AkYa OS: In your safe embrace. *complete*

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ananya's POV:

''As i saw that you were at the gunpoint of that hostage-keeper,my heart literally came in my mouth. I couldnt believe my eyes. I tried to move,but,the pain took over my body. For a while,i thought,I should have been at the gunpoint instead of you. Tears almost brimmed my eyes when i saw that the bullets of the gun which was in that hostage keeper's hand were finished,i was relieved.. I sent a small thank you prayer to my Lord for keeping you safe.. Then,i saw that you pounced on him like an angry lion pounces on his prey. You were beating him black and blue. Gathering all my energy,i stood up and went to pull you off from that criminal who dared to keep you gunpoint. I was so scared seeing your wound.. I couldnt have tolerated any single blame on you... Thank God,you are safe in my embrace,full of love,care,warmth and respect.''

Akash's POV:

''I frantically searched you at the under construction site where the hostage keeper took you and all the other passengers.. I know that i can save the other hostages but my primary and last concern was to bring you out safe and sound. I was hell worried for you. I wouldnt be able to bear a single scratch on you,if something happens to you... In the previous few moments,i realized completely that what you mean for me. As i got to know from that little kid,that,you have been taken towards the terrace,i immediately informed Commander Kaul to reach towards the terrace.. As i reached the terrace,what i saw completely shook me.. I was hell angry... When i saw that beast keeping you at the gunpoint. You were scared. I could read your face. You were shouting and saying not to shoot. But,what made me lose my patience,when he pushed you hardly and you fell on the floor. Then,i lurched upon him and beat him black and blue,for hurting you so badly.. Then,you came and pulled me back.. After seeing you safe and sound,i couldnt resist myself and pulled you in for a hug.I felt so relaxed and relieved to see you fine and without no scratches. I felt loved. I hugged you tightly and poured out all my care,love and warmth,so that you can remain ''IN MY SAFE EMBRACE.''

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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
the difference between reading and watching it unfold are so different. this is definitely how they were thinking. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww! This is so beautiful! U described their feelings so well 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Considering Airlines is a show, we don't get to view their emotions so nicely
Yet, the way you portrayed them was beautiful and heart-wrenching.
Loved it!
Edited by dreamy_dazzler - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS buddy..
Loved the way u gave their POV from one point of view..
Based on one single incident u described their emotions..
It was superb...
Really loved it..
Thank u so much sharing...
Edited by EashaYousufzai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very nicely written dear... just loved it. ..

plz continue ur os "lamha tera mera" soon. . it's being very long time. ..

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