New FF on Aladdin and Jasmine..Pls reply.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey friends im meetu and im going to start a a new fanfic on alaadin and jasmine i hope u like it.....Ill change the story abit over here zakki is also in love with jasmine and aladdin can sense that

I'll continue from the part where Alladin came back after getting the lal pattar.

Aladdin and jasmine are are celebrating his vitory along with all of the madrasa students.

Jasmine:Aladdin hum tumse kuch kehna chate hai

Aladdin: Ha kaiye shezaadi

Jasmine:Woh hum tumse....tumse...hum (she blushes)

Aladdin remember what junaid told him abt jasmine being in love with him

Aladdin:(Giving the naughty look) Aap humse kya....

Jasmine stares into aladdin's eyes

Aladdin:Chalo hum kihin aur chalte hai

Jasmine: Thek hai.

While walking at the corridor.....both of them bump into zakki....

Jasmine:Ahhh.....!

Aladdin:Shezaadi.....!

Zakki:Maaf karna jasmine.......woh tum ho hi itni kubsoorat ke koi bhi hosh kode.

he rubs her arm where he hits her and gives a wicked grims.

Aladdin immidiatly hold zakki hand and slams it down.

Aladdin:Hath mat lagana inhe.

Zakki:Kyu tum kyon hote ho yeh kehne wale.

Aladdin:Abhi batata hoon

Aladdin was abt to punch zakki when jasmine stopped him and told him to live it......both of them left from there.

Jasmine and aladdin are in Jasmine's room.

Aladdin is still very angry..

Aladdin:Us zakki ki himat kaise hoi aap ko hath lagane ki...

Jasmine: Aladdin shant hojao......woh hamara kuch nahi bigar sakta

Aladdin: (Looks hard into jasmine eyes and says in anger)agar usne aisa kuch kiya toh mein use jaan se mardoonga.

Jasmine:Tum humari itni chinta kyu karte ho aladdin.?

Jasmine looks into aladdins eyes and aladdin is lost in hers a few strains of her hair was flying over her cheeks.Aladdin came closer to her ......Jasmine moved back and back....Aladdin seemed possesed by jamine beauty....he moved forward she moved back he moved forward she moved back....until she hit against a wall and could not move anymore back.

Aladdin moved the strain away from her cheek.....jasmine closed her eyes.

Aladdin:(sighed) Jaasmiine....

Jasmine:(sighned)Alaaaddin....

She opened her eyes .....they stared hard into each others eyes

Jasmine:mein.....mein.....tumse.....

All of a sudden aladdin was hit on the head from the back .....he fell there was blooding running out of his head.

Jasmine:ALADDDDIN!!!!!!!

Jasmine looked up and saw zakki.......!

to be continued......tell me how it was.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful work. thanks a lot
👏 looking forward to the next part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i was looking around and looked at ur ff why arent u writhing more parts?

please do because its really good! 😃

there arent much ff in aladin form 😔

and u made a nice start so please continue 😳
i know there much off pleople who like ur ff 😊 but they are silent readers 😉

the first part was writhen on 1 march..
i hope u still hang around in the forum 😳so u can read my replay
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah i hope meetu will continue it was a good start 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good strt!!..lookin for next aprt.... 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i think she doesnt visit the alladin forum anymore..becuaz she doesnt replay..to the comments.. 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i quite like the story ! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tumari kahani mein bhot khaltiye huwi hai but achi hai

i hope ke age bhi achi hogi

pls chaldi se next part liko
Edited by neevfan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kitna intezar karna parega pls chaldi karo

bye bye intezar karoo kki

😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: meetu_01

Hey friends im meetu and im going to start a a new fanfic on alaadin and jasmine i hope u like it.....Ill change the story abit over here zakki is also in love with jasmine and aladdin can sense that

I'll continue from the part where Alladin came back after getting the lal pattar.

Aladdin and jasmine are are celebrating his vitory along with all of the madrasa students.

Jasmine:Aladdin hum tumse kuch kehna chate hai

Aladdin: Ha kaiye shezaadi

Jasmine:Woh hum tumse....tumse...hum (she blushes)

Aladdin remember what junaid told him abt jasmine being in love with him

Aladdin:(Giving the naughty look) Aap humse kya....

Jasmine stares into aladdin's eyes

Aladdin:Chalo hum kihin aur chalte hai

Jasmine: Thek hai.

While walking at the corridor.....both of them bump into zakki....

Jasmine:Ahhh.....!

Aladdin:Shezaadi.....!

Zakki:Maaf karna jasmine.......woh tum ho hi itni kubsoorat ke koi bhi hosh kode.

he rubs her arm where he hits her and gives a wicked grims.

Aladdin immidiatly hold zakki hand and slams it down.

Aladdin:Hath mat lagana inhe.

Zakki:Kyu tum kyon hote ho yeh kehne wale.

Aladdin:Abhi batata hoon

Aladdin was abt to punch zakki when jasmine stopped him and told him to live it......both of them left from there.

Jasmine and aladdin are in Jasmine's room.

Aladdin is still very angry..

Aladdin:Us zakki ki himat kaise hoi aap ko hath lagane ki...

Jasmine: Aladdin shant hojao......woh hamara kuch nahi bigar sakta

Aladdin: (Looks hard into jasmine eyes and says in anger)agar usne aisa kuch kiya toh mein use jaan se mardoonga.

Jasmine:Tum humari itni chinta kyu karte ho aladdin.?

Jasmine looks into aladdins eyes and aladdin is lost in hers a few strains of her hair was flying over her cheeks.Aladdin came closer to her ......Jasmine moved back and back....Aladdin seemed possesed by jamine beauty....he moved forward she moved back he moved forward she moved back....until she hit against a wall and could not move anymore back.

Aladdin moved the strain away from her cheek.....jasmine closed her eyes.

Aladdin:(sighed) Jaasmiine....

Jasmine:(sighned)Alaaaddin....

She opened her eyes .....they stared hard into each others eyes

Jasmine:mein.....mein.....tumse.....

All of a sudden aladdin was hit on the head from the back .....he fell there was blooding running out of his head.

Jasmine:ALADDDDIN!!!!!!!

Jasmine looked up and saw zakki.......!

to be continued......tell me how it was.

toooooooooo guddddddddddddd

all are here

superbbb

waiting for nexttttt

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