SS: DIL HAIN TUMHARA chp 2 ,chp 3,chp 4,CHP 5 UPD

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

the phone is ringing continously in the bed... but riya is not getting time to pick it up.. she is damn busy in packing all the things within such a short notice..
riya - oh god.. yeh chotu bhi na mein ph utha nehi rahi hoon iska matlab usse samajna chahiye na dat i am busy.. aab kya kya karu mein.. maine apna lehenga bhi abhi tak pack nehi kiya..
(finally she hastled on to the phone and picked it up..)
chotu - kya yaar riya... kabse ph kar rahi hoon utha kyon nehi rahi hain? kaan mein ruyi daal k baithi hain kya?
riya - tu chup kar... sab kuch theek se pack karke phir niklungi na ghar se.. agar woha ja k pata chala ki kuch chut gaya hain toh mein kya karungi..
chotu - uff!! tum ladhkiyan bhi na... hameesha sachne sawarne k elava kuch aur soojta hi nehi.. simarn ka bhi yeha pe yehi haal hain.. kaunsa lehenga pehnu, kaunsi jewllery pehnu.. uff.. dimag ka dahi kar diya usne..
riya - accha?? abhi se biwi ki.. sry sry.. hole wali biwi ki burai karne lag gayi.. rukh pauchne de mujhe jaipur.. phir sikayat karungi simran se teri.. baare aaye dulhe raaja.. shaadi ho raha hain tera.. ab toh sudhar ja..
chotu - accha theek hain.. chal abhi jhagra bandh kar aur zladi se nikal na.. jaipur pauchne mein bhi toh time lagega tujhe.. rathore sir aur shree toh kab ka aa gaye.. sirf tu aur tera arjun sir hi reh gaye hain..
riya - "mera arjun sir" ? woh kharosh mera arjun sir kabse baan gaya chotu? aur waise bhi tujhe kisne kaha tha shaadi ka venue itna dur rakhne ko?
chotu - arre tujhe to pata hi hain simran ka pura khandan yeha hain aur uske ghar wale chaate hain ki shaadi yehi se ho..
riya - hmm.. 😊 waise teri love story bhi kamal ki hain chotu.. kaha departmental store mein usse line marta tha.. akhno akhno mein baat hota tha.. aur aaj dekha shaadi k mandap tak pauch gaya..
chotu - accha theek hain.. ( sarmake) aab zyada baatein mat kar zaldi se nikal aab.. tune taxi book kiya tha na?
riya - ayy hayy.. kaise sarma gaya dekho.. chal theek hain baki ki khichayi woha aa k karungi.. ha main baas nikal hi rahi hoon.. bye..
chotu - okk bye.. jaldi aana..
riya cut the phone and quickly wore her red salwar kameez.. applied a light make up and took her dupatta..
riya - ummm.. aur kuch reh to nehi gaya? mehendi, sangeet, shaadi mein pehnen k k lie saare kapre rakh liya.. make up kit, brushes.. ya okk done.. aab nikalti hoon varna pauch te pauchte late ho jayungi..
she locked her door and took the trolly suitcase and came downstairs.. but as soon as she reached the ground floor she got awestruck.. wat? is that arjun sir? wat is he doing here with the car? did'nt he left for the wedding?
downstairs arjun was waiting outside the car.. he was standing sliding the door of the car and having his cutting chai..
riya - sir... aap yeha?? aab gaye nehi?
arjun - nehi maine socha hume ek hi jagah to jaana hain so y waste time? chalo aao gari mein baitho..
riya - sir.. nehi maine taxi mangayi hain.. aap jaiye
arjun - riya mujhe ek hi baat baar baar daurane ki aadat nehi hain.. gari mein baitho.. waise agar tum yeha pe aur 1k ghanta waste karna chaate ho iss bahyesh mein ki mein gari mein baithu ya nehi.. to saukh se.. phir yeh bhi samaj lena hume pauchte pauchte raat ho jayegi..
riya did'nt argue anymore.. she silently took the suitcase at the back of the car.. arjun came there and put the suitcase on the back of the car..
arjun - aab chale?
riya silently moved toward the front seat and sat in the car.. then arjun came and started the car...



should i continue? plzz give ur feedback..
Edited by sigmundfreud - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm. Arjun and Riya going for a drive
Please continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohhh

hamare chotu ki shadi ho rahi hai...finally use departmental wali ladki mil hi gayi...

jaipur thoda door to hai ...lekin arjun aur riya saath mein to safar jaroor interesting hoga

love ur ss ...waiting ur ss update...and yes me to ur pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow chotu ki shaadi with his departmental simran
arjun and riya on a long drive. just superb
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love love love it...riya n arjun n long-drive... n chotu's shadi...interesting...pm me ur update dear...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Plz continue & PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh ho m getting so exited...arjun & riya is on long drive..
jaroor kuch accha hone wala hai..continue soon.
please add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this going to be interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ya sure u shud Its really nice...😊

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