Ek Alag Chai Pe Charcha - Part 3b, Page 10, 5-2 - Page 2

Brilliant!! 👍👏👏🤗 I would really love to see this. All valid points 👍👌

Komal, this felt so good...

mann halka ho gaya yaar,

can't wait for the next, aag laga de!

I like it well yeh hi sahi hai

komal this is brilliant yr sach itna accha laga jaise dil ko thandak mil gayi tujhe to waise jyada mili hogi kyunki tune to likha h but jo likha h kya khoob likha h kaash aisa koi scene show mein mil jata but i know aisa kuch nahi hoga but anupama actually deserves it use ab decision lena hi hoga ki wo kya chahti h aur anuj ko bhi action mein aana hi hoga

thanks for writing this yr🤗

Komal yaar tujh par itna pyaar aa raha hai na kasam se ❤️

I mean aisa lag raha ki mere andar anupama ko le kar jitni nafrat bhari pari hai tu ne pen down kar diya

Anupama deserves this.Period.

A small request bro...plzz us mukku ko bhi Anuj ki importance realise Kara...let these two women cry for him and rot with vanraaj🤢

Felt much after reading it, this is much needed in the show. thanks for writing it. Waiting for next update. Anuj will maintain distance from anupama , will not give her attention then She might value him.

Originally posted by: Km181

Disclaimer: Not for faint hearted. If you are looking for Anu's confession or Aurat wale magic, this is not the OS you are looking for. This one's hard core, nail hitting, practical, eye-opener for the brave hearts only.

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Anu enters Anuj bedroom and sees Anuj with Mukku having a serious discussion. Seeing Anu both stops talking and Mukku leaves the room. Mukku is very silent this time, unlike her usual bubbly self.

Mukku: Good night, Anupama

Anupama is shocked, no bhabhi, no Anu. She has never called her by Anupama. However, before Anu can ask her anything Mukku leaves the room. Anu goes towards Anuj he is sitting on the bed.

Anu: Mukku ko kya hua, aise udaas si chali gayi

Anuj: Tumhe aisa laga kya, nahi aisa to kuch nahi hai

Anu: par wo mujhe

Anuj: wo sab chodo Anu, meri help karo na, dekho designer ne pura new collection bheja hai, ise wardrobe main rakhne main help kar do meri

Anu: Aap bhi na, bilkul bache hai, chaliye main help karti hu

Anupama opens the wardrobe, to see it jam-packed and absolutely no space any new clothes. However, most of the clothes seem old, faded and torn.

Anu: ye kya hai Anuj, is main saans lene ki bhi jagah nahi hai

Anuj: pata hai, mujhe ye new clothes, is wardrobe main hi rakhne hai

Anu: aise kaise ho sakta hai, jagah kaha hai.. par ap ye bataye mujhe itne purane kapde yaha kyu pade hai, kuch to phat hi gaye hai

Anuj: haan, ye bahut purane kapde hai, to ab kaise pehne, salo purna hai

Anu: to inhe bahar nikale na, jab tak purana bahar nahi karenge, naye ko jagah kaise milegi. Aur jagah ho bhi to, naye, purane saath main hone so, naye kapde bhi purane lagte hai.

Anuj: ye baat tumne sahi kahi, jab purana nahi jayega, naya kaise aayega.

Anuj asks her to leave it for now, he will sort them out in morning. He asked her if she would join him for a cup of tea in balcony. He would love to have her companionship tonight. Anu happily agreed and went to kitchen to prepare tea.

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Anuj: kitni sundar raat hai, ek selfie le le

Anu: haan zaroor

Anuj comes closer to Anu with one hand in front holding mobile and brings other around Anu and places on her shoulder. Shocked, Anu suddenly slightly moves away. Anuj understands she doesn't like their physical proximity and hence moved away.

Anuj: kya hua

Anu: kuch nahi, aise lete hai na, ye achcha lagega

Anuj, shrugs nonchalantly and clicks the photo.

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Anuj: mujhe tume ek bahut zaroori baat batani hai Anupama

Anu: haan b b bo..

Anu realises that first Mukku and now Anuj is calling her as Anupama, not Anu. She also realises that today Anuj is standing bit far from her. The distance he used to keep when they had first met; distance which has been slowly reducing and with her stay in his house had almost vanished. Concerned, she tries to look into Anuj's eye. This time, it seems his eyes are looking at something far, the eyes which used to look only at her; have refused to even acknowledge her presence.

Anu: kuch hua hai kya, please boliye. Sab thik hai, Mukku thik hai, kya mr Shah ne kuch kiya, aap please boliye. Aap mujh se share kar sakte hai, agar koi mushkil hai to boliye, hum mil kar uska hal nikalenge

Anuj: hum ya tum akele hal nikalogi. meri chodo, tum bolo. koi problem hai, jo tum mujh se share karna chahti ho

Anu: nahi Anuj aisa nahi hai, agar kuch hoga to main sab se pehle aap ko bataungi. Mujhe chinta ho rahi hai, kuch to hai, please boliye.

Anuj: koi badi baat nahi hai, agle hafte main US wapas jaa raha hu. Tum jab tak chaho is ghar main reh sakti ho. mujhe achcha lagega, agar tum yaha rahogi. koi zabardasti nahi hai, jab tak tumhara man kare, warna chod dena.

Anu: Anuj, ye aap kya bol rahe hai, aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai. Aap aise mujhe chod ke kaise ja sakte hai. main main wo.... humara project, kitni auratoon ki udaan judi hai us se, aap aisa kaise kar sakte.. nahi Anuj aap nahi ja sakte

Anuj (with a half hearted broken smile): hmm bas itni si baat, main restaurant business ka pura control tumhe de dunga, finance dept ko bhi instructions honge, paise ki koi problem nahi hogi. maine sab plan kar diya hai

Anu: restaurant ki baat nahi hai, aap mujhe aise chod ke kaise jaa sakte hai. main akeli reh jaungi, aap kahi nahi jayenge, suna aap ne aap kahi nahi jayenga

Anuj: mujhe maaf kar do Anupama, par mujhe jana hoga. ye bahut zaroori hai tumhare liye, mere liye, mukku ke liye, hum sab ke liye.

Anu pulls his hand and keeps it on her head: Anuj, aap ko meri kasam, mujhe sach janna hai, aap kyu jaa rahe, aap mujhe aise adhe raste pe akela nahi chod sakte.

Anuj pulls his hand away, with tears in his eyes: Akela to main hu Anupama, 26 saal pehle bhi tha aur Aaj bhi wahi khada hu, ek dum akela. Sach to ye hai, ki tum 26 saal pehle bhi Vanraj ki thi aur aaj bhi uski ho. tumhari zindagi main mere liye kabhi koi jagah thi hi nahi

Anu: Anuj ye aap kya bol rahe hai, aap jante hai Mr Shah se mera divorce ho chuka hai aur main main aapse p p ...

Anuj: bas Anupama, main tumhe tum se achchi tarah janta hu, tumhare dil main kya hota hai, juban pe kya, mujhe sab pata hai. Sach ye hai ki, bhale hi Mr Shah aur tumhara divorce hua ho, tum us se kabhi alag nahi ho payi. Wo rishta tut ke bhi kabhi nahi tuta. Aaj bhi tumhare liye sabse pehle Vanraj hai, tum sabse pehle uske bare main sochti ho

Anu: Nahi, Mr Shah sirf mere bacho ke pita hai aur kuch nahi

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Anuj: shayad tum thik keh rahi hai, ye sab chodo, aao main tumhe kuch dikhata hu. main SM browse kar raha tha aur mujhe Pakhi ki ek bahut achchi selfie dikhi

Anu: achcha, mujhe bhi dikhaiye

Anuj shows her the selfie which Pakhi clicked when Kavya had first got job in AK companies. The selfie was Anu and Vanraj with Pakhi in the middle; Vanrajs one hand is comfortably resting on Anu's shoulder. Anu smiles happily and gets nostalgic thinking about her sweetudi..

Anuj: kitni pyaar selfie hai na

Anu: haan meri sweetudi, us din udaas thi, phir maine aur Mr Shah ni milkar use manaya tha, kitni pyaar lag rahi hai meri sweetudi. haina

Anuj: Haan, wo to hai, waise ye photo kab ki hai shayad tumhare divorce se pehle ki hai. hai na.

Anu: are nahi, ye divorce ke bad ki hai, yaah hai jis din aap ne Kavya ko job diya tha, bas us din ki hai.

Anuj: oh achcha, ab main samjha. achchi hai, bahut achchi hai

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Anu: Anuj, sach sach bataye aap america kyu jana chahte hai. aur Mukku aap is waqt use kaise akela chod sakte hai.

Anuj: akela kaha Mr Shah honge na uske saath. main galat tha, tumne sahi kaha tha Mr Shah ghatiya aadmi nahi hai.

Anu: par aap apni zimedari se aise kaise bhag sakte hai. Aap ko Mukku ke saath hone chahiye, kal ko kuch hua to

Anuj: saaf saaf kaho Anu, tum kya kehna chahti ho. kya aise koi baat hai jo main nahi janta, jo tum mujhe batana chahti ho

Anu: nahi, mujhe bas itna lagta hai ki iss waqt aap ko Mukku ke saath hona chahiye. Wada kariye ab aap dubara jaane ki baat nahi karega

Anuj: main ye wada nahi kar sakta, mujhe jana hi hoga

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This is part 1, is raat ki abhi subah nahi huyi, soon will follow up with part 2. please share your feedback.

Very nice job km..❤️

Waise ye sab padhna mera area of interest nahi hai par agar anupama ki watt lag rahi ho or anuj ka bhala ho raha ho to ye bhi accha hai😆

Thanks..

Hi Komal!

First of all thanks for the message! I loved the OS! Mindblowing! Just what Anupama needs at the moment! I loved how you used the cupboard stacked with old torn clothes as an example! I am excited for the second part. Do continue soon.

Love,

Noorie

Originally posted by: arya212002

Perfecto 👏👏 … ek hum hard hitting conversation. Very much needed from Anuj to Anu taaki uski buddhi mein ghuse. Would love to see such real conv between them in the show.

Waise tu ne apne mann ki bhadaas partly likh liya toh thoda light toh feel kar rahi hogi na 🤣🤣

Bilkul.. aur kya.. timing dekh le mere OS ke hamesha... 🤣

I believe in Self Care.. to khud ke liye likh di.. if others like too, brownie points for me 🤪