Bata dein..... phir kabhi - OS updated pt-3, pg-7 - Page 5

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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

this was beautiful

i loved it

i want so many maan moments like this once anu also starts loving anuj in the show

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Awesome....darta hai anuj ki kahi wo lines cross ho gyi then wo apne aapko rok nahi payega kbhi bhi...love it plz continue

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

Dil mein laddu foot rahe hain hahhaha. Awesome writeup. Plz continue, loving it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

This is really adorable 😍 I enjoyed it very much 😊 please continue it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Itna maza aaya parh kar mai kya batau ❤️


Uffff kitne besharam aur befikre hai ye dono teri story me(in a good way)


Makers dekh rahe ho aap log....kuch seekho humare forum k writers se

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sorry guys for the delay. I was busy with some personal work. Hope this makes up for it.

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It was morning and Anu has just one thing in her mind to get ready fast as she so wanted to see her love. She has butteflies in her stomach while searching for clothes she wants to wear today. She is standing in front of the closet and couldn't find anything appropriate to wear. She nowadays wants to look best of her, she wants to get ready for Anuj.

She is upset that she don't have anything to wear. She has a pile of sarees in front but she don't find them appropriate as all were boring.

"Kya karu, isme to kuch bhi acha nahi lag raha hai, Anuj ke yaha Jane ke liye."

Then she slapped herself mentally that she has to go to Anuj's house for breakfast and then office. She is not going on any date. Well she choose a plain red saree silk saree with simple border. While getting ready she has just one thing in mind, " Anuj ko to thik lagungi na mai".

One the other hand Anuj was very excited as if Anu was coming for the first time. Well after their love coffession to each other, it is her first time. He was now and then coming to the kitchen to check what GK was cooking for breakfast. This at some point irk GK.

GK: Tu baar baar yaha kyu aa raha hai, office ke liye ready ho ja. Mai sab ready kar dunga. Waise Teri hi nahi meri bhi kuch lagti hai.

Anuj in confusion asked what he is saying.

GK: Bahu lagti hai pagal. Tum log kabhi na kabhi to shaadi kar hi loge, or jab tak nahi bhi karte to bhi to maine use humesha Bahu hi maana hai. Ba tu maze lene band kar or naha le Jake. Anu aayegi mai bata dunga.

Anuj actually forget to bath in excitement. He rashed to washroom to bath and ready before Anu's arrival as he too couldn't wait to see his love.

Door bell rang. This was not heard by Anuj has he was totally in the mood to enjoy hot shower but was trying to rush the usual. So GK opened the door and there comes his Bahu, Anu.

GK: Aao aao beta. Good morning.

Anu: Jai Sri Krishna kaka.

She took the blessings but shyly entered the house. She can smell the food even though the chimney took away the fragrance. In this she wants to smell him too. But where is he, she thought silently in her mind, thinking that Kaka may read her mind.

She sat on couch but her eyes were searching Anuj. GK knew that since their relationship is new so they need more time with themselves alone so he asked her to go to his room and wait and he will call both when breakfast will be ready. She smiled and headed to Anuj's room.

She can here him singing loud enough from the washroom.

"Would you tremble, if I touched your lips?

Would you laugh?

Oh, please, tell me this

Now, would you die for the one you loved?

Hold me in your arms tonight

I can be your hero, baby

I can kiss away the pain

I will stand by you forever

You can take my very breath away"

This is his one of the favourite songs.

She never had listened to this song. This is her first ever visit to his bedroom ever since they met after the re- union party. She was trying to find a place to sit as she is too shy to sit on his bed.

But then she sat on his bed. Suddenly he shouted from the washroom.

Anuj: GK, mera towel, yaar I am sorry I forgot today. Dedo...

Anu started searching for the towel but she cannot find it. So she opened the closet where she can find n no. of designer suits, ethnic wear, a row of watches, aray of cufflinks. She somehow found a towel and knocked the door

Anuj took it thinking its GK but what he don't know that Anu has reached his house and is in his bedroom.

Since it was getting late and he need to be ready quickly, he came out in the towel 😜.

Anu was playing with her pallu and what she saw in front made her red. Every cell of her body is now in the alert mode but brain and heart have no contact. Brain actually have stopped working and heart was racing.

She knew that he was handsome and fit but first time she is seeing her man wet and dripping with hotness.

Water was dripping from his hair to his bare shoulder and find ways through his chest. He moved his hair away from his eyes to see his lady love all in red in front of him. Not just by her clothes but seeing him like this her cheeks were matching her saree colour.

He really want to kiss her deeply to the end of time but he knew that she is still naive to this feeling of love as she has never experienced love before. What she said love was her duty or attachments towards her ex husband.

This is the new feeling that he is seeding in her.

Breaking the awkward silence, Anuj asked her to wait on the dinning table.

Anu: nahi mai yahi thik hmm.

She bite her tongue that what she said just now. Anuj smiled as he too want her close to him.

Anuj: thik hai, yahi raho. But mujhe change karna hoga.

Anu: nahi mai chali jati hmm

Anuj: chali Jana, but can you help me with clothes today, aaj kya pahnu?

Anu: Aap kuch bhi pahen lijiye, aap to handsome hi lagte hai.

She said that maintaining 2 metre distance as if following the COVID protocol. But she too shy to close this distance today.

Anuj took her hand in his,

Anuj: mere pass Ane se darr kyu Rahi ho Aaj

Anu: aisa kuch nahi hai

She said this looking nowhere but him. She know that both of them are mature enough to handle anything if something happens. So she gathered courage and came close to him.

She took out his black suit with black and white stripes tie. But while selecting she never looked at her love who was at this time world's sexiest Man.

Anuj lifted her chin and made her look at him. "Please look at me".

He placed a warm and wet kiss on her forehead.

Anu: Anuj please rukiye, kal aapko limit cross hone ka Darr lag raha tha, aaj muje lag rah hai, ki mai hi na limits cross kar doon.

Anuj hugged her tightly, he never wanted to let her go now. In 26 years, he has got this peace in love, he was just praying to God that their love should only grow more and shine brighter.

She broke the hug but to her surprise her lipstick mark was imprinted on his wet chest.

Anu: sorry sorry ye lipstick aapke

Showing him way to where she was pointing.

He teasingly asked her, "ye mark kahi or bhi de do".

Anu: phir kabhi...

She pushed him slightly with a shy smile at him and left the room.

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So that's it guys.. I am sorry if I made any mistake. Sach me this was the most difficult part of all the others. 😂 Hope u will like it . Nahi bhi like kiya to bata dena ki kya acha nahi laga. And Haan please ignore typos. 🤭

Edited by tintin0602 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

Tagging more.


BTW that song here was Enrique, Hero

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

I dont know about Anu but I am definitely red after reading this☺☺☺😚😚 Anuj is towel right out of the shower is a fantasy for all of us here and oh ma this scenario is perfect..you are right..even if something happens they are matured enough to handle it..and hope they dont wait till marraige for physical intimacy😛😛😋😋 fantastic write up...plszzzz continue🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

😍🥰😍🥰😍

Can’t keep the smile off my face after reading this 😀

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Posted: 3 years ago
#50

Heart warming moments☺️ please continue..

Edited by naadhiraa - 3 years ago

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