AKYA FF - Made for Each Other - Writer Note Pg 39 - Page 21

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Posted: 10 years ago
It's so thrilling and the last part gave me goosebumps... That person is none other than Akash right? Feeling excited for next chapter...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...that was superb...amidst the exams i am reading your stories...
And it was worth it...loved it...
Guess its Akash...he doesnt know its ananta...but will soon realize...:-)
Nice...wanna see their reaction... Hehe...
Update soon...:-P :-P
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Posted: 10 years ago
With every new chapter you write...you create a new level of climax...the plot gets more and more interesting...

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb yaar
Tat waz a magical update 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Next part plzz update soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks everyone for all your beautiful comments and appreciation. I never imagined it will turn out to be 17 chapters and still going... I will now try and wrap this story in 2-3 chapters... and bring it to a logical end...

Chapter 17

And then she saw... it was him.. his Akash...she could only gesture him with her eyes...

His grip was so strong that she could hardly move !

Akash saw her blinking eyes ... he could not believe it was Ananya.. He quickly moved his hand from her mouth and she almost coughed to death. She withered in pain as the glass was still pierced inside near her shoulder...

He released her hand.. quickly and was feeling sorry for what he did. He tried making her sit.. but she had severe pain as one she fell really bad and secondly she fell on the glass piece...

Akash, leave me...She pushed him away with one hand... and tried to get up!

Ananya, listen... you are hurt. Let me take the glass out.

I m sorry Ananya.! I didn't mean to hurt you..! I thought...

"What did u thought Akash... Some spy like you " has invaded ur house..." She asked angrily and almost flinching in pain...

What do u think? Noone will come to know who you are ?

He was taken aback.. and was shocked to hear this...

What are you talking Ananya?

"You know what I am talking Akash"...she said breathing heavily

"I will answer all your questions, but please let me take this glass piece out now, "he pleaded...

She twisted in pain and he lifted her up in his strong hands and took her to his bed..

Without even seeking any permission from her.. He knew he had full rights on her !

Switching on the lights was shocked to see a big piece of glass pierced in her shoulder...He quickly came near her.. she was crying in pain and her eyes were closed.

"Ananya " he called her name slowly...coming closer

"Why were you hiding in your own house Akash," Why were you not answering my calls ? Why do you always leave me and go? Who is your family Akash "she asked zillions of questions in one breath...sobbingly..

Sitting next to her...with a medical box , scissors and bandage in hand, without seeking her permission.. with his trembling hands opened the top two buttons of her shirt and pulled the shirt along with her inner down from the shoulder ...

She immediately brought her one hand in front ! She was shaking with intense pain and her one hand was not moving! At all

"What are you doing Akash? leave me .. she was really angry

"sshhh", he kept his hand on her wet lips...

He was taken in another world seeing her flawless pink skin... she was very beautiful and soft.. He could see her upper chest heaving up and down... heavily. Moving her hand , looking away, he slowly took the glass piece out. She held his hand, shouted in pain.. the cut was deep and blood was also there. he carefully cleaned the wound and applied the bandage. Her shirt had been soiled in blood stains...and she was unable to lift her hand as well... trembling.. and tears flowing through her eyes.

He just could not see her in so much pain... He felt bad, getting emotional.. hugged her breathing her feminine fragrance and circling her frame, to soothe her and divert her attention, he leaned in and kissed her deeply and held her in his loving embrace...She was in too much pain that she couldn't react..

"Kiss me back Ananya... " he said pantingly.. rubbing his warm palm on her back. And then she too kissed him back hungrily... like never before.. Whenever he kissed her, she felt a complete woman...and today it was the same feeling as she felt the night of their confession...and then hiding her face in the crook of his neck... her trembling lessened...

Loving someone always eases Pain...! And it's our body natural pain suppressing pathway! It works faster than every medicine..

He then slowly slid the shirt back...on the shoulder. ..

She looked into his eyes and said thanks..

He made her lie down on her bed.. and giving her a pain killer.. asked her to close her eyes ...for sometime.

He called her home and informed her Nanaji that she's with him and he will drop her back..

She had slept by then..

He smiled seeing her sleeping on his bed... snuggled inside his blanket.. He had an unknown feeling inside him to jump in and sleep next to her...right away! He chuckled at his own thought and got back to working on his laptop.

He knew once she wakes up, it will be a long day answering all her questions about him!

<<<<Let me be your hero >>>

Would you dance,
if I asked you to dance?
Would you run,
and never look back?
Would you cry,
if you saw me crying?
And would you save my soul, tonight?

Would you tremble,
if I touched your lips?
Would you laugh?
Oh please tell me this.
Now would you die,
for the one you love?
Hold me in your arms, tonight.

I can be your hero, baby.
I can kiss away the pain.
I will stand by you forever.
You can take my breath away.

Would you swear,
that you'll always be mine?
Or would you lie?
would you run and hide?
Am I in too deep?
Have I lost my mind?
I don't care...
You're here, tonight.

I can be your hero, baby.
I can kiss away the pain.
I will stand by you forever.
You can take my breath away.

Oh, I just wanna hold you.
I just wanna hold you.
Oh yeah.
Am I in too deep?
Have I lost my mind?
Well I don't care...
You're here, tonight.

I can be your hero, baby.
I can kiss away the pain.

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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome chapter. .
u knw whenever I read ur writing I feel like to read more and more. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome n amazing update.
Agar subha subha inna accha aur romantic update mile,toh main har roz jaldi uthne keliye taiyaar hu.
Aakash cares for Ananya so much.
That small romantic moment was enough to tell that Aakash loves Ananya a lot.
Bande ko bohut kuch bolna hoga after Ananya wakes up.
Hmm...
Continue sooonish.
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Posted: 10 years ago
dats awsum my dear :) :) loved it
keep writing :D
U r one of the best writers of the forum

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Posted: 10 years ago
That was awesome...
Amidst my exam I m reading ur story
U never fail to amaze with the intensity in the storyline
Plss continue soon

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