Socha Na Tha |MaAn SS| updated 23.02 | Page 4 &5 - Page 5

Loved it. Tag nahi kiya yaar.

"ab jaisa hu tumhara hu"

I like the inclusion of dialogues from the show.

Aur kya ab jo ittu sa Seena dekh ke aahein bhartein the hum aur usi mein saare "feels" le lete the, aap woh bhi nahi hone deingi? Maana Seena aapka hai, humein taadne toh do behen. Sharing is caring.

Love love love reading this ff. I had a big smile on my face while reading all the parts. Simply fabulous. Seems like I have all the scenes rolling in my head like a movie. Such simplicity yet truly romantic and realistic. I just want to keep reading more and more.

Your very talented and I sure hope you share more of your version of our beloved MaAn with your creativity. Thank you for sharing this!

Bahut Sundar Likha hai Hina....Both part filler wala bhi badiya hai.

Proposals ki barsaat ho rahi hai..Glad your Anu already said yes to be Mrs Anupama Anuj Kapadia. Serial me to bahut build up karke ladki se haan bulwaayenge...

Your latest part is so in sync with the current track that I felt connected.

OS ke bharose hi ham chal rahe hai and you makes it more sensual with your writing skills. Lovely❤️

serial me to armaan poore nahi hone hai... Thanks for sharing ....Excited for next part...

Aur laao aur laao and OS likhna bilkul bhi band mat karna. ok?

Bhavna, you are simply writing episodes after episodes here.. and I'm loving them all. But a request for Anuj to keep those 3 buttons open, bandh mat karvao yaar, itna to tum kar hi sakti ho.

the hug scene, I am sure Anuj's reaction will be just like that in the show, I had a big smile on my face imagining everything u wrote..keep writing yaar, I love it

This was fab man , loved it .....So cute and intense and so totally believable in our Maan world ❤️👏

Last scene mein kya mast troll kiya hai , hum sabko inc urself !! Talent hai 😉😃...Kaash yeh sare scene show mein aa jayein , esp the shower sneak peak ...TRP khud sambhal jayegi

Cont writing girl ....🤗

Originally posted by: Koms9

We know it bhavna, but then rest of the forum would have found out what your real id is here. So, its okay.

Dude if hinz turns out to be Bhavna then I'll be so pissed! because saala itna din se we've been giving such good content phir bhi itna terrible storyline!

Originally posted by: Miniwatch

Dude if hinz turns out to be Bhavna then I'll be so pissed! because saala itna din se we've been giving such good content phir bhi itna terrible storyline!

Hina! I love this, it's so cute! I'm so happy to see him express desire 😻

As always, such a lovely story.

Originally posted by: Koms9

Hina ki bhi kuch maryada hai jo woh cross nahi kar sakti

Yeh Hina ko shayad nahi pata 🤣

Arey HIna, I need to change my username. Ever since I changed it, you have forgotten to tag me everywhere. Hum hi bina bullae mehmaan ki taarah har jagah ajate hai.🤣

On the OS, this part was super sweet and cheeky. Though, I felt you were Anu in this scenario with all the haaq on Anuj she was commanding about the seena. 🤣

But yaar, they could have kissed to seal the proposal, rather than Anu using her hand. 😭 Bechare Anuj, he will get blue... something 😆