Akya OS ~Mere Rang mein Rangne wali~ Part 2.. Page 3 *Updated*

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Hey Friends... Here i'm posting an OS.. There will be two parts.. Enjoy the OS.. Must comment.. And sorry for all grammatical mistakes...

1st Part::


She was standing in front of mirror.. Thinking how she is looking.. Setting her hair and dupatta perfectly.. She was never like this.. She was never serious about her look.. But today she's getting ready for someone.. Someone who's her life.. It's a very special day for them.. Their engagement... A little thought of him brings smile on her face and she starts to blush... She was totally lost in her dream world.. suddenly someone hugged her from back.. She was shocked seeing him there.. She turned around and said "Aakash??!!"

Ananya's look:

Aakash was mesmerized seeing the most beautiful girl of the girl.. she always looks pretty but today she was looking heavenly.. he was just staring at her.. Ananya shook him by his shoulder..

Ananya: Aakash..!!! Kya hua?? Aur tum yaha kaise...

Aakash was still in his dream world.. and he said "Beautiful"

Ananya started to blush hearing the word... Aakash brought her closer by her waist.. She kept her hands on her shoulder.. "I love u Ananya.." She hugged him tightly..

Ananya: Sab kuch kitne achanak ho gaya na??

Aakash: (Broke the hug but still keeping her in his arms holding her waist) haan... remember how we used to hate each other...

Ananya: (Laughed) haan.. aur tum ne mere upar case bhi kar diya tha..

Aakash: Haaan.. par baad mein I dropped the case na?

Ananya: Who is liye bcz I was right...

Aakash: Accha miss rule book.. aap jeeti aur mai haari..

Ananya : That's better...

Aakash: Waise mai to usi din haar baitha apna dil when I saw u in open hair in Jaipur..

Ananya: (Blushed) Waise mera hairband ap hi ne chupaya na??

Aakash: nehi to...!! (making an innocent face)

Ananya: Thank u Aakash.. For saving my life in Jaipur.. u risked ur life for my..

Aakash: Saving your life?? (Giving pressure on the word "Your") My saved my life Ananya..

Ananya: (smiled)

Aakash: I m sorry Ananya.. I've hurt u a lot...

Ananya: (Put his figure on his leap) No Aakash.. Again u saved my life.. U were hurt more than me.. Yeh sirf wohi kar sakte hain who loves u more than ur life.. (She had tears )

Aakash : (wipped the tears) aise roo gi to make up kharab ho jayega..

They laughed a little...

Ananya: I still can remember hw Rohit fooled me and used me against u.. I'm sorry Aakash.. (With teary eyes)

Aakash: shhh! No... U no need to be sorry Ananya.. U were unknown abt everything!!

Ananya: And again u saved me from rohit.. He was about shot me when I came to knw the truth.. Aur tum beech mein aa gaye.. Aaj bhi sochti hoon to meri jaan nikal jati hai that u were fighting with ur life in hospital.. Agar tumhe kuch ho jata to...

Aakash: Kaise kuch hota?? Tum thi na?? Tumhare liye thi ho na tha..

Ananya hugged him and said "Thank you for coming in my life Aakash"

Aakash: But I'm very angry with you..

Ananya broke the hug...

Ananya: Kiu??!!

Aakash: Tum ne abhi tak nehi kaha!!

Ananya: Kya nehi kaha??

Aakash: Those three magical words...

Ananya smile and tried to go away.. But Aakash pulled her close...

Aakash: Arey itna bhi kya sharmana yaar?? Kisi aur se thodi kahogi?? Apne hone wali paati se hi kehne wali ho na??!!

Ananya: (Tried to free her self from his grip) Leave me Aakash.. Aur jaao yaha se...

Aakash: Par anan...
Before he could complete Ananya pushed him away from her room and locked the door...

Aakash: (From out side) Soch lo First Officer.. Agar ab nehi kaha to sab ke samne kehna parega...

Ananya: (From inside) Jo karna hai kar li jiye Captain..

In Garden.. Everything is decorated in Ananya's choice... Shefu brought her to garden.. All were looking at her.. Everyone is so happy... All were congratulating Akya...

Aakash: (Slowly) Soch lo First officer... Abhi bhi waqt hai.. bol do... Baad mein pachtana na pare...

Ananya: Maine kaha na captain jo karna hai kar li jiye (Saying this she left Aakash to meet her friends)

Aakash Smiled and thought to him self ab dekho mai kya karta hoon...


To Be Continued...

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akyaholic thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
Wow this is so beautiful
You wrote every thing so perfectly
Particularly the events of past
Amazing work
Update soon!!!!
Renessa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!
it was so beautiful
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow this is so beautiful
really cute and romantic
pakka ananya sab ke samne hi wo 3 magical words kahegi
awesome dr.beautifully described..loved ananya look also..so pretty
U r tooo awesome dr
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing OS
Ananya is looking great
Yes ananya akash hid ur hairband
& yes he didn't saved ur life he saved his life
I wonder wat is akash's plan
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: akyaholic

Wow this is so beautiful
You wrote every thing so perfectly
Particularly the events of past
Amazing work
Update soon!!!!


Thank u dear...
Will update soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Renessa

Wow!
it was so beautiful
update soon


Thank u dear... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princessnidhii

wow this is so beautiful

really cute and romantic
pakka ananya sab ke samne hi wo 3 magical words kahegi
awesome dr.beautifully described..loved ananya look also..so pretty
U r tooo awesome dr
continue soon


Thank u nidhi... surely she will say... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Amazing OS

Ananya is looking great
Yes ananya akash hid ur hairband
& yes he didn't saved ur life he saved his life
I wonder wat is akash's plan
Please update soon


Thank u for liking it...
will update soon... 😊

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