SS: Love VS Death : ch3 pg10 sep20 NEW!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: haruhi26
yep you are right, was expecting a confession from Arjun...
But dont worry😉
Even without the confession, your SS was very beautiful and awesome😊

i knew it! well, thanks aloott that you liked it even without a confession😃

thanks😳

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Tyro
that was indeed a lovely end...

thanks...😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sowmyap03
Very nicely written...

Confession was something everyone would expect... but this end was more suitable... u can add epilogue...

thanks aloottt😳 ohh yes i can and i even thought about it but then i thought against it... i wanted to leave it at the simple smile...😃

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: kgmu86
no this was not an end but the beginning pls continue

aww i understand and i am really happy to know that you want me to continue.. but i will write more on them ⭐️but i need to finish it here on arjuns' smile, thanks alot😳

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_visu
its amazing mind blowing grate superb ... sorry dear did not commented on the first 2 but they all are really good the story u wrote somewhere i find it as could be ARYA's story on-screen just my opinion

aww so many words...😃 i too thought of it the same way,,, i too thought that it could be a possibility of it being onscreen too...

thanks..😳

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: shah10
nice,
love it

thanks😳

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: _mahi_
wow awesome and superb dear!!👏 a fabulous end to a heart touching story😳 do continue to write more pieces of work!😃

aww thankyou! surely will write more...😳

thanks😳

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: MistiofMistz
very nice

thanks😳

Quote

MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: funkylicious
Loved the way Rathore explains Arjun...loved it... awesome ending... confession is always not necessary but Realisation is definitely needed😃 Because you wont confess until you realise it right?
So, I basically loved the ending❤️

thank you so much...i am glad someone said that, that confession is not always necessary👏...wow thanks for that😉