Ek Alag Chai Pe Charcha - Part 3b, Page 10, 5-2 - Page 12

Originally posted by: EmeraldStar

Wow! What a beautiful work

MaAn conversation has all my heart

You have penned so beautifully

Loved it

Can we get something like this on the show?

Thanks for the tag🤗

Hmm ...show ka to writers aur makers jaane.

Hum to wahi khush ho lete hai.

Thank you too.

Originally posted by: name2saakshi

I think it is best ending episode dekh kar jo time waste hua tha yeh update read kar ke❤️ garden garden ho gaya really maza aagaya

Are ye padh ke mera dil bhi garden garden ho gaya ❤️..thank you 🤗

Originally posted by: Zica04

Bahaut khoob. Mujhe laga ki Anupama sorry bolegi and kuch karegi to mend his broken trust. But ye jo turn of events tha wo bhi bahaut accha tha. It was a very Anuj thing to do. Totally loved it ❤️

Thank you. I had thought too about sorry. But Anuj had this conversation to plant the seed of thought in her mind, all he wants is her happiness.

And then Anu I showed this way because I wanted her this time to prove via actions and not words.

After Anuj had cleverly showed how she was blocking growth of her kids, there was no reason left. So she didn't had much left to say either, time was essence here.

Originally posted by: Immansi

Awesome, loved it you lifted my mood, you fulfilled my wish of Anuj finding about V's manipulation through CCTV😊 tysm.. I enjoyed reading it ☺😃 and also wish of Anupama proposed after he talked about going to USA away from her.🥰

I have noticed our thinking is alike. You did what bhavana ketaki can't do😍😍

Are waah ..

Great minds think alike..

Mazaa aayega... this is roller coaster ride, I mean the serial..

Serial main na sahi, hum aapni wish OS main puri kar lenge 🤪

Originally posted by: Iruuu

Thanks for tagging me ☺️...Wow 😭😭😭.... really loved it how openly anuj shares his inner self about Anupama's surrounding relations🥺🥺..."kya aap Mujhse shadi karenge" was awesome 🥰🥰...

Thank you...I don't know but somehow more that ILU I always felt that "kya aap Mujhse shadi karenge" is meant and apt for Maan...

not because of age or something; but it shows the confidence, trust and understanding they have.

Hiii Komal, sorry I read you story ages ago and meant to comment earlier but I've been kinda inactive 😅 first of all toh I loooved reading this yaar! Especially since I'm not watching the show, I could easily picture this was real rather than a fanfic. You brought up everyhting so perfectly and so so logically, loved it :))

(Almost expected Anuj to leave without Anu tbh 😆 but I'm glad they have a happy ending and are also leaving!)

Originally posted by: arya212002

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Komal, it’s the best ending 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 I just loved how you ended it with the marriage and then move to US….finally peace of mind away from the circus.

It is lovely ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ not just because they are getting married but more due to the sensible open conversation and even more so the logical conclusion you wrote. The usage of CCTV, open and frank conversations every thing you penned is wonderful dear👏👏👏👏

A huge hug 🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗 and lots of 😘😘😘😘😘😘 from me to you for this stunning piece.

Thank you 🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Dil khush kar diya tune... Aise comments padh ke bahut achcha lagta hai 😘😘😘😘😘

Waise I am firm believer in seasons for serials..that allows track to close sensibly and then start a new story with same set of character.

I would love to see this in serial too. Marriage and move to US. If it's losely inspired from English Vinglish then they can show her growth there..Ab India main with Shah to hone se raha.

CCTV, ye to ITV hai warna most complex problems do have simple solution 🤪

Originally posted by: Koms9

awesome Komal. everything was perfect, everything 100% correct what Anuj said. Loved how Anu was left with nothing to explain about Achche Pita

Haha... Are ye to Anuj ne bola nahi.. warna achcha pita, beta, insaan kuch nahi bachta.. wo Ghatiya Insaan.

it's just that Anuj ka intention wo nahi tha, that trash wasn't worth it... Anuj ki priority set thi Anu, to bas wahi kiya aur Jeet gaya...

Originally posted by: tanu90

Thanks for the tag Komal! 🤗❤️

Superb ending (although I wished it would not end so soon!)👏Finally Anu ko samajh aa gaya ki uske liye kaun zyada zaroori hai! I loved the way Anuj explained why it was important for not just Anu but also Pakhi, Kinjal and Samar to be away from the madhouse. And also loved the way he sealed the deal with a kiss on her forehead, eliminating the need of a formal confession! Keep writing dear. Would love to read more of your stories.

Love,

Noorie

Jeevan chakra...

Ending is the new beginning..

I would love to see Anu in US, woh English Vinglish style main.. trust me even without negativity that track could be so good with her accent and bhashan..

Agreed, on her kids growth..waise Anuj ne Toshu mention kiya nahi aur Anu ne bola nahi. 🤭🤭🤭

I know, that forehead kiss is so beautiful, no word's could match-up it's charm ever...waise serial main ab hume words hi milenge, yaha imagine kar lete hai ..

Originally posted by: Kras1

kya baat h komal jis nautanki ka makers koi closure nahi dhoondh pa rahe usko tune kya mast closure diya h 🥳🥳

ek ek mudda pakda h tune isme yr sach mein maja aa gaya

mukku ne bhi isme apne bhai ko chuna aur happy ending bhi ho gayi

sabse badiya baat isme sirf anuj hi anuj chaya tha anu bechari ke paas bolne ko hi kuch nahi tha🤣

Hahahaha....ab jo mere dil main hain wahi mere shabdo main.. ..Anuj hi Anuj....🤪

Karna chahe to makers kya kya kar sakte hai, par unka pyaar koi aur hai, humara pyaar koi aur hai...

Wo apne karenge aur hum yaha apna...❤️❤️❤️Thank you for the comment.