Ek Alag Chai Pe Charcha - Part 3b, Page 10, 5-2 - Page 5

Absolutely crisp writing.. very "sateek" stuff from Anuj.

But u r right ...not for the faint hearted. My heart broke a little for Anu also but mostly for Anuj. This is necessary but also almost cruel coming from such a gentleman and gentle man who treats his lady like Dresden china.

Waiting for the next part...

Love it! Such an honest conversation ❤️

Thank you for tagging me!

Beautifully written!!

Please continue soon

This is the real script that is in need. Kya ek ek topic ko chunn ke you have put it so subtly in Anuj style. I can connect all the dots and can see where this is headed byt I am eagerly waiting to see where you take it and how. Amazing job ❤😃🤗

This charcha is long overdue. So glad you articulated it into words and have written this beautiful OS 💕

Both Anuj and Anupamaa are mature individuals, they have seen life and have its experience and therefore should be able to have a meaningful deep conversation. So glad Anuj is asking Anupamaa the questions that have been frustrating us as fans. What is with her behaviour at times and why does she do certain things?!
loved the metaphor of the old and new clothes in Anuj’s wardrobe….. to make space for the new we need to get rid of the old.
Looking forward to the next part x

Beautiful Komal.

All points you have raised are missing in serial. And we feel disconnect because of that.

You write Beautifully keeping the flow of conversation intact. Right decision from AK to go back.

Thanks for the tag and Iam looking forward for the next part.❤️

Komal, it’s so well written and very relevant points. 👏👏👏

I loved how you connected all the conversations…Anuj and Anu being mature individuals need this type of conversations than the cringe romance that they are currently showing. Be Anuj highlighting the importance of transparency between partners thru his childhood instance or he implying to Anu for giving importance of birth mother than Shahs and even her attachment to V - loved how every issue is been addressed.

Wonderfully penned dear ❤️❤️

Ok...mujhe hasi aa rahi hai. Anu and vanar ki Negativity getting into us😆

Are you trying to break up maan😆

Nice write up though👏

Show mein mahan murti anu se koi sawaal jawaab karega nahi kam se kam yaha to use do char baatein sunni padengi😆

Continue soon

Here comes next part 3a. I have updated Part 2, with one minor edit " Maa-beti ka ek rishta us ghar se bhi hai, aur ek rishta is ghar se bhi hai. " Here Anuj meant Maa-Anu and then Anu-Pakhi, he didnt meant Baa as her mother. In this part, he will make her understand Baa-Bapuji relationship with her.

Part 1 Link

Part 2 Link

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Anuj: Pakhi ka ab mood kaisa hai, matlab tumne us US jane se mana kiya tha.

Anu: wo bachi hai, abhi to samajh gayi hai, dekhte hai aage kya hota hai. Sach kahu to maine ye kabhi socha nahi tha ki meri sweetudi mujh se itni jaldi dur ho jayegi. Zyada duniya dekhi nahi hai, to mujhe to laga tha ki shaadi ke bad hi wo mujh se dur jayegi. Par career bhi zaroori hai, thoda bura lagega par main khud ko sambhal lungi

Anuj: Samajh sakta hu main, beti ki shaadi ke sapne aur tayari to maa-baap uske paida hone ke din se hi kar dete hai

Anu: Haan to, Mr Shah ne Pakhi ke naam bahut sari FD le rakhi hai. main bhi har teej-tyohar main uske liye chote-mote gehne ikathe karti aayi hu. Baa ne hi sikhaya tha mujhe, wo dolly behen ke liye karti thi.

Anuj: haan, Mukku ke paida hone ke bad mere ghar main bhi aisa hi tha. Mummy Papa bhi har festival, birthday pe Mukku ke liye alag se save karte the. Ek baar main mazaak mazaak main bol diya tha, uski dowry ke liye itna sab aur mere liye kuch nahi.

Us din, Papa ke mujhe life ka ek important lesson sikhaya tha. Unhone bola pehle zamane main dowry ek tarika tha apni beti ka future secure karne ka, taki use ek achcha ghar mile. aaj bhale hi zamana badla ho but beti ka future secure karna aaj bhi utna hi zaroori hai. Tab main ye lesson puri tarah se samajh nahi paya tha.

Par jab main kaam karne laga, to dheere dheere samjha. Pata hai Anu, aaj bhi duniya main same job ke liye mard ko zyada salary milti hai, aur aurat ko kaam. Padhai puri karna, ghar se nikal kar naukri karna, phir kam salary main job, less promotion chances, ek aurat ki life mushkil hoti hai. Financial independence is very important today but to achieve that woman must struggle a lot compared to man.

Zaroorat to dono ki ek jaisi hoti hai; par aurat ko salary kam milti hai. Yaha parents ki savings kam aati hai shuruaat ke un saalo main. Phir dheere dheere, wo apne dam par age badti hai, aur kamne lagti hai, aur ek din asman ko chu ti hai.

Jab Mummy-Papa mere liye US shift hue, naya desh, business phir se set karna bahut mushkil tha. Hamari lifestyle affect hui thi, earnings kaam thi, savings zero. Par unho ne kabhi kuch bola nahi, hum saath the wo sabse zyada important tha. Aur papa ko yakeen tha ki main aage jaa kar khud taraki karunga. Un saalon main wo Mukku ke liye kuch save nahi kar paye the.

Anuj continues with a very heavy heart in low gloomy voice: Zindagi ne mujhe kuch sabak bahut bedardi se sikhaye hai. Jab use accident ke baad meri Mukku coma se bahar aayi, mujhe zindagi ne ek kadwa sach shikhaya. Use accident aur treatment main, humari sari saving, yaha tak ki GK ki bhi sari saving sab khatam ho gaya tha. Agar, us accident main mujhe kuch hota to meri Mukku ka kya hota, main soch ke darta hu.

Phir maine khud se promise kiya, aage chal ke main rahu ya na rahu, meri Mukku kabhi kisi pe depend nahi karegi. Mujhe uska future secure karna tha, har haal main. Rishton aur pyaar ki jagah koi nahi le sakta. Par meri Mukku hamesha sar utha ke apne ghar main, haq se apni zinadagi jeyigi. Wo kisi ki mohtaaz nahi hahi, khaas kar paise ke liye to kabhi nahi. Aisa nahi hai ki mujhe uski capability pe doubt that par bada bhai hone ke nate main use wo dena chahta tha. Agar mummy papa hote to wo bhi yahi karte.

Anu: Aap sahi hai, ek aurat ke liye ghar se nikal kar kaam karna hi bahut mushkil hota hai. Waise mujhe nahi pata tha, ki aurat ko pagaar mard se kam milti hai

Anuj: Ye sach hai, aur sirf humare desh main nahi puri duniya main.

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Anuj: Bura na mano to ek baat bolu

Anu: Boliye na, main bura nahi maungi.

Anuj: Maine aaj office main tumhari payslip dekhi, tumne meri company se jo 20 lakh ka load liya hai wo to mujhe pata hai. Par mujhe nahi pata tha wo bank ka loan bhi tum hi bhar rahi ho. do loan phir ghar ka rent, is ke baad tumhare khud ke liye zyada nahi bachta hoga

Anu: Are nahi, mere liya utna hi khafi hai, mujhe koi zaroorat hi nahi hai. Aap chinta mat kariya.

Anuj: par wo sara loan tum hi kyu de rahi ho

Anu: Wo, meri galti ki wagah se wo 20 lakh ka fraud hua tha. Isliye wo paise mujhe hi dena chahiye na.

Anuj: Haan, par jab Vanraj tumhe business ke layak nahi samjhta, to usne bank loan tum par kyu choda. Kya wo chahta tha, ki tum galti karo. Ghar ka padha likha, experienced, mard, hoke bhi, ye kaam usne khud kyu nahi kiya.

Anu: loan to maine dance academy ko bachane ke liye tha ni.

Anuj: aur Cafe, kya wo us factory pe nahi tha. Wo bhi to tha, to Vanraj ko ye kaam karna tha, par usne nahi kiya. kyu?

(Anuj continued before Anu can respond, as he wasn't looking for her answers today.)

Wo factory Bapuji ki hai, jo unhe unke Bapuji ne di. Aur bapuji ke bad wo Vanraj milegi. Tum us sab main kaha se aa gayi Anu. Wo Property Tax ke 20 lakh Vanraj ko bharne chahiye. Galti us se hui, jo itne saal usne dhyan nahi diya, Bapuji to retired the na, ghar ki zimmedari uthne ka dam to wo bharta hai.

Factory chali jati to tum to online classes kar sakti thi. Par Cafe jata to Vanraj kya karta, usne ye nahi socha. Sach to ye hai, dono baar galti Vanraj ne ki, aur khamiyaza (penalty) tumne bhara. Aur aaj bhi bhar rahi ho. Ab to Mukku se partnership ke bad Vanraj bhi kama raha hai, to aaj bhi loan tum hi kyu bharo.

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Anuj, in a soft slow heavy tone: Parents apni beti ka future secure karte hai, yaha tum, Baa-Bapuji aur Vanraj ka future secure kar rahi ho. Haan, tumhe zaroorat nahi hai, tum achchi beti ho. Par kya wo sach main tumhare maa-baap hai.

Unhone tumhare liye kya kiya hai, tumhare future le liye kya kiya hai, wo aaj bhi tumse sirf le rahe hai. Main janta hu, tum mangogi to wo denge, par kya tumne Pakhi ke bina mange uske liye paise nahi jode. Ya tumhari maa ne tumhari shaadi se pehle nahi jode the. Ya mummy papa ke bad maine, Mukku ke liye nahi kare.

Mujhe thoda andaza hai, kis halat main tumhari shaadi hui. Kaise tumhare pita ke bad tumhari maa ke liye mushkil tha ghar ko sambhalna.

Ye sab janne ke bad bhi Bapuji ne tumhare liye kya kiya hai. Us ghar main hissa diya tha pehle jo Baa ne le liya. Ab dubara de bhi de, to kis kaam ka. Tum waha reh nahi sakti, na us hisse ko bech sakti ho. Vanraj tumhe kuch dega bhi nahi us hisse ke badle. Factory bhi Bapuji ke bad, Vanraj ko hi milegi.

Samar khud us ghar main rehta hai, wo chah ke bhi tumhari zyada madad nahi kar payega. Phir aage chal ke uska apna parivar hoga. Aur kya tum apne bete se kuch logi, shayad nahi.

Tumne apne mayke ke jevar se kinjal ki ring li. Divorce ke baad, sasural ke diye jevar wahi chod diye. Aaj ek kiraye ke ghar main rehti ho. Tumhari aadhe se zyada salary loan main ja rahi hai. Aaj tumhare pass future ki security ke liye kya hai Anupama.

Wo rishte jin ne tum se sirf aur sirf liya hai, kabhi tumhe kuch diya nahi, kabhi tumhare bare main kuch socha nahi. Main ye nahi kehta paisa rishto se bada hai, kabhi nahi.

Par sachae ye hai ki paisa wo tarazoo hai, jo hume rishton ki sachayi dikha deta hai.

Jo tumhe pyaar karta hai, wo tum par apna saara paisa luta dega. Aur jis se tum pyaar karte ho, tum uske liye ek ek rupaya sambhal ke jodte ho.

Anu in silence ponder all the things Anuj is saying. She can't deny the fact that today she has zero money. She has no problem in paying bank loan, as she feels somewhere it's her family and she wants to contribute. However, when Anuj is questioning whether that is actually her family or not; she has no answer. She knows that she worships Baa-Bapuji as or probably more than her own parents.

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Anuj, in low soft tone which conveys his love for her: Tum janti ho, main tumse pyaar karta hu, 26 saal pehle bhi karta aur hamesha karta rahunga. Us pyaar ke nate, USA jaane se pehle main tumhe kuch dena chahta hu. Please mana mat karna, warna shayad main kabhi sukoon se nahi reh paunga.

Aaj hum 44 ke hai, agle 10 saal tak tum meri company aur bank ka loan bharogi. 60 years ke retirement ke hisaab se tum khud ke liye sirf 5 saal kama paogi. Is beech Samar, Pakhi ki shaadi, phir shayed tumhare grand-children bhi hoge. Kharacha sirf badega, kam nahi hoga. Aise main, tum apni baaki ki zindage kaise bitaogi.

Please, Please main ab jo kahonga, use galat mat samjhna.

Ab jab tum is ghar main aa gayi, to ye ghar hamesha ke liye tumhara ban gaya hai. Main ye ghar bechunga nahi, is ghar ke darwaje tumhare liye hamesha khule rahenge. Sar pe apni chat ka importance main tab samjha tha jab hum tumhare liye wo rent ka ghar dhund rahe the. Waise future main na ho, is liye ye ghar aaj se tumhara hai.

Aur maine tumhare liye kuch FD banayi hai aur policies bhi li hai. Jis se puri zindagi tumhe har mahine, zaroorat ke kuch paise milte rahe.

Anu: Anuj, main ye nahi le sakti, pehle hi aapki company ka loan hai mujh par.

Anuj: Ye sab, meri company nahi. Main tumhe apni kamayi se de raha hu. Please kuch mat bolo, istemaal karna na karne tumhare haath main hai. Agar sab achcha hua, to wo paise aise hi bank main rehne dena. Par bhagwan na kare, kabhi tumhe zaroorat padi to is Anuj Kapadia ko yaad karle na. Tum logi to mujhe sukoon hoga ki, dur hi sahi par tum thik hogi, tumhe koi pareshani, kisi cheez ki kami nahi hai.

Anu: Agar meri itni hi chinta hai to chod ke jaa hi kyu rahe hai.

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Initially, i had not planned this but I feel financial independence is very important for women personally. So, I had to add this section and also make Anu think about her relation with Baa-Bapuji. Have still few more points, will cover those in next update. Hope you enjoy this and please share your feedback.

Link to final part 3b:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/160275492