MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 26

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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I loved every stories like seriously they r so damn good thats it really hard to choose 2 or 3..❤😩🤌🏻

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

I love each one of them, love your style of writing, will have to revisit them to pick a favorite or two:)

Scene: Anu & Anuj meet in his apartment before their wedding. No one else is home, they get some time for themselves before others arrive. Earlier, he had sent in flowers for her with a love note.❤️

I did not like the scene in the kitchen or her serving tea and blushing. It was just unbearable. 😕 So, thought of this alternative.😳

She is in the kitchen, he comes in behind her and hugs, resting his chin on her shoulders. She’s happy that he’s here before everyone else and tilts her head towards his.😳❤️

Anu: aap aa gaye….. baithiye, mein mein.. 2 minute mein chai leke aati hoon…🤗

Anuj: pecks on her cheeks and leaves😳

Minutes later, she hands him tea. He asks her…

Anuj: "how was your day?"

Anu: "Accha tha… ghar ka kaam khatam karke mein… yada yada…. yada…"aap batayiye, aap ka din kaisa tha?"😳

Anuj: "It was good, infact meeting achchi thi, sabko mere presentation bahut achcha laga… aur … " he pauses and says… "mera din achcha raha kyunki, mein ne din ka shuruvaat tumhare haath ke chai se kiya tha" 😳

Anu: "ek baat bolu…? Aap mera mazaak toh nahi udaayenge?"😳

Anuj: chuckles and say… "nahi, kaho…"

Anu: "Mein ne aap ko bohot bohot bohot miss kya… aapka “good morning” voice message ....saara din sunti rahi.😳😳❤️

Anuj: "itna miss kiya toh mujhe phone kar deti…. Ya lunch pe milne aa sakti thi.."🤔

Anu: excitely continues... "aur jaante hai mein ne kya kiya?... roz jo alarm lagati hoon apni phone pe… usska ringtone aapka “good morning” wala voice message kar diya.*** taaki roz subah sabse pehle aapki awaaz sunoo .😉😳

Anuj: impressed.🤗 He says.."shadi ke baad usski bhi zaroorat nahi padegi… kyunki …" he stops not wanting to make her uncomfortable.

Places the now empty tea cup on the table, puts his feet up relaxes back and.....

Anuj: takes her hands in his and rubs his fingers over them. "Anu! Pata hai? Agar mere mummy papa aaj zinda hote, toh woh kitna khush hote…".

Anu: is caught off guard as she has never heard him talk about his parents and listens intently.

Anuj: GK kehte hai, ki mein bilkul mere papa pa gaya hoon. Mein unka apna khoon nahi hoon, phir bhi mein unki parchayi hoon❤️

"Angregi mein isse – nature vs nurture kehte hai…. Aaj mein jo bhi hoon, ye sab mere mummy papa ke sanskaar aur pyaar ki parchayi hai, unki parvarish ka nateeja hai" ❤️❤️❤️

Anu: feels overwhelmed, looks at him with pride and nods her head contently.

Anuj: "mein bilkul mere papa jaisa banna chahta hoon….. simple life, izzat ki kamai, chain ki zandagi….."

Anu: scoots closer, curls her arms in the nook of his elbow, rests her head on his shoulders and says …. “aur chota sa parivaar……. Hamara parivaar…"😳

Anuj: smiles and says… "hamara parivaar"

Anu: "mere aur aapka ….parivaar"😳❤️

Anuj: Bends his head to meet hers, brings her hands to his lips and chirps a kiss.😉😳❤️

"Parivaar! Ye kitna chota sa shabd hain na? par sab ke zindagi mein yeh chota sa word kitna important hota hai."🤗continues..

"Hamare parivaar mein hum dono kaafi hai... GK hai, mukku hai….Par mein bhi baap hone ka ehsaas ko mehsoos karna chahta hoon."

Anu: overwhelmed hearing his words, tightens her hold in his arms and manages to mouth words “ jaanti hoon”😳

Anuj: "You know…starting a family … ye decision hum dono ka hona chahiye. Sirf mera nahi. Most importantly tumhara. Kunki zyaada tar pain & stress toh maa ko hi jhelna padta hai...."😳🤗

Anu: is touched by his care and concern. She says… “ ek baat kahoon?" Without waiting for his response, she continues.. "Shadi ke baad kyun na hum bachcha godh le?" 😳❤️

"Zaroori nahi hai, ki bachcha hamara hi khoon ho… hum bachche ko utna hi pyaar denge jaise aapko mila, jaise mein apne bachchon se…" 😳

Anuj: is happy … he opens his arms & says..“come here.....“🤗

Anu: gets up and goes near him, he makes room for her in the single seater sofa. 😉 She obliges and sits with barely any room, snuggled tightly against him.😳

She nuzzles on his shoulders, and embraces him. He closes his arms tightening the grip around her.🤗🤗

Anuj: "Maa banne ke baad…." Anu corrects him… "Phir se maa banne ke baad..."

He repeats..”phir se maa banne ke baad, tum sirf maa banke reh jaao, yeh mein hone nahi doonga”

"Poori kohish karoonga ke tumhari har sapna poora ho… tumhe khudki ek pechaan banani hogi…"❤️

Anu: "pata hai?…… aapko jitna pyaar karoon, kam lagta hai...."❤️

Anuj: chuckles and says….. haan, bahut kam lagta hai,… isska bharpayi karna abhi se shuru kardo...." places his lips on hers, seeping into eternal bliss😉😳❤️🤗

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***Was it you Sneha, who had mentioned about using his VM as your alarm? 😆I took that line and used it here. So, credit goes to you!👍🏼

Based on my experience, I have noticed that a gentleman never broaches the subject of carnal desires, starting a family on their own. He will certainly carry forward the conversation once the lady initiates it.Thoughts?

Anyways, aisa hota toh…? Drop in your comment to let me know.

Btw, I just realized that this is drabble nugget #26… the magical number that AK's love life is stuck at!! 🤣

You are 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 such a simple yet meaningful conversation. Maybe BV needs to watch more mature stuff and not movies like Mela. Ugh.

But youuuuuuuuu.💜💜💜

This was fantastic.

I have finally made peace , i now believe MaAn is best enjoyed in FF rather than the episode.

I choose to love Anuj and Anu in our fantastic FF creators.

You have done a splendid job. I truly enjoyed all the nuggets !

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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So beautiful 😍😍

I liked the first 2 mins of the chai scene but the shah house convo was 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

And the kitchen scene was really off today too..

I wishhhhh this had happeneddddd instead.. atleast half of this.. you write so wonderfully❤❤❤

This is such a bliss to read! Have always wondered whom Anuj idealizes, whose standard he wants to attain... Him talking about his parents to her should be very significant in their relationship. And them planning a fam, this is exactly what normal couples do... Wish the writers get half close to your takes on MaAn.

Woow...this a beautiful alternative 😍😍😍

Honestly even i was not much satisfied with the kitchen scene, i wanted anuj to hug anu from behind and thanks to youu! You did that.. this conversation was really awesome, the adoption thing, everything 🥰🥰

Originally posted by: ektag06

You are 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡 such a simple yet meaningful conversation. Maybe BV needs to watch more mature stuff and not movies like Mela. Ugh.

But youuuuuuuuu.💜💜💜

That's exactly what i said.. i don't think we can expect more from someone who enjoys that style of entertainment!