Akya FF: Never Alone **Chapter 1 Updated** - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
I totally loved the prologue... Now looking forward for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: ...anika...

Purely awesome.. Loved it to the bits...
He is obviously Akash who is frantically searching the she-Ananya in the airport.
My oh my...
Ananya is seriously hurt.. Hope she is fine.
Akash feeling bad and he will try every single thing to get her out.
Please please please continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.

Thank u so much for loving this Anika,,😛
I will try to update ASAP..
One confusion..
I didn't send u any PM then why are u thanking me?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Very well written.
Definitely intriguing and nerve-wrecking.
Plz do continue!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nice prologue
Please pm me if possible 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eeerrr please don't throw shoe at me.. Three of u send me buddy request.. I was accepting when something happened and I had to rush.. And errr accidentally I deleted one of them. I swear it was an accident. I got angel04 and kritzz_Arsha.. But mistakenly I deleted the third one.. I am so sorry.. Can u please resend it? And whoever wants PM can send me buddy request..
Chapter 1 is on the way.. May be today nght or tmorw u will get it.. Thank u..

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Eshaal/ Eshu/ Amar/ Candy/ Mystery queen/ Cliffhanger/ Angel jaan... (Phew.. Mere kitne sare naam hai yaar)!!!!!!😆
Edited by EashaYousufzai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 1:

The day started as normal as it can. Well no one killed him in his sleep. No one broke in his apartment. Not even a single threat message. What more you expect? Hweee what an achievement.

Score board-

Akash- 1 Opponent team- 0

With great difficulty he got up from the bed and sat there for few minutes. Rubbing his eyes and trying to chase the sleep away from his eyes. Well he could've enjoyed a few more hour sleep as he has no flight today but he decided against it. Yawning lazily he got down and went to bathroom blindly. After finishing bathroom chores and taking a long shower he came out. Aaah!!! Nothing is good than a long nice shower to recharge your energy.

He ordered his breakfast picked up today's newspaper. Same old same old. Do the news paper has no new news? May be they publish same news every day.

He threw the paper aside and opened his laptop. He was about to open his mail box but just that time the door bell rang. He cursed and went to the door. He received the food and paid the bill. He didn't bother to put it in plates. Rather he started eating it from the box. After finished he opened a can of coke and opened his mail box. Nothing. Today is going to be the most boring day of his life. He looked here and there. His whole room is a mess. Why not clean up it a bit? Shaking his head he started cleaning. He had a stack of files in his table. He was cleaning it when his hand fell on a blue file. He froze.

He picked up the file and opened it. A picture of a beautiful girl was in the first page. She was staring at him with wide smile in her face. He touched the photo gently. Amusement was playing in her pretty eyes. He closed his eyes. Another image surfaced in his mind. Same girl but this time she is not smiling. Her eyes held a horrified look in them. They seem to be pleading to Akash.

He jerked back to the reality with a jolt. Sweat beads formed in his forehead. With shaky hand he put down the file. He didn't want to remember that. Hell he didn't. But some things are inescapable. No matter how much he tries he cannot change the past nor can he change his fate. And hers.

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Criiinnnggg... She jolted up in her bed. The alarm clock was still screaming. With a groan she stopped the alarm clock. It's five am in morning. She switched the table lamp off and got up. She had a flight today that too with the devil Captain Rathod. She grimaced. She so wished to strangle his neck. But no she cannot do that. She sighed tired sigh and went to washroom. After finishing all chores she came out and got dressed. She went to the dining room. There was a plate in the table. She uncovered it, There was two sliced bread with apricot jam. Yamm.. She loves this fruit. Must be mom's work. Mother always takes care of their children. She smiled a small smile and finished eating. Everybody was in deep sleep. Silently she slipped out from her apartment.

She checked her watch and took a taxi. The environment was so calm. The sun was coming up. Gentle breeze was blowing. The half risen sun spread its gentle light around the city like a shawl. She sighed a content sigh. She was happy. She was contented. She was at peace.

Childhood is a special part of everyone's life. Childhood means joy and peace. But not to her. To her childhood means pain and only pain. Shefali was only a toddler when her mother had to leave her in law. Flashes of pain and hurt surface in her heart. She took a deep breath and brushed away the past. They matter nothing to her. Her only family is her mother, Shefali and her grandfather.

Soon the taxi reached the airport. She paid the driver and got down from the taxi. She can't let her mind distract now. She will have to deal with the Devil now. Well she consoled her mind. At least Natasha will not be there. Heh heh..

~*~

She came out from her room and went to dining table. As usual empty. Well what was she expecting? She made toast and omelet for her and started eating. There was pin drop silence in the whole apartment. She would say that it's okay. It had been habit but it would be a lie. Loneliness never becomes habit. It became burden. When she was alive it was not like this. At least she was with her. She was there to share her pain and happiness. Her mom and dad had been busy always. Money is the only thing they recognize. She had dreams. She wanted to become a doctor. But all her dreams got crushed like broken glass. All her hopes and dreams got burnt in the fire with her elder sister's corpse. But her death didn't even put a scratch on her parents mind. It made her angrier. So, she became the person she never dreamt of. She adapted different nature. She became just like those snob girl she used to hate once. And moreover she changed her name. She became Natasha Solanki from Shanya Solanki. Only a few people know that Natasha is not her real name. It's the name of the person who loved her most. It was the name of her elder sister. It was the only thing she kept from her elder sister. The only part of her that didn't burnt that day. May be somewhere in the corner still lives the Shanya Solanki. That soft hearted nerdy emotional girl. Who wanted to become a doctor. Who wanted to serve the country. May be she is still alive some deep hidden part of her mind. But it's hard to tell.

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Intriguing... Plz do continue :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
loved first chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Really guys!!!!!!!!!!
Main high fever mein itna bada update de sakti hoom aur tumlog ittusa comment nehi de sakte!!!
New rule for PM..
From now on I will send updates through PM to people who commented..
Edited by EashaYousufzai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice concept... Plz update soon...

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