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Superb n lovely update

Nycccc OS dear.......& Happy New Year to all

Kya baat hai!!! Beautiful!!! 👏🤗🥰👌

🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰

Ahhhhhh!!!!

Sigh of relief and so much love to you….. bol diya and it was so beautiful to read as the writing was flawless and full of love!

Just hope we get to see this without the excess drama in the show.
great start to the new year…. Thank you 🙏🏼

Hank you for to his beautiful update dear......

It was perfect....

Do write more...

And happy 2022🥳

Waah..Dil khush kar diya aapne.

Bahut hi sundar confession..I imagined our Maan throughout and loved it ❤ ♥ 💖 💕 💗 💙 ❤

Enjoyed reading this so so so much

I can’t even pick a favorite part 😳

This: “'Anuuuu...oh Anuuuuu,' he roared cheerfully and just then he entire terrace lit up as the power was restored. She indeed took away all the looming darkness not just from around him but also from his life. She was his sunshine. His torch of light. His light at the end of the tunnel.”

It was written exactly in his style, actually you captured both characters’ style of speech and action so well, but these lines I heard in the same voice he used after Navratri .. the “ussne mere liye stand li… mere liye. Woh thi khadi mere liye ,,,sabse woh ladi mere liye” yeh moment ke feelz aaya 😳

In the quieter part of the evening the moon that shone brightly hid shyly behind the clouds allowing some privacy to the parched souls.

This line was too good. I imagined the moon 🌛 literally blushing😆

As always your descriptions are too good. Har ek feeling ka alag expression, especially when Anuj lured her closer and later when Anu was blushing.

HI dear! Wishing you a very happy new year!

This was so beautiful! Loved the way you described the changing equation between MaAn! The kiss and the lead up to it was magical! Loved how Anupama reassured Anuj that she was going only to return as his wife!

Your OS made my Sunday better! Keep writing and don't forget to tag me whenever you post something.

Cheers,

Noorie

Aaaawwwweeeeee! 😍😍😍😍 this is just tooo cute!