Ek Alag Chai Pe Charcha - Part 3b, Page 10, 5-2 - Page 8

Originally posted by: EnigmaticSoul

Hi Komal!

I absolutely loved it! You pinpointed some major loopholes in the actual show. I wish makers were as sane as us viewers! Yeh padh ke dil shaant ho gaya mera jo kayi dino se bechain tha.. Sachhi ! why can't we get this one on one conversation in the show? It is so important to the character development of these two!! Instead, they keep sidetracking things or keep going in circles and come up with bizarre things to fill the episode time slot...!

Thank you so much for writing this one!

Love,

Riddhi❤️

Thanks Riddhi

Glad you liked you.

I know, we all have same thoughts but cant help it.

I tell myself its ITV and TRP game, not a good novel, so keep realistic expectations.

Hope, you like the last part as well.

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Komal, you have highlighted some very valid and logical points. I'm glad to see Anuj taking stock of his life and having an objective look at where Anupama is in hers.

In particular, I liked you pointing out the relevance in Anu's life of her birth mother and brother. For someone who is constantly going on about the importance of parents, her disconnect with her mother is strange. I can understand her parents in law have come to mean an awful lot to her, but why should it be shown to be at the cost of her relationship with her mother.

Coming to Vanraj, there is a strange paradox in the way she talks to him and the way she talks about him to Anuj. It's one thing trying to see the best in people, but it's also true that there's none as blind as those who won't see.

Anuj saying he's leaving will hopefully bring things to a head for Anupama. Up until now he's always been there for her and no doubt she's come to take that for granted. Maybe this will help remove some blinkers.

Thanks Ruchi.

I too wonder, why makers miss these points, which we as viewers see so clearly. Probably there goals and priorities are different than ours.

In last part, i have tried my best to show Anuj balancing the two most important people in his life. Not expecting show to do it anything like that at least here i addressed the way i feel Anuj should.

Let me know, your thoughts.

Originally posted by: Km181

Thank you Komal... have added your point of achcha baap, subtly tho.. Yaar Anuj hai har cheez style se karge, jitni zaroorat ho utna hi.

Originally posted by: tanu90

Hi Komal!

Thanks for the tag!🤗 I absolutely loved it! Tumhara Anuj toh chhaa gaya! 👏Wow! The history exam flashback was so realistic! 👍🏼I love the way he uses examples to make his point. The whole set up in the dark balcony was wonderful! Also the way he asked about Anupama's mom and Bhavesh. Anupama ne jab do din me hi apne liye rented house dhundna shuru kiya tha na tab uski mummy ke liye bohot bura lag raha tha mujhe. I'm so glad you brought it up!👏 Can't wait to read more! Please don't end your story so soon my dear. Abhi toh bohot sare maslein hain jinke bare me Anupama ko agar koi samjha sakta hai toh woh Anuj hi hai! Looking forward to the next update.

Love,

Noorie

hi Noorie

Glad you liked it.

This serial is full of kaands, sare maslein cover karti rahi to ye OS kabhi khatam hi na ho...

I tried to cover few important ones, hope you like it and please share your thoughts.

Love,

Komal

Originally posted by: Zica04

This is the real script that is in need. Kya ek ek topic ko chunn ke you have put it so subtly in Anuj style. I can connect all the dots and can see where this is headed byt I am eagerly waiting to see where you take it and how. Amazing job ❤😃🤗

Thank you, feels good when reader can connect the dots, get sense of story and connect to it. ❤️

Originally posted by: Pks20

This charcha is long overdue. So glad you articulated it into words and have written this beautiful OS 💕

Both Anuj and Anupamaa are mature individuals, they have seen life and have its experience and therefore should be able to have a meaningful deep conversation. So glad Anuj is asking Anupamaa the questions that have been frustrating us as fans. What is with her behaviour at times and why does she do certain things?!
loved the metaphor of the old and new clothes in Anuj’s wardrobe….. to make space for the new we need to get rid of the old.
Looking forward to the next part x

Thanks for the feedback. Glad, before i even spell out, as readers you are able to get the metaphor. Hope you like the next update too.

Originally posted by: grace2021

Beautiful Komal.

All points you have raised are missing in serial. And we feel disconnect because of that.

You write Beautifully keeping the flow of conversation intact. Right decision from AK to go back.

Thanks for the tag and Iam looking forward for the next part.❤️

Thank You for the feedback.

I know, the disconnect we all feel. Lets get some sukoon from OS, at least ye humare haath main hai.

Originally posted by: arya212002

Komal, it’s so well written and very relevant points. 👏👏👏

I loved how you connected all the conversations…Anuj and Anu being mature individuals need this type of conversations than the cringe romance that they are currently showing. Be Anuj highlighting the importance of transparency between partners thru his childhood instance or he implying to Anu for giving importance of birth mother than Shahs and even her attachment to V - loved how every issue is been addressed.

Wonderfully penned dear ❤️❤️

Arya, so glad you liked it.. Keep sharing your feedbacks dear..🤗

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Ok...mujhe hasi aa rahi hai. Anu and vanar ki Negativity getting into us😆

Are you trying to break up maan😆

Nice write up though👏

Show mein mahan murti anu se koi sawaal jawaab karega nahi kam se kam yaha to use do char baatein sunni padengi😆

Continue soon

Honestly, initially i had no plans on separation or confession..

I just wrote because of the disconnect.. Seeing the current track, i changed my mind at last moment today. Read the last update and let me know your thoughts.