MaAn : When Unfortunate Day Becomes Fortunate One Part 3 on page 3

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Hey fellas☺️...hope all are doing well.here is my new story on MaAn 🤧...Gotten this idea from seeing mukku's breakdown as I really wants An Conversation over Anupama's anniversary trauma on MaAn

PART 1

Before proceeding further let me inform you in this story Anu didn't tell Anuj & mukku about her betrayal experience & Anuj didn't know what exactly happened in Anu's anniversary day...So Let's proceed

Scene start with Anupama's serving breakfast to Anuj

Anuj ''Anu tum bhi humare Sath breakfast Karlo..Woh aj Meri Singh's k sath ek bohoth important meeting hain issiliya jald office nikalna padega

Anu tries to speak ''woh anuj..woh mujhe..

ANUJ ''kya baat hain anu

Anu ''woh anuj agar main aj office nhi'' Ayi toh Kya koi problem Hogi?

Anuj taken back by her words & walks upto her "Anu kya hua tumhari tabiyat toh thik hain nh(slowly checks on her head)" Par bukhar toh nhi'' hain..

Anu ''nhi anuj tabiyat kharap nhi'' hain meri..Woh Yesehi bohoth dino se lagatar Kaam chal raha hain nh toh socha ki break lelu aj

Anuj "Haan Sahi kahan site visiting bhi toh Horahi Hain kuch dino se..koi baat nhi'' Tum jab maan cahe off lesakti hoo...jab accha lage tab Kaam Shuru kar sakti hoo..(saying this again starts eating his food)

Anu Emotionally sees this mannn & thinks how much he cares, concerned about her

Anuj looks at her cornerly ''Ye anu ko kuch hua hain Kya pareshan lag rahi hain(Thinks)
Nehi kuch hota toh woh Bata deti...

After sometime Anuj leaves for office &

Crossing her hands around her arms

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyan dikhaoge
Na tham ke woh josh mein yuh hosh se udaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhooth use sunaoge
Na roothe ke sirhaane mein remote ko chupaoge

Anupama slowly roamed the house and goes to her room quietly sitting on the floor
:closing her eyes Leaned over her bed

Flashback hits her ::::

Devika ''Vanraj aur kavya ka rishta dosti se bhi kayi badkar hain

K's hus : " Bohoth salon se Apke pati aur meri patni ka affair chal raha hain

Anu ''apko Apke patni pai vishwas ho nh ho mujhe mere pati padh vishwas hain

K's hus : uparwala kare Apka ye vishwas humesha bana rahe

Gaye, tum gaye ho kyun raat baaki hai
Gaye, tum gaye ho kyun saath baki hai
Gaye, tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun to jiyein kyun

"I LOVE YOU KAVYA MAIN SIRF AUR SIRF TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON,

In a jerk she opened her eyes & tears starts flowing from it

Aankh bhi tham gayi na thaki
Raat bhi na banti, na kati
Raat bhi sher ki maarti
Neend bhi lut gayi chhin gayi
Raat bhi na sahi na rahi
Raat thi laazmi chandni

(Slowly Vanraj kissed on kavya's forhead & hugs her )

Anupama covering her knees Together : starts sobbing very badly

Gaye, tum gaye ho kyun raat baaki hai
Gaye, tum gaye ho kyun saath baki hai
Gaye, tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun to jiyein kyun
Gaye kyun to jiyein kyun
Jiyein kyun

(How Vanraj kisses Kavya's cheeks and slowly placing her over bed : leans on to her''

(ANU meri baat shuno Anu Tumhe Abhi hosh aya hain'')

Anu ''kyuuu'' KanhaJi Kyu mere Sath hii yesa Kyu hua''...Kyu diiii Apne mujhe itni Badi takleef Kanha Ji Kyu

Cries her heart out 😭😭😭

Scene changes to office :

After finishing his meeting anuj comes in his cabin finding anupama already waiting there

"Aree Anu tum...tum toh break pai thi nah aj..

ANU ''Haan padh agayi apki meeting Abhi khatam hui Kya ?

Anuj sitting on his chair '' haan Abhi hui..tum ane wale thi toh mujhe phone krke bata deti phir itna wait nhi karna padta tumhe (smilingly said )

Anupama : "woh...(goes in a flashback )

After crying from many moments Suddenly Anu's phone ring

Slowly wiping down her tears she received the call

Project Site Manager ''Mam humari meeting ka time main apko Bhej diya hain..apne koi reply nhi'' kiya issiliya mujhe phone Karna pada apko sir toh dusre clients k sath aj busy hain...toh aphi site ajati toh bohoth accha hota...

& She thinks off going there )

Anu '' yeh lije...humare kl ki meeting k Baad aj Project site manager se milna tha..toh Wohi gayi thi...baat cheet khatam hone ke baad unhonehi Project se related kuch official papers en..end..endo..

Anuj ''endorsed (correct her)

Anu "haan Wohi endorse aur sign krne bheje hain apko (handed over anuj the pepers)

Anuj : Endorse k liya copying room main jana padega wohi hoga yeh..Main kisi...nhi khud hii jata hoon "tum bhi chalo mere saath

Anu ''main...thik che..

Anuj looked at her pale face but stopped himself before asking anything

Both goes into that room : Anuj started the machine of it

when suddenly Anu's phone rings : she looks the screen avoiding which anuj notices , she started rubbing her fingers

Anuj : Anu kyaa huya? Tum Thik Toh ho?

Anu shatteled "kya hoga kuch nhi huya (avoiding eyecontect with him )

Khamoshiyaan reprise plays :

Kya ush gali kabhi tera jana huya
Jahan se jamane ko gujre jamana huya

Anuj : "jab nazrain milane wali ankhain nazain chudane lage nah toh samajh lena cahiyaan ki dil ka haal thik nhi'' hain (Intensly stares at her)

ANU looks at him intensly 😳😳

Mera samay toh wahi pai hain thehra huya
Bataun tumhe kya mere saath kya kya huya

ANUJ was standing near the machine : "kyaa badal gaya hain ANU😳😳😳

ANU looking down started going towards ANUJ 🥺🥺

ANU "jab rishtey Kisibhi hal main Sahi nehi rehne dete hain nah toh dil bhi badal jate hain ANUJ(intensly look at his eyes🥺🥺)

Khamoshiyaan ek raaz hain
Seene main dafan hain kahi

Machine strikes making Anuj little bit concious..By this his body hit in machine making Anu too imbalance in her position about to fall

But Anuj holds her on her hand pulled her closer by placing one hand in her waist & Anu placed her right hand on his chest

Khamoshiyaan joh paas hain
Main tumse kahunga kabhi

Both looked at each other intensly sharing an passionate emotional eyelock🥺🥺

Baat lunga main sath main tere
Milne toh aao zaraa.......

Both placed in their hands uponly on eachother in the jerox machine and there together hand prints copies out of that pointedly

Khamoshiyaan........
teri meri.......Khamoshiyaan.....

Khamoshiyaan.....
Lipti hui...Khamoshiyaan.....

Screen flashes closer to there faces several times

Tears escapes from anupama's eyes bt not before anuj noticing it

Anupama tries to go away when anuj holds her hand ''Anu tum roo rahi hoo, padh Kyu please batao mujhe

Anupama again looking tearfully''Sach main anuj mujhe kuch nhi'' hua hain (getting out of his grip & she turned leaving the room & Anuj all Tensed )

Precap :

Devika ''Usaa Aj Pareshan, tensed toh hona hii tha nah

Anuj ''kya matlab tera?

Devika ''Yhi Anuj ki aaj Uski shaadi ki anniversary hain aur ajke hii din usee pichle Saal Vanraj Aur Kavya k bade main pata Chala tha

This shocks anuj to core 😭😣😣



That's all☺️ hope you all like this & give me it's feedback

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fantastic .. this is mind blowing write up
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Please continue dear 👌👌👏👍 nice writing 🤗🤗

Thank you for the tag🥰🥰

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My poor heart🥺💔

This was beautiful and painful at the same time

Do update soon dear

Edited by shriz - 3 years ago
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Hi dear!

Thanks for the tag! 🤗Wonderful start! The song lyrics suited your narration to the T. 👍🏼Looking forward to Anuj's reaction after knowing about Anupama's anniversary.

Love,

Noorie

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Ufffff! SO Great! Love emotional weight of this. The Song choice is on point. The scenario is so realistic. Even though she’s moved on, it would still be a hard anniversary…


I have one complaint… it’s not long enough! I want moorreeee 😁😂
Update soon pls! I want to see Anuj’s reaction once he finds out and how he comforts Anupamaa


Sara


xoxo


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Hey fellas ☺️

Here's next one ♥️.....


Part 2


Scene Started with Anupama runningly comes to wash room & flashes water in her face repeatedly many times

Slowly looks at herself through mirror "Mujhe nhi'' rona hain main Kyu... Kyu Ro rahi hoon...''

Jerking off her tears "Woh sab bita hua kal hain Anupama...Tujhe nhi'' rona aur''

Suddenly her phone rings : it's devika's

''Haan Devika... bol

Devika ''anu main office agayi hoon kahan hein toh interior designs k ideas discuss karne hain nh hume''

Anupama "haan main..main ati hoon cabin main..(cuting the call again looks at mirror to have subtle confidence on her face : goes to the other cabin)

Devika ''Anu kahan thi..kaka Keh rahe tha tu der se Ayi office aj aur Anuj toh Kisi aur Project meeting main hain...toh tu kahan thi?

Anupama "woh mai..main office k dusre side thi thodi der anuj k sath hii thi padh abh unka woh aur presentation tha toh Bahar agayi thi...

Devika noticing face being little swalon "Anu tu..(just then other staff members comes in and started showing there works to Anupama)

...........

From past half hour Devika, anupama & one of Project members were discussing on the ideas... Anupama trying hard but wasn't able to concentrate on

Devika "Rashi aap inn designs k paperwork jald complete kar lije phir hum Anuj ko dikha denge

Rashi nodes and leaves with other stuff,just then anupama too stands up and takes her bag.

Devika "aree re tu kahan Chali madam

Anupama ''woh devu meri thik nehi lag rahi hain toh Ghar jake aram Karna Cahti hoon

Devika too stands up ''padh anu tu...

(Anupama cuts her words in middle)

"Please neh devika Sach main mujhe ghar jana hain

Sensing the heaviness in her voice Devika nodes & Anupama Leaves from the office

..................

After sometime Anuj comes in her cabin

Finishing his meetings

Devika "wah Kapadia ji ko finally chutti mil hii gayi

Signing highly ''haan yar aj bohoth sare meetings lined up tha...(looks here there )

Devika ''Anu ko dundh Raha hain?

Anuj ''haan...I mean anupama kahan hein tere Sath interior k designs final kar rahi thi nh...beech mai main aya tha

Devika ''kar toh rahi thi..padh sab final hote hii woh ghar Chali gayi

Anuj ''kya? ghar itni jaldi Uski tabiyat toh thik thi nah? aj subha se bujhi bujhi,pareshan lag rahi thi..kuch kahan kya Usne Tujhe ki Kyu pareshan hain?

Devika ''Usne kuch kahan nehi padh main sab samajh gayi...Aur ajke din uska yesa beheviour hona lajmi tha(signs sadly)

In a confused tone he asked her tensedly "Kya matlab hain tera?

Devika " ''Yehi Anuj ki aaj Uski shaadi ki anniversary hain aur ajke hii din usee pichle Saal Vanraj Aur Kavya k bade main pata Chala tha

This shocks anuj to core 😭😣😣

..............

Scene changes to Anupama's Dance achedamy

She just walks into it motionlessly & sees it darkness that's all screaming her fate of emptiness from past 25 years

Her eyes fallen on the box of ghuhroo's that Anuj has given her : Remembering

"HAR PAO KE KISMAAT MAIN GHUNGROO

HO NAH HO,LAKIN HAR GHUNGROO K KISMAAT MAIN PAO ZAROOR HONE CAHIYAN"

Passion of Dance is the only healing that can kill out the ongoing bitter termoils in her heart now...

She wears the anklet in her feet as today is the time when she needs to embrace her passion and forget everything. She starts with small steps twirling around but ends up making to break all the energy and cool down the heat ignited due to the fire. All her flashbacks involves her relation with VANRAJ, losing the man whom she loved, worshipped unconditionally yet blindly...He buried her dignity stripped in front of whole world....Her feet gets swollen but body is not willing to stop until she becomes a body who has no emotion, feel any kind of pain.

She sweating heavily,her visions become blur , in a moment she was about to collapse and fell in the ground a two arms protectively held her from waist..Just then her eyes fall on the shadow of guy standing holding her in front like the ray of light has come to whisk her away from the darkness.

Softly utters "ANUJJJ"





That's all for this chapter...hope you guys like it and give your feedback on this ☺️



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Wow. I felt shivers as I read this !!! so beautiful
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Can't wait for next one...🔥❤

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Intense..... pls continue 👍👌🤗🤗

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