Viditi SS : Twisted Fate [ completed ]

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi guys I have this new idea for a ViDiti story: Twisted Fate, right now i'm not sure whether it will be an SS or FF but has to be somewhere in and around 10 chapters.

It's an established relationship vikrant and aditi are married, and i am thinking of writing something out of my zone, that is angst. Thoda sa slow burn hoga isme, fluff hai lekin aansu bhi bohot hai..😭



PS: Story includes another random character but doesn't have much dialogues, a POV may be.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I know u guys are hyped about the married part... but ro-oge sab log..😭
prologue padhne ke baad batana kaisa laga 😭
Edited by loveinshi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Concept:

ACP Vikrant Singhal and ASP Aditi Sharma have been happily married for over an year now. They're complete opposite of each other, inseparable like 2 pieces of jigsaw, as their friends and family like to put it. But fate had different plans for them, their world has been turned upside down and torn apart in last 6 months. Nothing is as it was before. What happened?

We will see their life through their own eyes.


Character sketch:
Mains:

ACP Vikrant Singhal:



Graduated at the top of his batch and has been working in the police force for last 10 years. Bit of a 'sadu' and really sucks at making jokes. Married to ASP Aditi sharma whom he loves more than anything in the world. But last 6 months have completely changed his life, he is not what he used to be. Is this change for the better or the worse?


ASP Aditi Sharma:



Transferred from Delhi to Mumbai to help ACP vikrant solve the unsolvable and found love instead. Lives life to the fullest. Talks A LOT! But last six months have changed her completely, her world had been torn apart. what had happened?

Dr. Nikhil Bhatia:



Vikrants best friend since the day he moved to Mumbai, and a handy doctor to fix all his broken bones. Currently an orthopedic surgeon at The galaxy hospital in Mumbai. He loved Aditi, Vikrant and her were just perfect for each other. But for last 6 months he had a front row seat to the train-wreak their life had become. Will the things be ever back to normal?


Others:
DCP Suresh Dutt, Vikrant's boss.
Inspector Shivani Joglekar, Aditi's replacement.
Edited by loveinshi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys this story has alot of time jumps hope u all will be able to keep up. Just to get the correct environment I have assumed that this is September 2018 going on. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue : Twisted Fate
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Vikrant moved his hand to grab his 8th vodka shot when Nikhil pried it out of his hands. Vikrant already had too much on his mind and drinking wasn't going to solve anything. Vikrant's lips twisted into a sardonic smile and he finally started talking,

"Saari galti meri hai.. meine khud apni hasti khelti duniya ujad di hai."

Nikhil tried to stop his friend from blaming himself for the turns his life had taken, but vikrant motioned him to stop and continued,

"Na hi mei uss din use break lene ke liye bolta, na hum zagadte aur mei ek hi raat me un dono ko kho .."

Words got stuck in his throat and he stopped talking. Nikhil understood it and sat there quietly sipping his drink. After a few minutes vikrant all of a sudden stumbled out of his bar stool and dashed towards the door before Nikhil could stop him.

"Mujhe ye thik karna hi hoga." He mumbled as he pushed through the throngs of people to get out of there.

As soon as Vikrant left, Nikhil started dialing his number constantly, vikrant was not in a condition to drive anywhere, let alone travel all the way to Delhi.

"The number you have dialed is currently busy, please try again after some time. App jiss number.."

Nikhil cut the call, only to try again. The called went through this time and Nikhil launched,

"Vikrant kahan hai tu? Sunn ab raat bohot ho gayi hai, kuchh ulta-sidha mat kar dena, hum kal subah baat karenge na ispe."

"Hello? Vikrant ji ka accident ho gaya hai."


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Do let me know what you feel of this and if I should continue with the chapters.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yess do continue. This seems interesting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting very interesting. Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Firstly thanks for the link
And secondly, coming to the story, it was fab, would love to see Vikrant drunk but sadly it cant happen in the show!
Though i loved your concept and the plot is amazing!
Continue sooner !
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: xFawadKhanx

Firstly thanks for the link

And secondly, coming to the story, it was fab, would love to see Vikrant drunk but sadly it cant happen in the show!
Though i loved your concept and the plot is amazing!
Continue sooner !


thanks dishi 😊
and im so sorry, iss wali SS me koi drunk vikrant nahi hai.. lekin future me kabhi ho sakta hai, mei yaad rakhungi😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys 2 things before u read chapter 1.
A. I'm not from mumbai so i have randomly selected places
B. And only, only because of one fundamental thing in this SS i have changed the entire timeline..šŸ¤“ so please note, WE ARE CURRENTLY IN SEPTEMBER 2018

Enjoy!! 😃

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