Akya OS :- You Are Mine. TS last part updated on page. 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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common yaar... post it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So finally u r in! I am so happy! Prolouge is interesting! Plz post it soon!! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey friends i am so happy with ur comments
So here is the OS

Rawat House.

Everyone was asleep but ananya. Sleep was far away from her eyes. Ananya was sitting near the window looking at the moon and recalling the events of last week.

{ Flashback }

It was two week since she last met him in hospital. After that she got to know by Mr.Sen that he is back in delhi but he is on medical leave. She was preparing to the take off and was waiting for Capt. Rathore when she heard his voice after two weeks.

Akash : Good Morning First Officer, how are you?

Ananya : I am fine Captain how are you? What are you doing here? Where is Capt. Rathore?

She asked everything in one breath. Akash was amused seing like this. He said with a smile,

Akash : relax ananya i am fine now. And Capt. Rathore had to leave because of a family emergency so i am ur Captain today( to himself) and forever.

Ananya : oh ok.

After that their journey went like this. Akash was trying to drag ananya in conversation where on the othe hand ananya was angry on him. And thought 'jab main baat karna chahti thi tab bade ignore kar rahe the, ab dekho kaise mujhse baat karne ke liye tadap rahe hain. Try little hard Capt. Saluja mujhe manana itna aasan nahi hai'. And she was ignoring him through the whole journey.

Its a week since akash was back in Inde Airlines and trying talk with ananya. And ananya she was ignoring bim and was enjoying his attention.

Ananya's chain of thoughts broke by her phone's ringtone, it was mr.sen he just called her to remind her about tomorrow's new year party held by Rohit Mafatlal for his employees. The name rohit itself brought a smile on her face. In those two week of akash's absense rohit was the one who was there for her. In those two weeks she found a best friend in rohit.

After few minut she went sleep with a small smile.

Next Day at Party Venue.

Everyone was enjoying the party except one, who was sitting near bar counter glaring at a couple and shooting daggers at the man especially.

Akash's POV

It had been a week since i am trying talk to her, tell her that what i feel for her and she being herself just ignoring me i know deserve that only but she has to give me a chance to explain myself.

When i came back to delhi, i got medical leave but i knew its not a medical leave after our hard work we caught the real culprit who was one of the board members of Inde Airlines. It took nearly two week for us to catch the whole gang and in between all this there was a person whose thoughts were continuously disturbing me. And when the mission was over i was eager to go back and meet my ananya. Thats when i came to know that in my absense ananya and rohit became good friends. And now she is dancing with him like there no one around them. Thats it to day i am going to tell her that she is mine just mine.

So tell me how it is?
When i got such good response i thought to make it TS and i also i am being a lazy can't write more than this in a day 😆
Edited by Gouri_Joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome update.
Aakash feeling really jealous seeing Rohit and Ananya dancing together.
Aakash plans to confess his feelings to Ananya.
Ananya ignoring her fully and enjoying his attention.
Mission is over and who is the culprit?
Continue sooonish..
Do pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its beautiful Gouri... Pls continue.. We have now very good writers on the forum..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anika...

Wow...
Awesome update.
Aakash feeling really jealous seeing Rohit and Ananya dancing together.
Aakash plans to confess his feelings to Ananya.
Ananya ignoring her fully and enjoying his attention.
Mission is over and who is the culprit?
Continue sooonish..
Do pm me.


Well i am wondering who should be the culprit
I don't want to keep suspense so may be natasha's father will be the culprit
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really nice my dear! Now i am just waiting for Akaya's confession! Plz update soon! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awesome it was really good please update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
It's superb joshi... Good to see u in new venture... Ur step is completed successfully ... Very good ... Brilliant ... Keep going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was amazing yaar. .
why u stopped? ??
nw update soon..

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