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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: richa.amonkar

luvd d lst pic hiri 😊 nice editing...mus say...keep up d gr8 wrk...ur jus too amazin..thnk u sooo much fr d awesome pix n updates... 😊 ❤️ 😊 ❤️ 😊


thanks a million richa :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Navi-Dimple as Agam-Nimrit Continued... (My Story, PART 8)

We start off from the point on one side Tej and Rani Sahiba (Rippan Aunty) are in the hospital waiting for Amrit's surgeru to get over, where as Agam and Nimrit as cosily sleeping together, arm in arm, hand in hand.

Rippan Aunty informs Amrit's Father about the accident, he's away on Royal business. While RajMata goes back to the Palace to rest and sends her daughter instead to the hospital to give Rani Sahiba support. Tej tells Rippan Aunty that he will inform Nimrit later and that not to worry, things sort themselves out, and everyone gets what they truly deserves. Rippan Aunty agrees, but says she is a Mother, and as much as she dislikes Amrit for everything she did, she does not want anything to happen to her, at least for humanitarian reasons. Tej understands and says he will be by her side till Amrit regains consciousness. Rippan Aunty thanks her and says Nirmal must be so proud to have such a wonderful son.

As hours pass away, sun slowly rises and soon its morning time. Agam and Nimrit are fast asleep in each others arms, having spent the most beautiful night of their lives together. The alarm clock rings at 6, and Nimrit slowly opens her eyes. She sees Agam's face really close to hers and smiles. She tries to unlock his fingers from hers, but is unable to do so and neither is she able to move away from Agam's arms.

Nimrit: Agam ji, Agam ji, mujhe uthne dijiye.
Agam: Hmmm.
Nimrit: Agam ji, haath chodiye na.
Agam: Hmm.
Nimrit: Agam ji, agar aap nahi chodenge, toh main uthungi kaise?
Agam: Thodi der ke liye so jaiye na, aapko hamesha uthne ki jaldi kyu rehti hai? Please, sirf aaj ke din, mere paas so jaiye.
Nimrit: Main to aapke paas hi hu Agam ji. (Smiles and then hugs him and sleeps). Lekin sirf ek ghante ke liye. Phir main aaki ek bhi nahi sunungi.
Agam: Hmmm (kisses her on head and holds her tightly and sleeps).

At the hospital, the surgery is about to come to an end. And Tej is thinking of going telling Nimrit after a few hours, but then realizes that Sunita Aunty wanted to send Agam and Nimrit on honeymoon, since her husband wasn't going to be back for couple more weeks. So he thinks its better to book something and then let Nimrit know, so that they can go away, start their own lives in peace, at least for a week or two, and not worry too much about Amrit's recovery. He figures that if Nimrit is around, then she will end up spending all her time with her Mom and Amrit at the hospital. As soon as surgery gets over, and Amrit is brought back into her room, Rippan Aunty and her sister-in-law visit Amrit (who is still unconscious). As the doctors say she will take few more hours to gain consciousness and that she is no longer in danger, everyone decides to go home and rest and then come back again.

Tej goes home and informs his Mother that the person who had the accident was in fact Amrit. Tej's parents are a bit shocked to hear that and Tej explains why he didn't tell them who the person was, as he didn't want to disturb Agam and Nimrit who are just about starting their new life together. They understand and Tej gets a few hours sleep.

An hour has passed away and the alarm clock rings again. Nimrit wakes up again.

Nimrit: Agam ji, ab to mujhe uthne dijiye (She kisses him on his cheek to bribe him!)
Agam: Hmmm... pehle aap phir se woh kijiye jo aapne abhi kiya!
Nimrit: (Realizes Agam wants another kiss so tries to be cheeky) Kya kiya?
Agam: (Speaks with his eyes shut) Aapko pata hai aapne kya kiya.
Nimrit: Maine toh sirf aapse kaha ki mujhe uthne dijiye.
Agam: Haa, aur uske baa aapne kya kiya?
Nimrit: Uske baa main aapka intezaar kar rahi thi, ki kab aap mujhe chod de, aur kab main uth kar naha lu!
Agam: Achcha, to theek hai, aap jaiye (lets go of her fingers and her arm, and frowns with his eyes still shut).
Nimrit: (Sees that she's upset her beloved Agam ji, so gets up bends towards him and kisses him on the other cheek! She is about to then walk away when Agam holds her and and pulls her towards him).
Nimrit: (Falls on Agam) Agam ji?
Agam: (Brings Nimrit's face close to his and tries to kiss her and just then Nimrit puts her hands on Agam's lips, and Agam frowns once more. He moves her hands and says) Woh aap mera kurta pehen kar jaa rahi thi... toh mera kurta mujhe wapas kijiye...
Nimrit: Lekin aap hi nai mujhe pehnaya tha...
Agam: Haa, aur ab main hi wapas maang raha hu, mujhe abhi chahiye.
Nimrit: Nahi!
Agam: Agar aap nahi dengi, to main nikaal lunga!
Nimrit: Aur agar aap aise karenge, toh phir main yeh kaise karungi?
Agam: Yeh kya?
Nimrit: Yeh (she goes close to Agam's face, and closes her eyes, Agam realizes he's about to get a sweet sweet present from his beloved wife, so he closes his eyes too and both kiss passionately).

Nimrit then tells Agam that now they need to start planning the everyday routine that surrounds the running of the dhaba and work towards achieving their goal, to not only repay Papaji's money, but also earn their own livelihood. Agam agrees and wakes up. Both have a shower, get ready, and just as Nimrit is about to put sindoor, Agam stops her and puts it on for her instead. He says that he will continue doing it till the time he gets bored, and Nimrit gently pats him, so he says he's only joking and that he would like to do it for as long as he lives.

Meanwhile, Tej makes some calls to book a honeymoon tour as advised by Sunita Aunty. He then goes over to Bullet's house to talk to both Sunita Aunty and the lovey-dovey couple!

Nimrit goes to the kitchen to help her Mummy ji with breakfast preparations and apologizes for coming in late. Sunita Aunty says that she is not late at all, and that even if they woke up after 2-3 more hours, she wouldn't mind. She can sense Nimrit is really happy and she figures her son's marital life has indeed taken a turn and started in the true sense now, and that too on the right note! Outside, Bandook is really happy to see Tej and can't thank him enough for the decorations.

Agam: Are Bandook, main tera shukriya kaise karu mere yaar?
Tej: Tu mere saath phir se itna emotional hona shuru mat kar de. Tu na apni saari emotions waali baatein Nimrit ji ke liye rakh. Mere saath yeh sab kuch tujhe suit nahi karta.
Agam: (Hugs him and says) Are tu ne itni mehnat karke woh sab kuch kiya, mere aur Nimrit ji ke liye...
Tej: Ek minute, maine? Maine toh kuch bhi nahi kiya. Woh Tai ji ne phool walon ko bulaya tha, toh main jakar sirf candles le aaya. Sara kaam to phool walon ne hi kar diya, aur candles sajane main bhi meri madad kari. Ab tu unhe jaakar bhi yu thank you bolega?
Agam: (Smiles) Main to tujhe bata nahi sakta Bandook, aaj mujhe ek alag hi khushi ka ehsaas hai. Aisa lagta hai ki main kabhi bhi Nimrit ji ko apni aakhon ke samne se door na hone do.
Tej: To phir honeymoon ka plan ek dum sahi hai!
Agam: Kya? Honeymoon?

Tej smirks and asks Agam to wait till Nimrit and Sunita Aunty come out from the kitchen.

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Edited by hiri_piri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one ...loved the update ...nw waitin fr u nxt update hehehehhehehe 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg... Itana achha aur romantic likhane ke baad bhi kahati ho ki slightly romantic...no hiri it is so much romantic...very well written...awesome update...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks richa, will surely post one more update today! picture update looks slightly impossible, but will try nevertheless

and thanks archu, glad you found it so romantic. i thought i'd be boring you guys with too much talk of amrit! hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
U know what tum hume kabhi bore hone hi nahi deti ho hiri. Aur mai to original show ki story alag hai ye bhul hi gayi thi. Thanks to u . For ur hardwork..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Navi-Dimple as Agam-Nimrit Continued... (My Story, PART 9)

We start off from the point on one side Tej (in his uniform) and Agam are waiting near the dining area, for Nimrit and Sunita Aunty to come out. Tej is quite excited to let everyone know that he has booked a honeymoon package as per Sunita Aunty's advice, but at the same time does not know how Nimrit will react when he tells her about Amrit's accident.

As Nimrit and Sunita Aunty come out of the kitchen, Sunita Aunty holding a tray with tea and tea cups and Nimrit holding freshly made punjabi parathas with chutney, Agam sits at the table and asks Bandook to have a seat. Tej says he has to report for duty and can't wait for breakfast, so he'd rather just share his news and then leave.

Nimrit: Kya news hain Tej ji?
Tej: Woh maine Tai ji ke kehna par tum dono ke liye tickets book kar di hai.
Nimrit: Tickets?
Agam: Tickets? (They both say tickets at the same time and look at each other and smile).
Tej: (Thinks that at this rate he might be here forever so hurries up) Aakhir honeymoon ke bina nayi zindagi kaise shuru ho sakti hai?

Nimrit and Agam both feel shy and Sunita Aunty is really pleased. She thanks Tej and says she is blessed to have a nephew like him. While Agam and Nimrit start wondering about their honeymoon (the location doesn't really matter for either of them as just thinking about being with one another, away from everyone makes them feel giddy!). Sunita Aunty asks where they are going and Tej says he was recommended South India, so Bullet will be taking his wife to a hill-station down South for a couple of days, then they will explore a secluded beach for another couple of days and then spend the last three days in a houseboat. Sunita Aunty is really happy to hear this and says Agam and Nimrit should go shopping today as they have to leave tomorrow. Agam and Nimrit hear this, smile again and and again get lost in their own little world (while their signature tune plays in the background)!

Tej thinks he should just inform about Amrit's accident and leave as he needs to report for his duty and can't be late. He says he is sorry to interrupt in such a happy moment, but there's also some sad news. He says Amrit's had an accident. Nimrit is shocked to hear this and asks if she's okay? Tej says he can't give too many details as he'd be late for his work, but says she underwent surgery and is still unconscious. He says she can call up Rippan Aunty and get details from her. He says goodbye and leaves saying he hopes Bandook and Nimrit have a good time away in South India.

Nimrit is upset and goes to call her Mother and finds out exactly what had happened. Though she is thankful to Tej for helping her sister, she is worried and wants to go to the hospital. Her mother says its not much point waiting there, as Amrit is still unconscious. Sunita Aunty asks her not to worry as she will be with Rippan ji at all times and that she should go shopping with Agam if she still wishes to go for the honeymoon. Nimrit realizes that Sunita Aunty has spent her money to arrange this honeymoon for them, and Tej has spent his valuable time too, so doesn't want it all to go to waste.

Nimrit: Nahi Mummy ji, hum zaroor jayenge. (She thinks she can always call and get updates on how her Di is doing).
Agam: Nimrit ji, main janta hu ki aap pareshaan hain, aur agar aap nahi jana chahti to koi baat nahi. Hum baad main chale jayenge (as much as he wants to go away on the honeymoon with the love of his life, and does not want Amrit to ruin their lives yet again, he sees that Nimrit is a bit upset and thinks he wants to see her happy first and foremost. So he puts her happiness first and forgets about what he wants).
Nimrit: Nahi Agam ji, main Di se aaj hospital milne chali jaati hu aur phir hum dono kal nikal jayenge.
Agam: Toh theek hai, Varun bhi aaj raat apni shoot se wapas aa jayega, to Maa akeli nahi rahegi.
Nimrit: Lekin humein shopping jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, waise bhi, humare paas to sab kuch hai, aur kya chahiye?
Agam: (Looks at her and smiles) Hmmm.

Sunita Aunty is not happy to hear this as she wants them to go get new clothes and other things they might need for their trip. She goes in to get some money and hands it over to Nimrit and says its shagun for the start of her new life. Nimrit refuses and says she cannot take this as she doesn't need it, and that Papaji will get angry. Sunita Aunty tells her that she sold off the jewellery she never used to wear, so this is all her own money, and that Papaji will never know. Nimrit still refuses, and Sunita Aunty says would she be refusing if her own Mother gave her anything, and Nimrit gently nods, so she says Nimrit is her daughter too. And whatever she gives her with love and affection, she should happily accept. So Nimrit takes the money and says they will go shopping after she's been to the hospital.

Nimrit is torn between the two worlds, on one hand is her Di sick in hospital and on the other hand is her future with her husband whose life so far has been nothing but a saga of sadness, misery and anger, all due to her very own Di. She realizes that she has always stood by her Di's side and maybe now its time to become a dutiful wife and stand by her husband's side. They all sit to have breakfast (as they know these days are short-lived, as once Papaji is back, they will not get to sit together). Once breakfast is done, Mummyji asks Agam to take Nimrit to the hospital.

Nimrit: Nahi Mummyji, main chali jaungi. (She knows Agam can't stand being around Amrit, so doesn't want to hurt him in any way by making him do things he wouldn't be happy with).
Agam: Are, aap akele kaise jaynegi? Chaliye, main aapko le chalta hu, aur phir humein shopping bhi to karni hai na?
Nimrit: (Looks at him and smiles) Ji.

They both go outside and Agam starts his bike. Nimrit sits behind him and hugs him. Agam is happy that Nimrit is not as worried and sad as he'd hoped she would be.

Nimrit: Agam ji, main bahut khush hi ki aap mere saath hospital chal rahe hain.
Agam: Aapko pata hai na ki main aapko dukhi nahi dekh sakta, to phir main aapko aise samay main akela kaise chod deta?
Nimrit: (Smiles and hugs him even more tightly than before, resting her head on his back) Aap mere baare main kitna sochte hain! Aur main hu ki... (she thinks she will try to always think about Agam's happiness first as he's always by her side no matter what).

They reach the hospital and walk in to see Amrit in her room. She is still unconscious, and Agam holds Nimrit's hand to lend his support. Nimrit is happy that Agam's there with her and is holding her hand, and walks closer to her Di when the doctor comes in for a check-up. She asks the doctor about her Di's condition, and the doctor says things could be a lot worse. Thankfully she was brought to the hospital on time, otherwise her blood loss and injuries would have made it difficult for her to survive. He says that she will take time to recover, and after such extensive surgeries, she will also take time to regain consciousness. But seeing that her heart rate and everything else is stable, the doctor says there is no major need to worry. Nimrit is relieved to hear this. The doctor also mentions that there is nothing they can do, and ideally should only come to visit her if necessary in order to reduce chances of external infection.

Nimrit understands and after praying briefly, she tells Agam she is ready to leave. She makes a quick call to her Mother and informs her that she's at the hospital with Agam ji and about to leave, and also informs about her honeymoon plans. Rippan Aunty is really happy to hear about the trip and tells Nimrit not to worry, that she will be here to look after Amrit. She tells her to think about her life first and foremost as that is her duty as a married woman now. Nimrit agrees. Agam, who is still holding on to her hand, puts his arm around her shoulders and they walk out of the hospital. They are about to go shopping when Nimrit says she doesn't really need more clothes, being a princess, she's never really worn anything but ethnic wear since she grew up, as much as she liked to see others in jeans and dresses.

Agam: Are, toh phir hm aapke liye zaroor kuch 'angrezi' kapde khareedenge.
Nimrit: Nahin Agam ji, bahut ajeeb lagega.
Agam: Are, ajeeb kyun lagega? Aap itni khoosurat hai, itni patli hai ki koi bi kapde aap par ajeeb nahi lag sakte.
Nimrit: (Gets a bit excited with the thought of wearing jeans and other clothes like regular people) Haa, aur waise bhi, ab toh main rajkumari to hu nahin, lekin hum sirf ek ya do kapde lenge. Phir main apne purane punjabi suits palace se le sakti hu.
Agam: Aap toh mere liye hamesha rajkumari hi rahengi, rajkumari Nimrit (Smiles at her while she frowns).

They both ride away on his bike once again and hit the shops in a mall.

Nimrit: Kyun na aap mere liye choose karein aur main aapke liye?
Agam: Haa, yeh theek hai, toh phir aap mujhe apni size bata dijiye.
Nimrit: Kya? Aap andaaza nahi laga sakte?
Agam: Hmm, laga sakta hu, lekin agar kuch gadbad ho gayi to?
Nimrit: Nahi hogi Agam ji! Main bhi to aapke liye guess kar hi lungi na?

Agam doesn't seem convinced, but says yes nevertheless. They both go in opposite directions, Nimrit in menswear, and Agam in womenswear. While Nimrit looks quite confident as to what she wants to buy for Agam, Agam looks super confused and a bit embarrassed in the womenswear department!

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Edited by hiri_piri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very beautifull HIRI 👏...
sach me naya idea introduced kiya hai tumne... its interesting... muh=jhe pasand aaya wo western dress ka idea...
waiting for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx hiri fr tis wonderful update...nxt update plzzz 😉 😆 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks archu! it will possibly help me with some picture updates later :)

thanks richa, next story update hopefully today :) lots of ideas cooking in my head :)

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