|Innocent Sin|- MaAn OS (16+) - Page 4

Maaazzaa awaiting gayo ..... shuu baat 6

Nish bro tu gale lag yaar aa kar....dil khush kar ditta tu ne to🤗

Matlab I swear ye parh kar I'm so happy that mai apni property tere naam likh du khushi k maare agar tu saamne mile to (total 25 ruapay ki property hai btw😎)

Bro the best thing about your stories are that you never forget to add a tint of humour be it a romantic FF or sad FF.

Abhi to filhaal I am having this sudden urge to sing "mai tera haaye re Jabra hoye re Jabra fan ho gaya..teri story parh k dil me dhin tanang ho gaya" for you *in my giaan wala voice😛*

Coming to the story....I'm in love with literally every line....fursat me sab quote kar k tharki commentary dungi😆😆

Aur ek baat bata behen ye panch minute me Anuj ka hriday parivartan kaise karaya tu ne🤣🤣panch min pehle kavya se dar kar chup raha tha aur ab dekho zara🤭🤭 (I hope all this making out session was not longer than five minutes 😏)

Also ye anu ki problem kya hai😡....banda apna seena dikha raha to dikhaane do na...hum bhi to le zara Nayan sukh😈

Khabardaar agar us ko "tan badan" chupane wala kurta pehnaya to😆

P.s- tujhe pata hai I was sitting in the cab while reading this and suddenly radio mirchi played bheege hoth tere pyasa ye dil mera and I was like aaj yahi mar jaaungi mai to ☺️

Behen kya tha ye.... Haaye khush aur pata nahi kya kya kar diya tune.... Ise kehte hai kaand 🤪❤️

Guilty for not being guilty, haye Anuj.

Vest nahi pehnte, are Anu bhi aurat hai, aaj prove ho gaya

Jab lady aur luck saath the to aaj ye to hona hi tha

Anuj aap.... theek hai 😉

This woman...will be death of me🤬🤬

One more

Aur paani ne kya mood badla. Agar shower se sukha sukha aate to dil toot jata... Bacha liya tune.

Waise pani, kurta aur Anuj ki hotness, ye to hona tha.

Sach sach bol, andar kitne der the dono.

Kavya ki jali..sach kahu to soch kitni jali hogi..ye itna hot banda to mujhe milna chahiye.. are socho Anuj waise us kurte main dekh uska kya haal hua hoga, wo bhi aurat hai. 🤣🤣

Lagi rah aise hi... Pleej pleej.

This was superb 👏fire hot amazing song great flow

Literally read this during a break btwn surgeries... Thanks for the tag bc this day was hella dull

More importantly - I wish IF had a "drool" emoticon reply.

I'm speechless ...

🙈🙈🙈🙈🙈

Nazar nahi mila paa rhe hai hm kisi se...smiling all the time while reading...thank you for the update...keep writing💓

This is what is called dangerous☺️

Uff sari tharak imagine ki maine 🤣

Amazing writing. Please do write more os u write really well

Nish yaar teri imagination itni wild kaise ho sakti hai, raaz khol hi de ab tu

I loved Anuj when Anu was taading him, he felt happily violatec😳...vest na pehenta wo😳

Anu teri ekdum mast hai, trip catch mein iski nazre kahan kahan jaati hai and ye kya kya feel kar leti hai bolo

and man the bathroom bit, it was hot!!!!!!!

paani mein aag laga di tune, that sensuous encounter set the temps soaring...

Kavya ki toh tune aisi li ke maza aa gaya

thank you fir writing such a rapchik update, mann aur kya kya prasann ho gaya mera🤣

Fire brigade mangwa de tuuuu, angaro pe hai armaaan 😍😍😂😂😂

Nish you are lying and this OS is a big proof of it. Ho hi nahi sakta ki tum single ho upar se innocent wali. Nope. No! I have my doubts 😂😂

Do din kya bahar gayi tune bawal macha diya idhar.😆

I don't even know which part to pick up and say this was good. It kept getting better so much that at the point when Anu slips in the bathroom mere muh se 'Oh my god ab ye giri...ye bichare ko blame mat karna fir...' nikla.

Hotness meter score 10 / 5 !

Aesthetic writing score 10 / 10

Kavya ka troll score 100 / 10 🤣

Very well done.

Ps: I need some private word after reading this 😂...

Beautiful one shot 💞💞