dusre ko jaane k liye kuch hi mulakat kafi hote hain aur kabhi kabhi toh bahut si mulakat e lag jaati hain..
( saying dis she glanced at arjun)
arjun - kaunsi ghatiya film k lines hain yeh riya?
riya - hum tum sir.. apne dekha hain? bahut acchi film hain sir.. usme na hero ki...
arjun - riya. yeh sab faltu film ki bakwaas story sunn ne ka mujhe koi saukh nehi hain. aur waise bhi itna itna excitement riya agar tum case solves karne mein lagayegi toh behtar hoga..
riya - ( kharosh kahika.. shree thik hi kehta hain iska kabhi kuch nehi ho sakta..)
suddenly riya shouted sir rukhie rukhie...
arjun - kya hua?
riya - sir aapko bhukh nehi lagi hain hain? woh dekhie ek dhaaba hain samne.. chaliye na..
arjun - tab ja maine poocha tab to mana kar diya..
riya - tab bhookh nehi lagi thi sir..
arjun - riyaaa... theek hain chaloaab..
they both get down from the car and make themselves comfortable in a seat..
riya - sir apne sahi kaha hum mein yeha nehi utar na chahiye tha
arjun - kyon?
riya - dekhie na yeh place kitna unhygenic hain..
arjun - toh tumahre liye highway pe mein 5 star hotel kaha se dhundu riya.. khana hain toh khao varna wait karo aur 1k ghanta..
riya - ( with a sad face nodded silently)
waiter came and took their order..
riya - mere liye sirf ek lassi aur pakora
arjun - abhi to kaha ki bhukh lagi hain.. aur sirf itna sa order..
riya - ( lowering her voice) sir yeha pe dekhie na mujhe to lagta hain i yeh log plates kabhi saaf hi nehi karte..
arjun smiled and said - theek hain jao mere liye bhi same order.. aur ek cutting chai..
waiter - bhai saab yeha pe butter chicken bahut accha hain madam k liye le aao?
arjun - jitna bola gaya hain utna karo.. madam ko kya chaiye aur kya nehi chaiye yeh tumhe sochne ki koi zarurat nehi hain.. samjhe ya samjhaon?
waiter left hurridly after arjun's sound scolding..
riya smiled at arjun's anger..
arjun - kya hua?
riya - kuch nehi sir..
after they has their lunch they again left for jaipur..
riya - jagah utne accha nehi tha par khana kafi aaccha tha na sir?
arjun - hmm..
riya - lekin sir apne to pakora khaya hi nehi.. sach mein bahut tasty tha..
arjun - riya .. thodi der k liye chup baith sakti ho plzz... kitbna bolti ho..
riya - ( sadly became silent)
arjun realised that suppose it was a little rude..
arjun - waise hum thodi der mein jaipur pauchne hi wale hain.. tum chotu ko ph karke baata do..
riya - okk sir bata dungi..
riya thinks.. waise shaadi mein maaza ayega hi par surwat kafi acchi huyi.. she started dialing chotu's number...


kaveriw2008 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#13
what is this yaar

pehle hi tum Riya to datate rehte ho...ab bichare waiter ko bhi nahi choda...bechara😭

aur waise bhi suhana mausam hai aur riya saath mein hai to thoda enjoy karo...

---------------------------------------------------------

hey this is really funny i like it
elle.. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Lol
I love d radio stations
Seriously.. i also cant sit quite ffor long .. :p
Arjun riya cute nok jhok loved it
Sabina_Ansari thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Riya nd her hygeine..
I hope their car breaks down nd they spnd sum time togethr alone...
Mellifluous thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#16
oh no ji hope they dont reach to jaipur so early..
i mean it would be good if there is some twist in their way..lovely
sigmundfreud thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sabina_Ansari

Riya nd her hygeine..
I hope their car breaks down nd they spnd sum time togethr alone...


ha ha i was thinking the same.. about this plot..
Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Gr8 story so far

Loved it

Add me to ur pm list
mushiroxx thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#19
loved it riya is so cute...❤️ n that radio part was hilarious...loving ariya even more...arjun scolding that waiter...😆
cant wait fro shadi sequence...that would be interesting to watch...😃

n u didn't pm ur update...😳
sajanFan thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#20
lovely.👏 .. the Cvs should include this scene in their future episodes...


loved it.. Pls include me in your PM when u update the next part

Related Topics

Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

1 months ago

Ariya OS: Daant Ka Dard, Dil Ka Raaz

Daant Ka Dard, Dil Ka Raaz The clock ticked 9:17 AM at the ETF office in Mumbai. The usual clatter of footsteps, computer keys, and Shree’s...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

4 months ago

ETF OS: Dil Se Dastarkhwan

Dil Se Dastarkhwan ETF Headquarters was never this lively. The usually grim and tension-filled atmosphere, laden with the scent of burnt coffee...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".