Maan OS - Karma strike Vanika Teamworks | Updated page 14 |30/12 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Km181

Thank you so much..🤗

I will be honest, there is always that moment of self doubt after writting, that whether I was able to do justice to Maan or not..

We all are so emotionally invested in them, that this due diligence is required.

Infact, at end of each episode my mind already starts spinning story of tomorrow. Few days I pen it down to share and some days I let it be.

Thanks you for these encouraging words, it really keeps me going.. ❤️

Thank you again

Originally posted by: Km181

Thank you so much..🤗

I will be honest, there is always that moment of self doubt after writting, that whether I was able to do justice to Maan or not..

We all are so emotionally invested in them, that this due diligence is required.

Infact, at end of each episode my mind already starts spinning story of tomorrow. Few days I pen it down to share and some days I let it be.

Thanks you for these encouraging words, it really keeps me going.. ❤️

Thanks so much..

Originally posted by: Km181

Thank you so much..🤗

I will be honest, there is always that moment of self doubt after writting, that whether I was able to do justice to Maan or not..

We all are so emotionally invested in them, that this due diligence is required.

Infact, at end of each episode my mind already starts spinning story of tomorrow. Few days I pen it down to share and some days I let it be.

Thanks you for these encouraging words, it really keeps me going.. ❤️

Thank you so much

Aur linkhiye....

Now there is open field of possibilities with suspense around mukku 😆

Originally posted by: Km181

Thank you so much..🤗

I will be honest, there is always that moment of self doubt after writting, that whether I was able to do justice to Maan or not..

We all are so emotionally invested in them, that this due diligence is required.

Infact, at end of each episode my mind already starts spinning story of tomorrow. Few days I pen it down to share and some days I let it be.

Thanks you for these encouraging words, it really keeps me going.. ❤️

All thanks to you and the other talented writers in this forum❤️✨🙌🏽

Komal ur stories resonate so much justice with the character of maan . And you write so beautifully ola continue to do more .... Much 💕💕💕

A quick one, as I just had to write this one. It's more on dialogues only, no proof reading. Sentiments, thoughts, gestures; I believe we all will be able to decipher and I need not spell it out here. its rushed one, so excuse any typos..

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Its Christmas Party and Vanraj asked Malvika for a dance. Seeing the two dance closely and having a pleasant time, Kavya gets jealous and pulls Malvika away.

Malvika: K ye kya badtameezi hai

Anuj: Kavya, how dare you?

Kavya: Mere pati se door raho

Malvika: Tum apne pati ko sambhalo, dont tell me anything

Kavya: Bolungi, ye mere ghar hai, tum yaha Guest ho to Guest ki tarah limit mai raho

Malvika: Ab tum mujhe meri limit bataugi

Vanraj: Kavya, its enought, stop this nonsense

Kavya: You dont tell me V, agar ise is ghar main rehna hai shareefo ki tarah rahe, aise mere pati ke saath aiyaashi karegi to main bolungi

Anuj: Kavya, mind your language

Kavya: you ask your sister to mind her actions

Anu: Kavya, bas karo, Muku bachchi hai, aise shabd nahi bolte

Kavya: Bachchi hai to apne bhai ke saath rahe, maine yaha koi nursery nahi kholi hai

Vanraj: Kavya, tum meri partner se aise bat nahi kar sakti

Kavya: haan to biz partner hai to office main rahe na, ghar aake life partner banne ki kyu koshish kar rahi

Anuj: disgusting. Kavya tumhari soch kitni ghatiya hai

Anu: jane di jiye Anuj, jo jaise hota hai, use sari duniya waise hi lagti hai... Kavya khud Mr Shah ki dost banke aayi thi is ghar main..

Anu: Muku, subah maine kuch nahi kaha, par ab kahungi, Anuj, tumse bahut pyaar karte hai, isliye majboor hai...par tumhe ab sochna chahiye, jis ghar main tumhe izzat na mile waha kyu rehna chahti ho.. Tumhare saath aisa bartaw dekh ke, Anuj ko kaise lag raha hoga. itna paise unka kis kaam ka, jab unki behen ko dusre ki chahat ke neeche rehna pade. Soch lo ek bar phir, apna ghar apna hota hai.. jo sukh aur izzat apne ghar main hoti hai wo aur kahi nahi

Malvika: thik hai par meri ek shart hai, tum bhi kuch din aur humare saath rahogi.. aur is baar tum sirf mere liye, mera khayal rakhugi, bhai ka nahi, promise karo tum bhi rahogi..

GK: maan ja Anu beta, kuch din ki baat hai

Anuj: Muku, this is not fair, tum Anu ko aise force kaise kar sakti ho

Malvika: maine apni choice bol di, ab decision tumhara hai

Anu: main tayyar hu. tum aaj hi party ke baad ghar chalogi. Aur, jitne din main waha hu tum bhi meri har baat manogi.

Malvika: mujhe pata tha you are the best.

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Sharad: Sir, Mr Shah has asked to arrange for 2 crore in cheque and 3 crores as cash. since, its a huge amount i thought will check with you first.

Anuj: What 5 crores? did he said, why he needs so much money in Cash

Sharad: Sir it's for the land deal which Malvika madam liked.

Anuj: Thanks Sharad, tumhe bahut achcha kiya. Mujhe thoda time do, main batata hu kya karna hai..

Sharad: Sure sir. I will take your leave

Anu: kya hua kis soch main hai. 5 crore bada amount hai

Anuj: Baat 5 crore ki nahi hai, baat 3 crore cash ki hai. Aur jaha tak mujhe pata hai, phir real estate itna high nahi hai

Anuj makes a call there broker to understand the land deal which Vanika is having currently. He is shocked to hear the details and worried for his bachcha..He shares all the details with Anu..

Anuj: mujhe Muku se abhi baat karni hogi

Anu: nahi, ye jagah thik nahi hai. Aap shant rahiye, hum is bare main ghar main baat karenge, teeno mil ke. Tab tak aap kuch nahi kahenge. Yaha office main Mr Shah hai sara staff hai, ye sahi nahi hoga.

Anuj: tum thik kah rahi ho

Anuj makes a call to Sharad and asks him to inform Vanraj that he needs 2 days to arrange this amount.

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Anu: ye raha tumhara burger

Anuj: aur mera,

Anu: ap ko burger khana mana hai. aap apni sehat ka dhyan dee jiye

Muku: wow Anu, this is heaven, you are the best.. itna tasty burger, mujhe pata hota to main pehle hi wapas aa jati. please, meri bhabhi ban jao na.

Anu: chup, badmaas. chal apna burger kha

After Muku finishes her burger, Anu gives sign to Anuj that it's right time to talk to muku.

Anuj: Muku, wo jo teri land deal thi uska kya hua

Muku: bhai, wo Raj ne final kar di.. mujhe wo land bahut pasand this. pata nahi, us waqt owner kyu mana raha tha

Anuj: kya owner ko pata tha ki tum kaun ho, matlab Vanika is sister company of AK groups.

Muku: nahi, pehle nahi pata tha but discussion ke waqt maine bataya tha..phir thodi der us ne mana kar diya. Well, all thanks to Raj, finally mujhe wo land mil gayi

Anuj: Muku mujhe lagta hai tujhe koi dusri land dekhni chahiye

Muku: kyu bhai, Raj aur main handle kar sakte hai

Anuj: muku, samjha karo bache, please tum koi aur land le lo

Muku: achcha, aap ko 5 cr se problem hai, mujhe Raj ne bataya tha ki deal 5 cr main final huyi hai

Anuj: muku, its not about 5 cr

Muku: phir kya baat

Anu: Anuj, mujhe lagta hai aap ko Muku to puri baat batani chahiye Muku bachi nahi hai

Anuj: okay, agar tum dono yahi chahti ho to sun. Muku, pyaar se please pehle meri puri baat sunna, phir kuch decide karna..

Muku: thik hai bolo

Anuj: wo land disputed hai. jab owner ne mera naam suna, to use pata tha ki meri company aisi deals nahi karti, isliye usne mana kar diya. Baad main Vanraj ne use bola ki ye Vanika hai aur Anuj Kapadia is deal main involve nahi hoga; isliye wo maan gaya.

Us deal ke diye owner 2 cr ka cheque and 3 cr in cash manga hai. Itna bada bride dena is risky, corruption charge ho sakte hai, police case ban sakta hai.. Aur main, main bacha tujhe jail main nahi dekh sakta.. 5 cr kya tu 50 cr le, par bachchi main koi legal, police ke chakar main tujhe kaise fasne de sakta hu..

Muku: Raj, aisa thodi karega, use pata hoga

Anuj: muku maine lawyer se sab check karaya hai.. Vanika main you have 50-50 partnership with you funding financially. To agar case hua, to fraud main Vanraj aur tum dono liable ho and corruption, bribery main sirf tu, bachchi.. please understand its risky..

Muku: Par bhai, aap se galti hui hai, Raj has knowledge uska khud ka cafe has all legal permissions.

Anu: Wo cafe ki sari legal formalities, maine aur Samar ne ki thi, humari Dance Academy ke saath. Cafe ka permit bhi mere naam pe hai, Mr Shah us sab main involve nahi the.

Muku: Anu you are perfect, bhai ki ideal life partner aur business partner. Par ye restaurant mera chance to prove myself..

Anuj: Muku, please bachchi, main tujh se pyaar karta hu, but ye main nahi hone dunga, i can't take any risk with you.. main mummy-papa ko kya bolunga, main tumhare jail jane ka risk nahi le sakta bas, chahe tu kitna bhi gussa kar le.

Muku: Bhai, aap aisa nahi kar sakte. main is restaurant ke liye india aayi thi. mujhe khud kuch karna hai.

Anu: Muku, ek baat puchu agar tum mura na mano to

Muku: pucho

Anu: tune restaurant ka hi business kyu socha.

Muku: wo mujhe laga Bhai ke latest project hai, he is doing so good. To mujhe laga main bhi yehi karti hu

Anu: par tumhe khud kya pasand hai.. kya tum roz restaurant main baith kar logo ko dekha acha lagega.. tumhe kis cheej se khushi milti hai

Muku: sach bolu to mujhe sirf ghumna achcha lagta, nayi nayi jagah dekhan, naye logo se milna, tarah tarah ka khana try karna

Anu: to tum kya ye restaurant ki zid pakad ke baith gayi ho. tum wo karo na jo tumhe pasand hai..

Muku: tumhara matlab kya hai

Anu: mere matlab hai tum ek wo logo to ghoomain wali company chalu karo, wo kehte hai english main

Anuj: travel agency

Anu: haan wahi, tum aurato ke liye, sirf aurate ki travel agency kholo. Is desh main ek aurat ka akele ghomna kitna mushkil hai. wo kaha jayegi ye ya to uske ghar wale decide karte hai ya rishtedar. agar, himaat kar ke aurat akele jana bhi chahe to bechari ko samajh nahi aata, kaun so jagah sahi hai, kaunsa hotel aur na jane kya kya..

Muku: you mean a travel agency for women run by women only.

Anu: haan, tumne itna ghooma hai, to tum se achcha kaun hoga.. aur isi bahne tum khud bhi aur nayi jagah ghoomegi.

Muku: ye best hai, ghumna to mujhe bahut pasand hain, aur ye kaam to mujhe kaam bhi nahi lagega.. tumhe itna achcha idea kaise aaya. this is perfect as they say, do what you love, and you’ll never work another day in your life.

Anu: wo mujhe Pakhi bata rahi thi, tumhari baatein sun ke uska bhi ghumne ka maan tha. par aaj tak hum use kahi zyada bahar le kar nahi gaye.

Muku: Anu, you are the best. Done, bhai main ab ye hi karungi. Restaurant ka kya karna hai tum dekh lo.

Anuj: Muku, pehle main soch raha tha ki puri project Vanraj ko de du. Par sach bolu to, ab main risk nahi le sakta, it's not about money but meri company ki reputation is at stake. Vanraj, is careless, use ye deal khud check karke, reject karni thi. Shayad khud ko capable prove karne ke ego main wo itni badi risk lene ko tayyar ho gaya. Business aise nahi chalta. Isliye, main ab ye project hi band karna chahta hu. Main kal khud Vanraj se baat karke unse bata dunga.

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So, this one was for all you folks out there who didn't liked TrashRaj flying high and wanted to see him thrown out of AK's office. And since i don't see that happening so soon in serial, i decided to write this and derive some sadistic pleasure myself in this OS. Hope you like it..

disclaimer - i dont know the legality, corruption, jail, fraud, etc.. like writers i take liberty here for my story.

thank you so much for writing this😉

you don't know kitna sukun mila dil ko ye padne ke baad 🤣🤣

bechara vanraj to gaya kaam se🤣🤣🤣

kya itni upar jakar gira h ki bechare ki chot jindagi bhar na bharegi🤣

dil toot jayega uska🥺🤣

i m happy kam se kam tumhari story mein mukku kapadia house aagayi😳

i m really waiting show mein bhi ye wapis aa jaye yr

i really want to see bonding of these three in the show😭

khair tumne dikhayi thanks a lot for this

This was amazing! I'm glad you wrote this. Liked the fact that it was Anupama who's making Malvika understand and they both bonding slowly. It's great that Anupama is considered a part of Anuj's family and she is taking part in the decision making as well.

I totally hated the fact that Vanraj has redeemed himself in everyone's eyes. He wanted to become a big businessman and that track started overnight. I mean, seriously?! Where does this happen?

P.s : It's a request. Can you please show both Anuj and Malvika rejecting this deal and telling Vanraj that they've shut the project without giving him reasons. I mean just tell him "It's our business, our money. I wanted to start it and now I'm ending it.'' That will hurt his ego bad!

Also, wanted Malvika to show Kavya her place and also Kavya taunting Vanraj after the project is shut.

Update Soon!