Game: Ranvir On Mission! - Page 11

Originally posted by: lovelyprincesst

hey great story.. well done
it was worth the wait.. 👏

thanx... i tried my best to hurry 😳

Originally posted by: lovelyprincesst

Hey desi_baby...
well done with the story.. i loved it😛

well u choose another person as belle aka natasha is not tht much around or may be u can pm n ask if she has time to write a story😛

thanx so much for lovin the story! i appreciate it 😊

well if she isn't around much then i choose u cuz i only see u, tahmeed, and me around here much! 😳

Originally posted by: desi_baby07

thanx so much for lovin the story! i appreciate it 😊

well if she isn't around much then i choose u cuz i only see u, tahmeed, and me around here much! 😳

😆
i knw tht i will have to do this story..
actually i do in half an hour but this time u have to give me time coz of ramadhan.
will come up with a story in a week time.😛

Originally posted by: lovelyprincesst

😆
i knw tht i will have to do this story..
actually i do in half an hour but this time u have to give me time coz of ramadhan.
will come up with a story in a week time.😛

sure take the time... cuz i did too 😳

all the best! 👍🏼

thnk you...
will come up with a good story..
wel at the moment ma mind is not workings 😆

Ok here its ma story...
sorry if its not tht interesting😛


Ranvir - R

Desi Babe - D

Savio - S

Aditya sir - A

Guy 1 - 1



Ranvir n savio were having a wounderful chat n they were remembering the old days while ranvir was driving...

suddenly he saw a girl coming inbetween the road n he brakes hard...

S - Arre yaar.. kya irada hai... marvane ka

R - thts not funny

S - Ok give up... kyu achanak brake lagaya

R - ek ladki ko dekha

S - Ohh babhiji ko dekha..

R - Nahin yaar or yeh mazak karne ka samay nahi hai..

S - Ok m serious now.. wht happened

R - I saw a girl coming between ma car so brake it but now she is gone...

S - kya woh bhoot thi...

R - Nahin insaan thi isliye gayab hogayi

S - Ohh.. insaan bhi gayab hosakte hai😕

R - uufff he is too much


Ranvir parks the car n comes out, savio follow suits...
they searching the area for the girl n found her near a stone..

R - Hey.. why are u crying n what u doing over here?

D - she is confused n says tht u can see me?

R - Yes i can see u

D - How comes?

R - well its a long story let me make it short... i cn see the dead people n i try to help them depart ths world...

D - can u help me?

R - yes sure but first u have to tell me ur name?

D - ma name is desi n i was in a medical colledge n ma dream was to become a doc but before i could fulfill ma dream someone killed me

R - Do u knw who killed u?

D - No I dont have any idea

R - How were u killed

D - I was standing on the road side waiting for the bus to come so i can go home n somebody shoot me.

R - Oh Ok.. do u knw tht guy?

D - Nah.. i havent seen him before.. plz ranvir u have to help me find ma killer n givehim saza only tht way i can live this world..

R - I will try ma best..

ranvir n savio live the bhoot of desi over there n goes to investigate the case...

first they go to desi house to find anything going on..
they found out tht she was a very lovable girl n didnt do anything wrong among her frends or anyone...

secound stop they went to the police station n met with their formal boss aditya sir..

R - Goodmorning sir

A - Good morning ranvir, What do i own the pleasure, dnt tell me u need ma help to solve a case

R - Actually sir yes, i come to u because of that

A - How many times i tell you tht i dnt belive in this bhoot bhoot chakar...

R - plz sir only this once

A - ok but its last time

R - thank u sir

A - Ok what can i do for u?

R - Well ther was a killing case of a girl ages 24 whose name is desi near a bus station in bandra, i want to study tht case file..

A - oh tht file.. well some witnesses identify the killer but we werent able to catch him..

R - Plz can i see the file, just for two hours plz plz

A - ok ok

R - Thank you sir


Ranvir n savio leaves the station n goes home to study the case..

They found a drawing of the killer made by an artist from the witnesses wch were around..

R - Savio see this man n go find him for me..

S - Ok Sir n went away



Savio comes back with the information n they goes to confort the guy


1 - who r u n wht u want..

R - well m ranvir n i want to knw something

1 - y should i tell u

R - the police is looking for u n if u dnt tell me i will tell the police were u r hiding

1 - u think u can get away from here alive

R - i have left ma men behind with the instuction if i dont reach there in 15 min he should call the police

1 - ok wht u wanna knw

R - Why did u kill the girl in the bus station of bandra?

1 - she was killed by mistake

R - what do u mean

1 - well soomeone gave me supari to kill his wife n whn we were aiming at his wife this girl come in between n she got killed

R - oh so she was not the aim for the killing

1 - yes, she was innocent n i feel guilty abt killing her as in our job we dnt kill young gals

R - now here i m making a deal with u

1 - what

R - u surrender to the police n i promise u tht i will help u to get maximum jail period n give me the name of the guy who wants to kill her wife..


the bad guy agreed n ranvir n savio takes him to aditya n he confess tht a certain guy want to kill her wife n the police was able to help the lady from her hubby


They were leaving n planing to go to desi to say tht her culprit is in the hand of police n suddenly from owhere desi comes

D - thank you very much ranvir for helping me. it feels good tht no one hated me

R - its ma job n u welcome, now u go u dnt belong to this wold any more


Desi goes n savios says tht she is a cute girl..
how would u like her as ur bhabhi..

Ranvir says tht now u want a slap from me
and savio laughingly disappear


the end

omg!!! thats such a wonderful story! thanx ranvir, i mean tashu 😳 😉

and yes i would love to be ranvir's bhabhi and savio's wife.... in the bhoot world.... lol thanx again 😆😊

Originally posted by: desi_baby07

omg!!! thats such a wonderful story! thanx ranvir, i mean tashu 😳 😉

and yes i would love to be ranvir's bhabhi and savio's wife.... in the bhoot world.... lol thanx again 😆😊

thank u yaar...

well i just made this story in a moment of time

thnx again for loving it😛

Originally posted by: QAZITAHMEED

yeh that was a ausumn story

u should be a writer.

we will get some kool stuff to watch

thnx yaarr...

this is ma first time to write stories..

thnk u very much for the complement😛

Originally posted by: QAZITAHMEED

lol i have power i can see future

i wrote Tashu and u had to do the story......

😆 becoz of u i had to do the story😛