Pyaar ki ek kahaani...... MaAn Ff - Page 2

Nyccc Part dear plz continue

Interesting concept! Excited to read it :)

Superb

Awesome

Amazing start

I always wondered do ever the victims in such oppressive relationships really make their mind to come out of it.i mean why it takes so long to them to realize, what keeps them going in such hostile environment, when is the real limit for them after which they take out step outside.

Hope anu here makes her decision to leave the hell hole soon.

I saw wanted to see aggressive and intense Anuj aur tumne mere dil ki baat sun li......

Something new and fresh...

Update soon ☺️

Congratulations for your new FF!!

Brilliant start 👋👋 Really looking forward to reading this one. Please update soon 😊

This is very good and a different angle because it is from the beginning of her life after marriage and I am glad she stood her ground.

Her continuing college really must be hard having to go back to the house each night and the introduction of Anuj a surprise.

This is very good but my Hindi is not very good so if you could translate into English I would be very 😊

Please continue soon

It's amazing.. keep writing and do tag me next time..

Love to read this story!!!

I like the blend of strength and self doubt you are showing in Anupama. You've captured Anuj's emotions of anger and desperation in that moment really well.

Looking forward to reading more :)

Amazing concept! 👏I loved the passionate version of Anuj. Do continue soon and let me know when you update this one.

Love,

Noorie

Interesting take! I like it. Can't wait to see how you take it further! It's interesting to see how Anu is not happy, how she wants to break the shackles of a marriage that's not given her anything but pain.. glad that she stood up against the regressive mentality that Vanraj and his mother represents. Wonderful to see her standing up for herself, not only pursuing her studies but also doing a job! An assistant teacher ! Like it.

Love the way you've have described the other characters.. in simple and precise words. Spot on. One can picture exactly how the characters are.

I am glad someone took a stand and has decided to talk about the mental health of a person going through such situations. The turmoils, the grief, the bitterness, and the gut wrenching pain of living every second with torture, verbal abuse and harrassment! You've put them in light, under scrutiny. Appreciate the take you have. People often give speeches of how we can move on and live a better life and let go of everything bad that has occurred to someone, but we forget that things are easier said than done.. the one who has or is going through hell can't just let go or change over night.. it doesn't need just one great speech, it takes hell lot of efforts to mend the broken.. and to see Anuj being that person who will possibly help Anu through this, be her lighthouse in the stormy life, is interesting!

I liked the way you described Anuj. His first appearance, the tension - his body taut and how visibly disturbed and desperate he was to stop what Anu was about to do.. the shift from concern and worry to anger .. loved the way you described his baritone, the low vicious voice of anger towards her actions.. sent chills down the spine, the intensity in that scene was described aptly..

The realisation of her actions settling in on her was another wonderful part! The "vaada karo" scene was written well ! College counselor! It's a sad thing that there are still so many institutions out there where students can't really have this luxury. But I'm glad to read this take you have..

The realisation that dawned on her of how this familiar yet stranger guy had talked to her like he had known her since a long time.. was beautiful to read...

Loved reading this new story line. I would absolutely love to read it further!

Thank you so much for the tag!💫

Love,

Riddhi ❤️