Bata dein..... phir kabhi - OS updated pt-3, pg-7

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Guys, I know we are some what disappointed by today episode. So I thought of writing something that may cheer you guys.


Everyone was at Anupama's house with Bapuji to have dinner. Here everyone means, GK, Samar, Nanadani, Pakhi and most importantly Anuj. And ya Devika too joined them. After a very long time they are laughing, smiling. Their laughter was like a soothing songs at the midnight.

Pakhi as usual was making no. Of request for dinner. Samar was teasing her for her weight she put on. GK and bapuji were playing chess enjoying the smiles on everyones faces. Their mind is at peace today.

Devika now knew that Anu knew about Anuj's feeling and she is okay with that, that she will always respect his feelings. But still she is keeping an special eye on these two, as today something is different, she is suspecting that something is going on. She is extra cautious today that if they are hiding something.

Well Anupama and Anuj were busy cooking together for the family. They are sweetly exchanging glances.

Anuj: Dough banane me help kar doon kya?

Anuj came from the back and interlocked his finger with hers in the flour. Her cheeks were turning pink and is getting goosebumps. His touch created shiver in her every cell of body.

Anu: Please Anuj, koi dekh lega, bache hai samne, kaka.....

Anuj on the other hand were enjoying her shyness. He pulled back his hand and waved fingers on her blouse's dori. She was about to go weak on her knees. Her face has become all red, she clutched his shirt's sleeve to get hold of something.

Anuj: Get a grip of yourself my lady. Sab dekh rahe hai.

He winked her and moved back to give her space to cook.

Finally, dinner is made and served. Everyone enjoyed it. They appreciated them as when they both cook, taste always get enhanced. Anupama looked at Anuj and now she wanted some space with him alone. They have gone a way ahead by solving problems together. She now need some time with him and just him.

Anu: Ice khana hai kisi ko?

Everyone was in for this. Samar told her to stay at home and he will bring ice cream for everyone. But she denied.

Anu: Anuj aap mere saath chalenge? Jaldi aa jayenge.

She looked at everyone to ensure that they dont have to worry. But she knew that they will not be back too early. Anuj gave her smirk and nodded knowing exactly that what is going in Anuapama's mind.

But to their surprise Devika jumped and said, " Mai bhi chalungi" as she was really suspicious that they are hiding something. They both cant deny her. Anuapama was disappointed but Anuj ensured with his expression that he will handle.

They were in car. Devika has placed herself in the back-seat to keep an eye on both. She wanted to actually tease them and enjoy that she has not done in last 26 years.

There was an un-wanted silence. Anupama wanted to be alone with Anuj but now they are not.

Devika: An, tu tension me kyu lag rahi hai.

Anu: Nahi, mai to thik hmm. Tu jyada soch mat and inhe disattract na kar.

Devika: ohho, inhee... kyu be Anuj, tu inhe kabse ban gaya Anu ke liye?

Anuj: Devika, tu pagal hai kya? Tu chup chap nahi baith sakti kya?

He stopped the car, in front of an ice cream parlor. He asked Devika to bring ice cream. Actually requested her. To which Devika agreed, knowing that they really need space.

Anupama looked at Anuj lovingly and smiled at him.

Anuj: Chalo thodi der ke liye hi sahi but thoda time to mila na akele. Office me to kaam ki wajah se saath rah kar bhi time nahi milta.

He again interlocked his fingers with hers and took them right over his chest. She can feel his heart beat. She cannot stop herself now. She leaned closed to him and placed her head on his shoulder. He placed warm kiss on her forehead. She turned pink again and dig her nose towards his neck.

Anuj: Kya huya? hmmm, bolo...

Anu: Kuch nahi, bas aise hi rahna hai thodi der.

She guided their interlocked fingers towards her chest. Her heart beat was racing like anything. She placed a kiss on his hands and again hide them with her hands, interlocking it.

Anuj: I never knew ki hum aise kabhi bhi saath me...

Anu: Thank you ki aapne mujhe itna pyar diya

Anuj (teasing her): To pyar ko reward bhi to milna chahiye na?

Anu: kaisa reward sarkar, boliye, sab kuch milega..

It seems that Anu gave him all the rights now on her. He looked at her and let her face towards him. He moved towards her. Se can feel his warm breath on her lips. But they were stopped by a phone ring. It was Devika.

Anuj: Kya huya?

Devika: yaar yaha black current nahi hai.

Anuj: Koi nahi tu aaja

Deevika was just outside and she saw them in the same close proximity. Anupama and Anuj too knew that they were caught just in the middle of action.

Anuj: Anu, kya kare ab? Isne to dekh liya? Bata dein?

Anu: Nahi nahi, abhi nahi, but batayenge

Anuj: Thik hai waise bhi chup chup ke pyar karne ka maza kuch or hi hai

Anu: haan,batayenge but phir kabhi


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I am stopping here guys. Do tell me if you like it or not. Anyways batana zaroor. I would love to hear from you guys. Thank you for all the love that you have given me in the forum.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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tagging some more friends

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am smiling and grinning like a fool 😂😍😍

Superb sweet story yaar. Loved ur writing. Do keep writing😍😍😍👏👏

Kaash we get such love phase in the show too 😥😥🤞☹☹

Thank u for d tag dear 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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*Swoon and lying on the floor*

Oh this so so so cute! Much needed today.


I actually could imagine them being like this and Devika butting in!

Really really hope we get these scenes down the track. They will be embedded in ITV for ever


🔥🔥🔥honestly Anuj and Anu would be fire



Thank you! You write with such ease!


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Posted: 3 years ago
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will read on my way home...


thank you for writing aaj, when we needed it the most🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintin0602

Guys, I know we are some what disappointed by today episode. So I thought of writing something that may cheer you guys.


Everyone was at Anupama's house with Bapuji to have dinner. Here everyone means, GK, Samar, Nanadani, Pakhi and most importantly Anuj. And ya Devika too joined them. After a very long time they are laughing, smiling. Their laughter was like a soothing songs at the midnight.

Pakhi as usual was making no. Of request for dinner. Samar was teasing her for her weight she put on. GK and bapuji were playing chess enjoying the smiles on everyones faces. Their mind is at peace today.

Devika now knew that Anu knew about Anuj's feeling and she is okay with that, that she will always respect his feelings. But still she is keeping an special eye on these two, as today something is different, she is suspecting that something is going on. She is extra cautious today that if they are hiding something.

Well Anupama and Anuj were busy cooking together for the family. They are sweetly exchanging glances.

Anuj: Dough banane me help kar doon kya?

Anuj came from the back and interlocked his finger with hers in the flour. Her cheeks were turning pink and is getting goosebumps. His touch created shiver in her every cell of body.

Anu: Please Anuj, koi dekh lega, bache hai samne, kaka.....

Anuj on the other hand were enjoying her shyness. He pulled back his hand and waved fingers on her blouse's dori. She was about to go weak on her knees. Her face has become all red, she clutched his shirt's sleeve to get hold of something.

Anuj: Get a grip of yourself my lady. Sab dekh rahe hai.

He winked her and moved back to give her space to cook.

Finally, dinner is made and served. Everyone enjoyed it. They appreciated them as when they both cook, taste always get enhanced. Anupama looked at Anuj and now she wanted some space with him alone. They have gone a way ahead by solving problems together. She now need some time with him and just him.

Anu: Ice khana hai kisi ko?

Everyone was in for this. Samar told her to stay at home and he will bring ice cream for everyone. But she denied.

Anu: Anuj aap mere saath chalenge? Jaldi aa jayenge.

She looked at everyone to ensure that they dont have to worry. But she knew that they will not be back too early. Anuj gave her smirk and nodded knowing exactly that what is going in Anuapama's mind.

But to their surprise Devika jumped and said, " Mai bhi chalungi" as she was really suspicious that they are hiding something. They both cant deny her. Anuapama was disappointed but Anuj ensured with his expression that he will handle.

They were in car. Devika has placed herself in the back-seat to keep an eye on both. She wanted to actually tease them and enjoy that she has not done in last 26 years.

There was an un-wanted silence. Anupama wanted to be alone with Anuj but now they are not.

Devika: An, tu tension me kyu lag rahi hai.

Anu: Nahi, mai to thik hmm. Tu jyada soch mat and inhe disattract na kar.

Devika: ohho, inhee... kyu be Anuj, tu inhe kabse ban gaya Anu ke liye?

Anuj: Devika, tu pagal hai kya? Tu chup chap nahi baith sakti kya?

He stopped the car, in front of an ice cream parlor. He asked Devika to bring ice cream. Actually requested her. To which Devika agreed, knowing that they really need space.

Anupama looked at Anuj lovingly and smiled at him.

Anuj: Chalo thodi der ke liye hi sahi but thoda time to mila na akele. Office me to kaam ki wajah se saath rah kar bhi time nahi milta.

He again interlocked his fingers with hers and took them right over his chest. She can feel his heart beat. She cannot stop herself now. She leaned closed to him and placed her head on his shoulder. He placed warm kiss on her forehead. She turned pink again and dig her nose towards his neck.

Anuj: Kya huya? hmmm, bolo...

Anu: Kuch nahi, bas aise hi rahna hai thodi der.

She guided their interlocked fingers towards her chest. Her heart beat was racing like anything. She placed a kiss on his hands and again hide them with her hands, interlocking it.

Anuj: I never knew ki hum aise kabhi bhi saath me...

Anu: Thank you ki aapne mujhe itna pyar diya

Anuj (teasing her): To pyar ko reward bhi to milna chahiye na?

Anu: kaisa reward sarkar, boliye, sab kuch milega..

It seems that Anu gave him all the rights now on her. He looked at her and let her face towards him. He moved towards her. Se can feel his warm breath on her lips. But they were stopped by a phone ring. It was Devika.

Anuj: Kya huya?

Devika: yaar yaha black current nahi hai.

Anuj: Koi nahi tu aaja

Deevika was just outside and she saw them in the same close proximity. Anupama and Anuj too knew that they were caught just in the middle of action.

Anuj: Anu, kya kare ab? Isne to dekh liya? Bata dein?

Anu: Nahi nahi, abhi nahi, but batayenge

Anuj: Thik hai waise bhi chup chup ke pyar karne ka maza kuch or hi hai

Anu: haan,batayenge but phir kabhi


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I am stopping here guys. Do tell me if you like it or not. Anyways batana zaroor. I would love to hear from you guys. Thank you for all the love that you have given me in the forum.


Neki aur puch-puch ... likho, dil khol ke likho znd someone pls send this to bhavna!!! We need these kind of scenes ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Haaaye....tu ne mera dil khush kar ditta ye likh kar🤗

This was so sweet....gaurav and Rupali will definitely nail this scene if it happens onscreen (after 3000 years)

Whenever I feel ki ab maan ka bhoot utar Raha hai mere sir par se tab tab tum log itne mast fanfictions likh k le aate ho and I start dreaming again😆

Yaaaar tu likhti Raha kar....zyada intezaar mat karaya kar pileeeej😛

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is so good ❤️

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Trollbaaz

Posted: 3 years ago
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Soooo beautifully written.....🥰🥰🥰

Keep writing dear!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I always enjoy Devika Anu and Anuj scenes. Devika teasing them scenes are to sone pe suhaga.

Can’t keep smile off of my face after reading this.

Plz continue dear

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