Maan OS - Karma strike Vanika Teamworks | Updated page 14 |30/12

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Here comes my maan dose for the weekend. Am too excited to see Anu move in Anuj's home and their new beginning. Hope you all like it, please share your feedback.

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Anuj wakes up with the sunlight falling on his face. He opens his eyes to see Anu with wet, open hair and aarti in her hands. She is moving across the room and spreading the warmth of aarti in its every nook and corner. His eyes follow her across the room while he keeps rubbing them at same time as he couldn’t believe if its dreams or his life has changed forever.

Anu: ab uth gaye hai to baith jaeiye

She gives him the aarti, his gaze fixed on her face he brings his hands forward close to aarti, bit more than what’s required, his hands get slight burn and he quickly pulls away and put them on his head. It’s not a dream, she is here for real, thank you Kanhaji and smiles.


Anuj: Good Morning Anu


Anu: Juice rakha hai jaldi se pejiye, mere wapas aane se pehle ye khatam hona chahiye

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Anuj recalls yday evening he had got discharged from hospital. And Anu had come with him to his house. She had then cooked and fed him his dinner. But after that, he can’t recall, as he had fell asleep. This was cheating, he didn’t get chance to thank her, say good night or talk to her. Damn, probably those medicines, it must be there effect.

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Anu comes back and finds the juice still lying untouched on the side table. She asks him to finish the juice, he takes the glass was about to drink but stops.

Anuj: ye kaunsa juice, iski to smell bhi ajeeb si hai, please Anu main ye nahi pi sakta


Anu: koi natak nahi, naak bandh kariye aur ek ghoot mein peejaiye. Main dekh rahi hu, chaliye jaldi kare

Anuj, closing his nose with one hand, drinks from the other and finished. He then smiles at her and exclaims happily as ho gaya khatam.


She takes the glass from his hands and turns to make a leave. However, Anuj was quick to grab her pallu and make her stop. Please thodi der baitho na kuch baat karte hai


Anu pulls a chair next to his bed and sits on it.

Anuj: Anu aise kab tak naraz rahogi, tumne hospital main bhi thik se baat nahi kari mujh se .. bas dawai khaiye, khana khaiye …


Anu instead of looking at him occupies herself in studying her hands.


Anuj then leans down side ways to bring his face near her hands and looks up towards her face. Then he brings his hands towards the ears and hold them as symbol of apology and says Sorry

Anu: maafi kis liye


Anuj: pata nahi, tum naraz ho isliye maafi mang raha hu, ab to maaf kar do aur mujh se baat karo Anu, please

Anuj thinks, I know Anu seeing me like that in hospital would have hurt you a lot. But I couldn’t control myself when I saw you in pain there. If only, I knew the outcome, if only, I knew that it would hurt you even more. I would have stopped myself. I am sorry my love, I really am, please forgive me.

Anu thinks aap ko hospital main us haal main dekh ke main kitni maut mari hu, aap ko andaza bhi nahi, aap nahi jante aap ke meri zindagi main kya mayne hai. Kash main aap ko bata pati Anuj ki aap mere kya hai

Anuj: Achcha Anu, wo police aur hospital ne jo saman wapas kiya humara, phone, wallet wo hain na tumhare pass


Anu: Haan hain


Anuj: To tumhe us main wo chumbak mila kya, maine hospital main samar se pucha tha, par use nahi mila tha


Anu: Anuj, aapne kaha tha wo aapko Kaka ne diya tha, to jane dijiye use, aap us waqt bhi un gundo se kyu request kar rahe the


Anuj: Anu, wo chumbak mere liye bahut bahut special hai, please batao na


Anu: Mujhe nahi pata, aur kuch puchna hai aapko. Mere pass bahut kaam hai or aap bhi aaram kareiye, aap raat ko thik se soye bhi nahi, maine dekha tha, aap neend main baar baar bol rahe the


Anuj: Kya bol raha tha main


Anu: kuch khaas nahi, abhi aaram kareyi, wo zyada zaroori hai.. she thinks, main nahi batongi ki aap neend main baar baar bas anu anu bol rahe the


Anuj: to kal raat tum yaha ruki thi


Anu: Haan, jab tak aap puri tarah se thik nahi ho jate main yahi rahungi


Anuj thinks to himself and murmurs, aisa hai to main kabhi thik na hu


Anu: Kuch kaha aapne


Anuj: Bol du


Anu: Mazak nahi


Anuj: Pakka bol du


Anu: Anuj mere pass time nahi hai, bolna hai to jaldi boliye

Anuj looks into her eyes and says, “agar tum aise mera khayal rukhugi to main puri zindagi bimaar reh sakta hu”

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Anuj thinks to himself, Anu main janta hu, tumhare man main kya, bhale hi us din tum kuch keh na payi ho, par tumhari ankhon ne kaha tha, hospital main bhi tum chup thi par tumhare jazbaat mujhse chupe nahi..main jaanta hu ek aurat ke liye apne liye sochna aur bolna kitna mushkil hota hai, tum to ek maa, beti aur saas ho, main samajh sakta hu, tumhare liye ye aasan nahi hai.. but I know you are strong women and I will wait for you, no matter how long it takes.

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Anuj: Anu main soch raha tha ki samar ke saath aaj shyam to ek drive pe jao


Anu: Aap ko doctor ne 3 din full bed rest ka kaha hai


Anuj: Par anu drive to samar karega main nahi


Anu: Kyu jana hai drive aur kaha jana hai drive pe


Anuj: wo bas aise hi thoda lamba drive, fresh air aur thoda change hoga


Anu: uska koi fyada nahi hai, aap ko jo chahiye wo nahi milega


Anuj: Tumhe kaise pata, mujhe kya chahiye


Anu: Mujhe pata hai, aap wapas us jagah jaa ke apna chumbak dhund ne jane ka soch rahe hai, wo aap ko waha nahi milega


Anuj: Anu, please mujhe mera chumbak de do please, mera chumbak tumhare paas hai na


Anu: Nahi milega, ab chup chap aaram kariye


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Samar, Kinjal, Bapuji come to meet Anuj and check on his health. As he has been getting bored sitting on bed, they decide to play some card games for fun and settle on game on Uno. Samar, says there should be some prize for winner too. Anuj, proposes then that the winner can ask for one wish from any of the participants. They start playing the game and after 4 rounds only Anuj says Uno and then wins in next round. Samar, asks Anuj what would he like as he has won the game.

Anuj: I want something from Anu.


Then he turns to face Anu and says I know I have hurt you, I am sorry, please mujh maaf kar do


Anu: Anuj, ye rules main nahi tha, aap ko aur kuch chahiye to boliye


Anuj: Anu, I am really sorry, please understand, main sapne main bhi tumhe hurt nahi kar sakta. Please maaf kar do


Anu this time chooses to stay silent, she can’t say much in front of all.


Bapuji: Anuj beta jaha pyaar aur parvah hoti hai, narazgi bhi wahi hoti. aur ruthne manane ka bhi apna maza hota hai. Tum koshish karte rahe, koshish karne wale, kabhi nahi harte


Anu gets up from chair and was about to make a leave but Anuj was quick to hold her wrist.

Anuj: Aise nahi Anu, mera inaam abhi baki hai, lao mujhe mera chumbak do

Anu looks at him in the eyes, as if dare to challenge him but then relents and give him the chumbak. Anuj, kisses the chumbak and says I love you, maine tumhe bahut miss kiya, meri jaan and then looks at Anu and smiles.



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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thamks fir the tag Koms, I’ll save this with all the others I need to catch up up, have a busy weekend you know😉

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Posted: 3 years ago
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and some more, apologies if i missed anyone

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wah… meri jaan…. Kya likha hai tumne 😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️

Kal raat se jo MaAn withdrawal ho raha tha na, now this seems medication for it. Absolutely beautiful 🤩 🤩🤩🤩🤩…. Aur likhte rahe aur entertain karte rahe


Also thanks for the tag🤗


Edited by arya212002 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Anuj looks into her eyes and says, “agar tum aise mera khayal rukhugi to main puri zindagi bimaar reh sakta hu”

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Haaaiiii....you've written soooo well ya!!! Was literally like watching an entire episode, with expressions and mind voices☺️

Having no episode so far this did the job! I hope makers also show these type of scenes instead of Shah drama!

Do write more!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sahhhiiiii!!! Bohot khoob 🥰🥰 I loved it 👏👌

Please continue further😊🤗

Thank you for the tag dear!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yaar komal this was so so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️...

I was grinning and blushing when I was reading..

I hope we get something cute along those lines ☺️☺️☺️.

Ty for the tag .... Pls writr more and pls do tag me. Ladki ☺️☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Komal 🤗

Such a beautiful OS, loved reading it! I love this side of Anu as well where she's haq se naraaz :')

Also I realized while reading this that while Anu knows about the Chumbak, Anuj doesn't know that Anu knows right? (I'm getting confused now but I'd want to see something like this in the show too)

Edited by cherry1111 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Alag hi pyaar hai isko magnet se yaar...matlab kuch bhi krega uske liye awesome...keep on writing💓

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Posted: 3 years ago
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That was sweet

Chalo mafi nahi toh magnet hi sahi....

Must say he's smart to fix the prize in advance...

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