AkYa SS: I Don't Want To Loose You ~|| Chapter 6: page 5 ||~ - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Lovely update.
Akash loves her so much.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Chapter 4:

Next day...it was Karva Chauth...and only Ananya knew about it...
Both were really awkward after yesterday's incident...and so didn't talk at all...


Afternoon...



Akash was in the DIB headquarters while Ananya was at home when the bell rang...



She opened the door and a courier boy handed her the parcel in Mr and Mrs Saluja's name...



She opened it and was happy as well as shocked...


That evening ...Akash returned home and Ananya handed him the parcel...it were two tickets to Australia and a honeymoon package booklet...


Akash was hell angry...
An: Akash...Vo...ye...

Grabbing her hand tightly...

Ak: just shut up! Mujhe kuch nahi sunna...ye sab karne se agar tumhe lagta hai that I'll accept u...then u are wrong...tumhe kya lagta hai main samjh nahi sakta...ek baat kaan kholke sunlo I hate u Aur isiliye meri life mein jagah banane ka khwaab chod do...


Akash blurted...only then did he look at her tear stained face and swollen wrist he had held so tightly...Ananya ran away crying profusely...



That night...Ananya was making dinner and Akash continuously stared at her sad face...her tears flowed continuously...



Just then he got a call...

Ak: hi Karan ! Was about to call u yaar! Achcha vaise aaj itni jaldi kyu chala gaya...

K: abey tujhe nahi pata! Aaj karva Chauth hai...toh Smriti ne jaldi bulaya tha...uska vrath toodvaane...Ananya bhabhi ne bhi toh rakha hoga na?

Ak: uh...h..ha...chal I'll talk later...


Now Akash started feeling very guilty...he had insulted the lady who was starving the whole day only for him to have a long life...


By then Ananya served him dinner and was about to leave when Akash held her arm...and pulled her closer and wiped her tears. ...

Ak: ( cold voice) tumne khaana khaya?

An: na...nahi...mera vrath hai...

Ak: toh hum saath hi khaayenge...

Saying this he took her to the balcony and she did his pooja after looking at the moon...


After breaking the fast she bent to touch his feet and he moved away...

A: ye kya kar rahi ho?

An: rasam hai...ki vrath todne ke baad apne pati ka ashirwaad leti hai...


Saying this she touched his feet...making him all the more guilty...


Next day:


Akash walked in with a box in his hand...he found Ananya in the bedroom...


Akash came near her and sat on the bed and turned her to face him...

Ak: uh...I...I'm so...sorry Ananya...mujhe kal tumpar chillana nahi chahiye tha...I'm really sorry...


Saying this he took out the box and opened it...inside was it was a beautiful white gold bracelet with tiny diamonds studded all over...


Ak: ye tumhare liye...uh...hope u like it...


An: thank you...


They got ready as they had to catch the flight to Sydney... Australia That night...for their honeymoon...



TBC
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Bechari anu ko kitna sehna par raha hai...
hope everything gets fine soon...
loved every bit of this update...
update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Amazing chapters Api😳
poor AkYa...both are suffering badly...
ye Aakash itna dumbo kiu hai...
idiot kahika...he can only protect Ananya when she is with him...
Aur Anu bechari...usko toh kuch samajh mein bhi nehi aaraha hoga...
hope this trip brings them close...
update soon Api😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Akash is hurting Ananya on Karva Chaut.😔😭

Nice chapter. Cont soonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Chapter 5:



Aakash and Ananya landed safely in Sydney,Australia and headed to their hotel...




The hotel was a laavish one...it had a beautiful lounge and was richly furnished...





Ak: Excuse me! Im Aakash Saluja...we have a honeymoon suite booked for Mr and Mrs. Saluja...could u hand me the keys?





R: sure sir...just a moment please!!...there u go sir! Have a nice stay!





Both headed to their room...it was beautifully decorated with candles, rose petals and heart shaped balloons...






Ak: ( cold tone) I need to go!






And before ananya could utter a work he was out...ananya was upset...she didn't expect that they'll be celebrating their honeymoon but atleast he could stay with her...





She shrugged her thoughts away...her puffy red eyes reflected her longing for Aakash's love...she wanted to be his...she wanted to be loved by him...she wanted his attention and care...but she thought maybe all love stories are not complete. ...sone like hers are destined to stay incomplete forever...






She took a long shower and came out wrapped in a towel since Aakaash wasn't there...she was standing with her back towards the door when Aakash came in but she didn't realise it...





Aakash was mesmerised to see her...her perfect figure...her wet hair and long slender neck...snow white soft skin...her pink lips inviting him...





Unknowingly he went really close to her and stood behind her. ...suddenly ananya turned with a jerk as she noticed Aakash standing behind her...





She started blushing and tried to run away but Aakash held her hand...his palms tenderly cupped her face as his lips gently brushed against her skin on her cheek...





She shivered as he pulled her even closer by her waist...his lips slowly travelled to her neck and then he pushed her away as soon as his lips touched her neck!




Horrified! He ran outside banging the door shut leaving Ananya in tears ...




Later that evening:




Ananya was strolling near the swimming pool...she was smiling...
A: aaj prove toh hogaya ki Aakash mujgse pyaar karte hai...phir mujhe avoid kyu kar rahe hai? vo mujhse pyaar karte hai main unse phir ye sab kyu?





Par ab toh main unka pyaar paa kar rahungi...vo bhi mere style mein😉





So mission pyaar ki manzil starts! now Ananya was back to her bubbly self...





JustJust then Aakash cane there while talking on the phone and Ananya waljed right into him as if she didn't see him...





Away flew his phone and both landed in the water...
Ananya clung to Aakash tightly with her head buried in her chest...





Ak: ( irritated) mujhse dur hatne ke kitne paise logi?





A: 10000 million! hai? toh do...





Aakash gave her a seriously type look...






A: nahi main aapko nahi chodungi...mujhe swimming nahi aati!






Aakash was chuckling inside to know that his bubbly ananya is back... he was having a hard time controlling his hands from pulling her closer...





Ak: tum bohot bold hona?





A: ab vo main hu...dekhenge aap?




Ananya stood on his feet, arms around his neck and sealed his lips in a passionate kiss...she poured out all her love and care for him...she kissed him with all hers while her hands roamed his back...





She finally broke the kiss to find a red Aakash...





A: ohooo! so someone is blushing!




Ak: na..na...nahi...Im not





A: par maine toh aapka naam liya hi nahi phir?😉




Ak:😲



A: kya? aise aakhe phaad phaad ke mat dekhiye...eyelids phat jaayegi!





Ananya whispered in his ears before leaving...
A: pyaar toh main aapja paakar rahungi Aakash!😉




TBC😳






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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome update Api
Annie is really intelligent😆
Hope that dumbo Aakash gets some sense
update soon Api😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Lovely update dear...
hope so soon ananya gets to know about his mission...
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Awesome update
Finally Ananya challenged Akash😉

update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
m sooo sorry !
late again na!

Chapter 6:


Aakash stood in the pool completely numb...unable to comprehend anything that just happened. ...



After some time. ...



Ananya was sitting on the bed...blushing thinking about what she did...she kissed someone for the first time in her life...it was a magical experience for her ...



she could still feel his lips...and the sight of his eyes which practically made love to her every time they saw her made her feel very shy...



Her chain of thoughts were broken when she was pulled up to face someone. ...and that someone u might have guessed was Aakash...



He grabbed her arms tightly and yelled at her...



Aa: tumhari himmat kaise hui? samajhti kya ho tum khudko? Apne iss dimaag mein ye baat daal do that I HATE YOU! I Hate You! samjhi tum? tum jaisi ladki se kon pyaar karega? tum pyaar karne layak hi nahi ho! tum bas unn ladkiyon mein se ho jo attention chahti hai...



tumhe maine na aajtak patni ka darja diya tha na kabhi dunga...tum meri patni kabhi nahi ban sakti because tum mere layak toh kya tum kisi ke layak nahi ho!




Saying this he pushed her on the bed and banged the door shut as he walked out...




Tears came to her eyes...she let them trickle down...burying her face in her pillow she cried her heart out ...trying to ease her pain...




Why? Why couldn't she get her love? She was 100 percent sure that Aakash too had feelings for her...it was visible...in his eyes which reflected his heart...




She could see longing and pain in them...imense pain...




Meanwhile Aakash too was sitting in the bar...having drink after drink...his eyes red due to crying...




Aa: Im so sorry ananya...main..main bohot bura hu...bohot zyaada...tumhare jin asuo ko main bardasht nahi karsakta aaj unki vajah main hu...kaash tum meri zindagi mein hi na aati...kaash mujhe tumse pyaar nahi hota...meri life mein jo aaya usne uski keemat chukai hai...aur voh keemat main tumhe chukaate hue nahi dekh paunga...



Tum bohot khushiyaan deserve karti ho...aur ek aisa partner jo tumhe khush rakhe...par vo main nahi hu...agar mujhe apne pyaar ko bachane ke liye uska dil todna pade toh yahi sahi...aur tum best deserve karti ho aur infact main tumhe deserve nahi karta...I'm so sorry ananya...I'm so sorry!





Aakash closed his eyes allowing the fresh lot of tears to escape...





As if too ease the pain of these two souls...tiny droplets of water fell to the ground and soon It was raining heavily...




Aakash went out in the rain and sat down on a bench letting the rain drench him...




After a long time he finally got up and headed to their room...Aakash changed into dry wear and noticed...
Ananya was in a half sitting position...her back resting on the couch...her head drooping...





He went closer and cupped her face...wanting to just make sure if she was ok...but her face and the look on it broke him from within...




Her face completely white...her face looked lifeless and traces of dried tears on her cheeks...




He caressed her face softly and kissed away those tears and then as if without realising kissed all over her face...extremely tenderly so that she didnt wake up ...




He then gently picked her up in his arms and lowered her on the bed and covered her with a blanket...




He stared lovingly at her sleeping face...and tucked a tendril behind her ear...




He never realised when he dosed off with Ananya in his arms...




Nest morning ananya was the first to get up...



She sensed a grip on her waist and found it to Aakash...
A lone tear trickled down her face...she caressed his face and whispered. ...



A:main jaanti hu Aakash ki aap mujhse pyaar karte hai...bohot pyaar karte hai phir kya vajah hai ki aap mujhe apbe se door karna chahte hai?
Why can't we be together? You love me and I love u...phir kya problem hai?




She sighed and slowly extracted herself from his arms and proceeded for a shower.



TBC😳





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