MaAn : When Unfortunate Day Becomes Fortunate One Part 3 on page 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

Iruuuuuuuuuu this is fabulous!


Love that you are highlighting this trauma and writing a story around it. Wish it was something similar in canon. Your writing is so good - you have the internal voices down!

Really looking forward to the next instalment!

Don’t take too long!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#12

Both parts are very nycccc...plz cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

amazing story dear

i want to read this side of anupama i want to see how will anuj handle her wo kaise is trauma se use bahar nikalega most importantly kaise is par react karega

i m happy you raise this topic here at least🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful and painful at the same time ❤️

Glad that you wrote on this topic bcz show me to they show anu as super woman jis ko koi dard nahi hota and bas doosro ka problem solve karti rehti hai😕

Looking forward to reading the next part :)

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Amazing! 👏

Anupamas dance reminds me of one of the earliest episodes of the show where she goes to her mom's house and dances there. There she was helpless but here she thankfully has Anuj to steady her! Can't wait to read more. Keep it up dear!

Love,

Noorie

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello fellas ❤️

Here is the next Chapter ☺️

Part 3


ANUJ reaches in dance academy, he feels something strange hearing her music coming from inside the achedemy. What he see leaves him speechless. the girl in front of him is not anupama but a tormented soul whose patience, existence

was broken of living a happy go lucky life

Flashback :

Anuj calls GK to get information of Anupamaa

"Kaka anu ghar agayi hain nah ?

GK '' nehi beta anupama Abhi Tak ghar nhi'' ayi hain''

Anuj "What?...nehi gayi Abhi Tak ghar lakin yeha se toh kabki nikal gayi hain

Gk " kya hua anuj beta?

Anuj ''kaka aap chinta maat kije main apko call back Karta Hoon thodi der main (cuts in)

Devika "anuj anu tere ghar nhi'' gayi toh kahan gayi hain woh (gets tensed fr anu)

Anuj thinks off a little ''Mujhe Pata Hain Woh kahan gayi Hogi''

& Passes an assurance look to her ''

Flashback ends

Anuj helps her to sit nearby couch... bending down his knees,he sees her feets terrible condition & get some ointment to apply on her feet...

"Pichle Saal Bohoth Khush thi main ajke Din..mere Liye Joh ghar, parivar mera sansar tha unke Sath main 25 saal beeta liye tha..mere pati jisse main apna sab kuch Mana tha uske sath 25 Saal gujare tha main''

She slowly brings out an ring with Her favourite picture With Vanraj

"Shaadi se 2din pehle sare ghar wale cah rahe tha ki hum 25wii salgira pai dubara shadi kare aur tab unhone mujhe isi anguthi ke sath ghutnope jake Shaadi ke liye propose kiya tha''

Hearing this Anuj closes his eyes and a lone tear escaps from it

She looks at him tearfully "zindegi bhi kitni ajeeb hain nah jab hum kisi bade Sapne ko pane kii Puri shiddat se cah karte hain uske dusre hii paal woh sare Sapne kanch ke Tarha toot jate hain"

Anuj does not says anything but only want to listen to her

"Bohoth Khush thi main ush din.mere pair zameen main tha hii nehi,Yese asmaan main udh rahe tha...aur udhte udhte..(looks down)''gir gaye...

She slowly stands up and walking a little :

"Sari bidhiya khatam hone k baad, dulhan

bani main jab apne kamre ke taraf gayi, kamre ka darwaja khola..toh samne...mr shah aur kavya...(stammering in her words : anuj walks in front of her)..mere bistar padh...mere...mere suhaag ki shej padh..(tears rolls down from her both eyes : hearing it anuj fists his palm tightly)..mera suhaag Kisi aur..ush dusri...ush dusri aurat k Sath (dashed out with a thud in ground and Burst into tears😭)...

ANU"", anuj softly utters her name : bends down holding her shoulder gently but to his shock anupama wraps her arms around pulling him into a tight hug : For a moment anuj wasn't able to how to react on but Anupama crying broken voice bring him back into sense & wasting no more time

He reciprocate the hug more tightly,placed his one hand into her back head...

Anupama sobs out in his arms very badly : he wants to erase all the bad memories floading in her mind and give the warmth she badly need.

After sometime Slowly breaking the hug anu looks at him tearfully''25 Saal anuj 25 Saal kya kuch nhi'' kiya tha maine unke Liye,Meri Puri zindegi ko unke aas paas rakh diya jaise unhise sab Shuru hota tha aur unhipe khatam...(holds Anuj's hand tightly)

"main agee padhna cahti thi lakin unke ek Baar Mana karne pai maine sab chodh diya, dance Karna mera junoon tha,un..unhe pata bhi thi ye baat lakin jab baa ne saaf Mana kar Diya ki ghar ki bahuyen Yese Bahar k kaamo nehi jati toh unhone dikhawa Tak nhi'' kiya mere samne ki unhone koi Koshish ki thi mere liye...

"aur Ush Shaadi ke din main Yese gire kii mera wajud hii khatam hogaya tha

Anuj nodes negatively ''Nehi Anu Nehi''

"Tum jaisi ho ye kabhi maat samajhna ki Joh kuch bhi tumhare Sath hua usme tumhara wajud kaam hogaya hain..''

Anupama "" janti hoon anuj isiliya toh bohoth mushkil se khud ho samhala tha lakin aj phirse woh din mere samne agaya

"Joh Pal zindegi main sabse Jayada dard dete hain na woh pal Jaise zindegi main,theher se jate hain, gujarta hii nehi hain..yea phir hum Usaa gujarne dena cahte hii nhi hain,baar baar baar woh Pal dohrate rehte hain.."

"Jisse zindegi main sabse Jayada caha tha using mere dil k hazar tukde kar diye tha..

Uparwala karte kii mujhe kabhi unse pyaar hotaa hii nhi'' (again brust into tears)


That's all for this chapter ☺️..hope you guys give your feedback on this part 🤗

Will update soon the next one


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sooo beautiful and emotional ❤🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a beautiful chapter.... please continue 👌👍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nyccc Part plz continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

lovely episode yr

it's so painful to see anu like this

anuj ka bhi dil toot raha hoga use aise dekhkar

but i m happy at least in this story she is opening up to anuj about her pain

show mein to ye mahan hi ban gayi strong dikhane ke chakkar mein but according to me jo insaan kisi apne ko apne jakhm dikha sakta h usse strong koi nahi hota because bahut sahas chahiye apne purane jakhm kholkar dikhane mein

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