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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
great start .. enjoyed reading it😊
awaiting the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: kinno

Really Good!
continue soon 😊

thankyou, will surely continue sometime this weekend :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
thanx m glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: saveeta24

Nicely penned down..👏


Enjoy reading it..good start of the story esp in what situation they got married ..

Do continue soon and waiting how you unfold their story more ..

awww thankyou dear, m glad you liked the way i started the story, will continue sometime this weekend😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: akshaaya

Nice start...
Waiting for your next update...

thanx, will update soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: cjs369

great start .. enjoyed reading it😊

awaiting the next update...

thankyou, m glad you enjoyed it..will update sometime this weekend..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Chapter Two
Agam: Nimrit tumhe kitni baar samjaya hai ki mere kamre mein mat aajao..
Nimrit turns her face, she knows that Agam is wearing his shirt but she wants to correct him..
Nimrit: Agamji humne aapko kitni baar kaha hai ki tum nahi app kahiye hume lekin aap hamari
baat sunte hi nahi hai...
Nimrit then realises tht Agam has half worn his shirt and is staring at her..she turns quickly..but
Agam pulls up the shirt and goes near her..Nimrit feels him near her and feels shy..Agam puts
his hand on her shoulder...Nimrit has sweat on her forehead..she
stammers:
Agam...Agamji..mein bahar jaati hoon aap pehle shirt pehen lijiyen..
Agam: Ruko Nimrit, haan Nimrit, how dare you tumhari himmat kaise hui...ki mujhse kaho ki
mein Agam Malik tumhe kya keh kar pukaru..
Nimirit: Agamji, yeh toh sabke taur tarika hote hain, inse insaan ke rootbe ka pata chaltahai
Agam: Bas...mujhe aap ki bakwas aur nahi sunni Nimrit ji..yeh jo button shirt ki nahi hai..use
sildo mujhe jaldi jaana hai..agar budh..maa ghar par hoti toh mein tumse nahi kehta..
Nimrit: Koi baat nahi Agamji,...mein abhi sildeti hoon, becomes happy and grabs the needle
work and is abt to start but Agam is standing far so she calls him near her..Agam hesitates but
goes near her...she starts stitching...the music kehte hai khuda ne..plays in
the background..she thn leans to cut the thread with her teeth and Agam
feels awkward..just thn Agam's mom comes in..and has a smile seeing both
of them so close..Agam is just staring at Nimrit and Nimrit staring back..
Agam's mom informs them that they both have to attend a wedding
tonight, its Agam's dad's friend's wedding since Agam's dad is not in town
Agam-Nimrit will have to attend instead of them..
At night whn Nimrit is getting ready, Agam enters her room without
knocking, and Nimrit is getting her saree straight...he sees her and the
background plays...
yeh chandni raat aur saamne ho tum
kaise tumse nigahe hatade hum
janmon ka saath hai toote ga kaise
rishta bhala yeh chootega kaise...
Agam and Nimrit leave for the wedding, there the guests compliment them
that they both look very good with each other...Agam and Nimrit both feel
very awkward...the couple gets married and the pandit repeats the vows
taken by the couple...Agam thinks that this is what he has done to Nimrit
he has taken the responsibility of her on him, he has promised to take care
of her in every instance of life whether it be bad or good...
P.s.: Will continue from here in a few hours...this isnt over yet!
Edited by sparkjule - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome update

Love it graphics

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