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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chalo bhai Sunday he n ham kuch na likhe hazam ni hota...os ke title ka aur os ka koi rista ni he🤣Bas vese hi aa gaya mind me to likh diya.


He open the door of his home.....its was dark in room...just like his life...no hope no light...he feel frustrated of this darkness this loneliness but wht he can do about it...its not tht he doesn't enjoy or don't like the pleasant but it was not meant to him...he sigh out of tiredness n sit there on sofa without turning on the light...


She:itni der se koi ghar aata he kya?time to dekh Lia kijie


He smile at familiar voice...she was there...his queen was there...ofcourse in imagination but she was there...he feel light hearing tht voice...atleast he was getting care in his imagination but still it was enough for him...kuch na hone se kuch hona bhala ...he looked at her direction n smile....


Yes she was there ...in purple saree with little white shiney border in it...he always wanted to see her in tht saree...he bought tht two year back..but never dared to gift her...n he try to imagine her in tht saree but always get failed but today she was in tht saree...it was quite surprise for him..but after this hectic day it gave him some joy n he doesn't want ruin it by overthinking it...he was constantly looking at her...she look so beautiful so fresh...gorgeous...


She:aapse puchh ri hu kuch itna late kyu hua?


It's quite usual of him to talk to her whenever he feel empty n today was tht day


He:bht kaam tha anu...Pura din office....files...


She:to itna kaam karte kyu he aap?itna thak jate he....


He laught at her question:kuch bhulne ke liye kahi to man lagana padega na....kaam karuga to apne khayalo se dur rahuga jo adhuri si chahat he use puri hone ke sapne se dur rahuga...jo tut gaya to shayad me sambhal na paau khud ko isse achha busy rakhu khudko...


She:kabhi apni adhuri chahat ko b mauka de do...use mauka hi nai doge to Pura kese hogi.....


Before she can say further he yawned....


She:chalie kuch kha lijie fir so jaie....


He:muje jara b bhukh ni he bas thak gaya hu so jana he....tum b so Jaoo...


She:yahi so jaie meri God me sir rakh ke..


Before he can argue further she keep his head in her lap n stared to carrase his hair...n gave kiss on his eyes....n he fall asleep with tht cute smile..



It was new experience for him...he always dream about her talk with her...laugh with her...but today she came in tht purple saree...n offer him food n thn let him sleep in her lap.its so weird so real ..he feel so different but he was loving it...he was loving it tht with the feeling of being loved being cared n she beside him with the thought he fall asleep holding her pallu as she will leave if he don't hold tht.


She looked at him..


Carrasing his hair...she kissed on his forhead...how someone can be so innocent so caring ...how someone can be so understanding...he is the person who gave her everything but never askwd for anything in return...today she realize tht how lucky she was having him.this person loves him n tht was her biggest achievement..


His love is everything for her but today she came to gave the love to him too...because he deserve tht ...more thn her she deserved tht love...


She kissed his forhead..stroked his hair..


She:I love you anuj..


He smiled in his sleep:I love you too anu


जो मेरी मंजिलों को जाती है

तेरे नाम की कोई सड़क है ना

जो मेरे दिल को दिल बनाती है

तेरे नाम की कोई धड़क है ना






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Nany thumbnail
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Posted: 4 years ago
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No proof reading actually Mera operation hua he to 10 minute maximum mobile milta he n I can't live without writing n 10 minutes Me itna hi hua...hope u guys like it...miss yaaa🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Take care dear and get well soon. I loved it! Can’t believe ye 10minutes ka magic hai😇 You are superb writer. Keep it up 👏🏼👏🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Take care dear 😊 and this is such a beautiful and emotional story ❤❤ all hearts❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Kaunsi operation hope you are ok

So nice for u to write this for us yaar

Beautiful 🥰❤️

Loved it

How ppl handle such love pains kuch log in a destructive way

And kuch log kaam main aise doob jaate hain 😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Its soo good in 10 min...plz aage continue krna if u get time

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wishing you for fast recovery.🤗


I liked how you brought the twist of Anuj always imagining Anu into a reality😆. Wonderfully written. 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Get well soon nany❤️

Beautiful os❤️

Anuj ka khwab tha, aur anu ki hakeekat.

Perhaps you'll do another 10 min magic, and write a part where anuj wakes up and finds anu seated while he was sleeping in her lap

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Posted: 4 years ago
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10 minutes me to Maggie bhi mahi banti acchi aur tu ne itna mast os likh daala😍😍😍😍

This was superb

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Take care n get well soon, nice update.

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