AkYa SS: I Don't Want To Loose You ~|| Chapter 6: page 5 ||~ - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Nice update dear.continue the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Wow. Akya is married

Great start. Will wait for the next update.




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2:
Next morning...When Ananya woke up...Alash had already left...

She quickly cleared up the bed and then her eyes caught Akadh's pillow on the couch...as she touched it she found it completely wet...she found it very weird...

For somedays she kept on observing this and finally decided to call her mother in law...

A: Hello ma?...aapko disturb toh nahi kiya maine?

M: Arrey nahi beta...bol kya hua?
A: ma...main kai dino se dekh rahi hu...roz subhe Akash ki pillow geeli hoti hai...ek din do din lekin ab toh ek hafta ho gaya...aisaa roz kaise ho sakta hai?

M: ( tensed) beta...aisa toh tab hota hai jab Akash udaas hota hai...aur raat ko pillow mein mooh chipakar rota hai...kya hua beta?...sab theek haina?

A: ha ma...dont worry...ok main rakhti hu...
After the call ended...Ananya was in deep thought. ...

A: Akash kyu rote honge?...aisi kya baat hai?...main poochungi toh vo batayenge toh nahi...

She sighed...

Lthat that night...
Ananya was in the kitchen...she had climbed on a stool to remove a burney (jar)...

Akash came into the kitchen hearing tje noise...
Ak: ab ye kya kar rahi ho tum?... irritated)
An: uh...vo...burney nikaal rahi thi...

And the next moment before he vould say a word...ananya's foot slipped and she fell on him...

Both Landed on the floor...Akash's hand protectively over her waist...her hand grabbing the collar of his blazer tightly and her hair all over her face...

Akash slowly removed the hair from his face and looked at her beautiful face...she was the most beautiful girl in the world for him...

Suddenly both came go their senses and ananya immediately got up...
A: s...sorry...vo...vo..vo...main...
She just ran away leaving a confused Akash behind...

Next day...

Ananya had gone to buy some groceries for the house and she had just returned when the bell rang...

She opened the door to find Akash's best friend Karan with his arm around a terribly injured Akash...
Ananya was shocked...
A: Karan...ye kya hua Akash ko?
K: vo Ananya Bhabhi...encounter karte samay...vaise I need to leave urgently if u could manage to take him inside...
A: ya...I'll do that...

with this she put Akash's arm around her neck and somehow lay him on the bed...after taking him to the bedroom.

She somehow changed his clothes looking away...and did his dressing. ...

She made soup for him and took it to the bedroom. ...
A: Akash
Ak: hmmm...
he replied feebly. ...finally he had gained consciousness...

She tried making him sit but he fell...holding her waist tightly. ...finally after a lot of hard work he finished the soup and dozed off after taking his medicines. ...


Later that night:

it was 1:00 am...Ananya suddenly woke up with a start hearing a scream...
Akash was having a nightmare. ...Ananya rushed to him to calm him down...

he looked at her and hugged her tightly while ananya rocked a little with him in her arms...akash fell asleep...as ananya tried to free herself...but Akash was holding her tight...

Thus that night both slept in each other'sother's arms...peacefully...


TBC😳
Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nice update.

Akash got injured & Ananya is taking care of him.

Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome update as usual
Poor Akash 😭😭
Silently crying on the pillow
Kitchen scene was so cute
Anu fell on Akash
Akash got hurt 😭😭
Loved ananys concern for him
Akash had a nightmare
Both slep peacefully together
Amazing amazing amazing
Pleaseee update sooonnn
Dying to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
so beautiful update dear
i was completely lost in it
wonderfully written
magical update
im very happy wid d akya scenes 😊😊
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Yippee yippee omg what an update Api😃
AkYa romance😳
poor AkYa😭
omg Aakash injured
but now I guess Anu will take care of him and they will spend time together😳
jo bhi hota hai acche ke liye hota hai😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely upate...enjoyed reading it to the fullest...akya romance was superb...dying to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3:

Next morning Akash got up only to see the most beautiful face in the world...
He smiled at her innocent face and kissed on her forehead wishing her good morning...



Just as Ananya got up he closed his eyes again...Ananya smiled..she slowly frees herself from his arms and proceeds to make breakfast...




She gets his breakfast and he gives her cold look and snatches it from her hand...her eyes well up with tears but she swallows her pain...getting all the more determined...




A: uh..apki dressing...ch..change karni hai...



Akash looks away and forwards his hand...and she changes his dressing...



Afternoon...
Akash was having pain in his hand and so wasn't able to eat properly...



Seeing this Ananya forwarded a bite from from her plate with a loving smile
...although Akash gave her a tough look..his inner self wanted to kiss her madly...


Suddenly he noticed a small particle of food on her lip...



He so wanted to taste the food from her lips...he tried his best to control but couldn't...



He went closer to her...his finger caressed her lip softly removing the particle he put in his mouth...



A: ( thought) yummy! Tumhari har cheez mujhe achchi lagti hai...I love you Ananya...very much...



Suddenly realising their proximity he quickly moved away...



Ananya blushed deep red and bit her lower lip with her eyes lowered due to excessive shyness...this made Akash absolutely crazy...





Later that evening...they go to the doctor for check up...




Dr: dekhiye Mrs Saluja aapke pati ab theek hai par unhe rest ki bohot zarurat hai...




A: ok doctor...I'll take care of that...




By the time they left it was almost 12...




They were in the lift when it suddenly stopped with a bump making Anany. Almost fall over Akash...




A: ye kya hogaya?god knows kab nikal paayenge...itni raat ko konsa mechanic aayega?




Later that night...



Both were crouching on the floor with Ananya moving closer to akash as she was cold...



Suddenly there was another bump and Ananya hugged Akash tightly...



Akash caressed her back...she was shivering...Akash broke the hug...and fir a moment forgot about his decision and cupped her face gently and said...


Ak: Ananya...main hu na...it's all ok...don't worry...

He gave her an assuring look and pulled her closer giving her his warmth...



Ak: jabtak main zinda hu...tumhe kuch nahi hoga Ananya...



An: Akash...



Ak: kuch mat bolo Ananya...bas ue moment enjoy karo...



An: ( blushing ) hmm...




They slept...the next day when the lift got repaired...



They left for home...


TBC😳
Edited by akyabiggestfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderfully written...i was so lost in it...
akash loves her but is keeping her away inorder to save her...
aww ananya turning red due to shyness...lOved it:-*...
update asap

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