Journey for love.... (cross-over with....) update- pg 6, 7 {31/10/14}

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arjun_riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

She was shocked... Bt before she could reply Akash spoke
Akash: sry natasha bt ananya bhi tumhare saath nahi jaa paaegi...
natasha: kyun???
akash: voh actually kya hai natasha usko apne ek frnd ko kuch promise kiya hai so she'll nt be able to come...
natasha: bt akash tum ye sab kaise jaante ho...
akash (in mind.. kyunki mein hi uska frnd hun..) mujhe ananya ne bataya... nw if u don't mind kya mein aur ananya.. i mean first officer ananya aaj ki flight ke baare mein discuss kar sakte hain...
natasha feels insulted nd goes away.
ananya: capt tht was so rude...
akash: meri rule ki devi agr aapko itna hi bura laga hai toh aap meri jagah uske saath goa ghumne jaa sakti hain...
ananya: akash tum toh bura hi mann gaye... mein tumhare saath hi ggoa ghumne jaaungi...
they both thn go to the cockpit nd fly to goa expecting a happy vacation ahead...

...will this vacation be really happy or it will turn out to be smethng dangerous???????...

...sry guys for the delay nd another short update... i m vry busy nwdays nd hardly get tym to update... vl try to update as soon as possible... Thanks for ur support...

Next part: pg 5

Edited by arjun_riya - 10 years ago

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Ranjani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

superb update
well that was really rude akash
but natash deserve that
update soon dear

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arjun_riya

@arjun_riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Guys i m cutting short the Goa part of my story bcoz i want to use it in flashback... bt i promise it'll have lots of romance...

Here goes the update:

Akash knew tht natasha could be a problem while he nd ananya roam out in goa together so he choose to book their rooms in a different hotel. (two diff rooms..😉)
They both had a loads of fun in Goa. They both spend time knowing each other. Soon the two days passed with their roaming about and their lovely small vacation came to an end. They both reached Goa airport where natasha was waiting for them. Seeing both coming smiling at each other and talking freely made her jealous nd angry. She had already caught them together in Goa nd whn she created a scene abt it there itself akash had scolded her vry badly nd had straightly said tht she means nthng more thn a frnd nd ananya was special to him nd more thn a frnd... She did not dare mess wth them bcoz she knew Akash's anger. The flight back to Delhi was a fun for the duo. They enjoyed flying together wth Akash's humor nd non-stop flirting.

Next mrng Ananya woke up early. She was tensed. She went for her regular jog which was much longer thn usual nd also did sme streching nd exercise which she ocassionally did nd smetimes evn to calm her nerves nd today she did for the second reason. At nearly 7 o'clock her mobile beeped nd as she saw the name a smile came came across her lips.(u hav guessed correctly... it's frm her dear Akash...)

(I m writing the msg chat in diff color)

*gm mrng sweetheart :)

She smiled shyly as she read the msg bt suddenly a tear escaped her eyes as she remembered smthng... she quickly wiped the lone tear wth the determination to stay strong... nd replied...

*gm Akash
*So had your mrng jog??
*yup, nd u??
*ya... u nw i m feeling so sad today...
*y????
*bcoz v don't hav a flight in common for today...
*thn let's do meet smewhere today...
*oh my god... today first officer ananya rawat has asked me out!!!!! i m honored...
*akashhh... it's a yes or no????
*of course a yes... i could nvr dare to say no to my rule ki devi...
*akash... u hav again started...
*no no miss rule ki devi...
*u knw u r imposible...
*i m ;)
*meet me at 9 at colve coffee shop... bye...
*k done...

Akash was excited to meet ananya nd started finding his clothes to wear for the un-named coffee date... whereas after chatting to akash ananya's eyes had again teared up... She opened a pic of akash which she secretly clicked in Goa... in this pic akash was smilinkg brightly nd wearing a white t-shirt wth army print cargo... he was looking vry handsome... his face had a glow nd a charming smile...
she smiled looking at the photo nd started talking to it...
"Akash tum soch bhi nahi sakte ki mein tumse kitna pyaar karti hun... mein jaanti hun tum bhi mujhse bahut pyaar karte ho... par i m sry Akash mein ab jo karne ja rahi hun usse tumhe bahut dukh hoga... bt ye mera farz hai... aaj aakhri baar mein tumse mil rahi hun... kal pata nahi kya hoga... par agr hum dobara mile toh mein apne pyaar ka izhaar zarur karungi..."

she wipes her tears which had fell while talking to the pic... she thn gets up nd goes to get ready...
after smetime she comes out of her apartment nd locks the door... she has worn a blue jeans wth a baby pink v-neck top... she reaches the coffee shop by a cab nd finds Akash waiting for her... He waves her a hand nd she replies by waving back... ananya comes to him nd akash like a perfect gentleman gets up frm his seat nd pulls out a chair for her... she get seated nd smiles at him whie akash takes his seat... they order their coffee nd start wth normal chatting... they chat for a while whn akash see the time...

Akash: oh god... ananya tumhare saath time ka pata hi nahi chalta hai... its more than 10:30... i hav a flight to catch at 11:30... sry dear bt i need to leave...

Ananya: ya i also need to leave... bt jst a second... i have smthng for u...

she takes a a small box frm her packet nd hand over it to Akash... it contains a beautiful golden pen...

Akash: oh god ananya... ita beautiful... bt ye kisliye????

Ananya: ye isliye ki jab mein tumhare saath na hu aur tumhe meri yaad...

bt before she could cont akash keeps his hand on a mouth...

Akash: shhh... tum hamesha mere saath rahogi...

he says looking into her eyes... she also looks into her eyes nd get lost seeing the love for her... suddenly a waiter drops a plate nearby breaking their trance... both r embarrassed...

Ananya: akash tum late ho rahe ho... ab jaao...

Akash: hmmm... aao mein tumhe drp kar deta hun...

Ananya: mein chali jaaungi... (she sees akash is abt to resist so speaks...) meri frnd ka ghar paas mein hi hai... pehle uske yahan jaana hai... so i'll walk down... tum lte ho jaaoge agr abhi nahi gaye toh...

akash: k... bt agr koi kaam ho toh ring me up...

ananya: k...

both get p while akash pay the bill evn on ananya's refusal... they walk out of the cafe... akash is abt to open the door of his car before tht ananya holds his hand... he turns nd to his shock ananya suddenly hugs him... he is startled by the sudden hug bt thn hugs her back... after few minutes ananya breaks the hugs... she is abt to move bt akash stops her and gently kisses her forehead... she closes her eyes in response nd cherishes the moment...

Akash: miss karogi mujhe???

Ananya: haan...

Akash: Kal subah ki return flight hai...bas aaj aaj ki baat hai...

Ananya jst nods her head...

Akash sits in the car nd drive off... he feels tht ananya is getting over-emotional bt shrugs it off thinking tht they had spend nearly 2 days together in Goa nd so might b she is jst missing him... bt there is some constant fear in his heart tht smthng bad is abt to happen...

on the other hand as akash goes away... ananya starts walking aimlessly on the road... she goes to a secluded area where no one is around whn suddenly...

think... think... the suspense is waiting...
thank u all for supporting me... plz do give ur comments...

Character Sketch: scroll down

Edited by arjun_riya - 10 years ago

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anzum

@Anzum505

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

this is very bad yaar... aise suspense nehi chorte... 😒

update sooonnn...

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Ranjani

@Gouri_Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awesome dear
but wonder wats wrong with ananya

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arjun_riya

@arjun_riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Guys i thought of giving a character sketch before continuing the story bcoz i have made some minor changes in my characters...

Captain Akash Saluja: same as serial, has some secrets... no family... loves Ananya a lot and can go to any extend to save her... she is his life but he has not confessed this to her yet... he is waiting for his mission to get over...

First Officer Ananya Rawat: same as serial except the fact that she is more bold and emotionally balanced, dosen't have the same family as shown in serial... i.e. no mother, nanu, shaifu and all... has a family but unknown to evry1... has some secret... loves Akash a lot and go to any extend for him... something is stopping her from voicing out her feelings for Akash... reason unknown...

Air Hostess Natasha: same as serial or even more egoistic and self-centered... crazy about akash... hates ananya... wants to separate them at ANY COST...

This character sketch will be helpful in future updates...

Next Part: pg 6

Edited by arjun_riya - 10 years ago

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arjun_riya

@arjun_riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Thank u everyone for your comments and likes. I am very busy nowdays and not able to respond to any comment. I am sorry for that. This one is a very long update and i could even give next update in few hours depending upon the response i get.

Here's the next Update:

Akash sits in the car nd drive off... he feels tht ananya was getting over-emotional bt shrugs it off thinking tht they had spend nearly 2 days together in Goa nd so might b she is jst missing him... bt there is some constant fear in his heart tht smthng bad is abt to happen...

On the other hand as akash goes away... ananya starts walking aimlessly on the road... she goes to a secluded area where no one is around whn suddenly...

(keep waiting...😉... wht happened vl b revealed later...)

Next day afternoon:

Akash has landed back to Delhi... As soon as he finished all his formalities he picked his phone and again tried calling Ananya... Since he had last met Ananya in the coffee shop he had not been able to contact her... Last night he tried contacting her but her was phone was either switched off or not reachable... In morning also he tried many times but again got the same response. His restlessness was growing and his conscious was telling him that Ananya was in some kind of danger... He tried to call her many times but on getting the same response he was frustated... He then called Mr Sen to know about Ananya's schedule but the response he got shocked him... Mr. Sen told that yesterday Ananya had not reported on duty and later when they tried to contact her, her phone was switched off... in the evening he got a call and a letter signed by higher authorities that First Officer Ananya is on a long leave due to some personal issues... but the mot interesting fact was that he didn't pass any such application of Ananya to the higher authorities nor he received any call from Ananya regarding not reporting on duty... this was the first time something like this happened otherwise Ananya always punctual and if by any chance she could be late she used to call him to inform...
Akash was now tensed because Ananya didn't inform him about anyting of this sort in the morning and more over she told him that she had a flight in afternoon...
As Akash landed back to Delhi he again tried calling Ananya and on getting the same response he was frustated... he asked Mr. Sen if by any chance Ananya called him but he just got negative response... It has been more than 24 hours since there was no contact with Ananya... He was tensed and ablove all the constant fear in his heart was nagging him making him more tensed and then he received a call from his superiours of Intelligence agency to report to the office immediately...
He went there and thought to deal with Ananya's absence after the meeting gets over... He knew that of he was called to office than it was something serious... And deep down in his heart he felt that it was something related to Ananya...
As soon as he reached the office he was lead to the his boss... After exchanging the pleasantries he was asked to sit down... The boss handed him an envelope and asked him to open it... He opened it and saw his tickets of Ambala and a letter...
The letter was as follows...

Captain Akash Saluja,

Catch the flight and reach the destination to get the answer to the numerous queries you are having about the one whom you love more than yourself. Till then don't panic neither take any action.

Yours' well wisher

After reading the letter he was shocked as well as astonished. He looked at his boss for answers but he just said " Captain this is not what it seems to be. There is much more for you ton know and even I don't know about all this. I also get orders from my superiors. So just follow the orders. Your flight is in another half an hour."

Akash saluted getting up and went to his house. He quickly packed his luggage. He saw Ananya's gift and kept if lovingly in his pocket near his heart so as to feel Ananya near his heart. He took the flight and reached the destination. A car was waiting for him at the irport. He sat in the car and the driver drove off. The car went outside the city to a highway. After a drive of about 1 hour the car came to a halt. He was in front of a military academy. He looked out of the window of the car and saw the name KANCHANJUNGA MILITARY ACADEMY. He didn't knew how was Ananya related to all this but he was very tensed and even anxious. the car went in the academy and stopped at the entry of the main building. He got down from the car and an orderly came to take his luggage. He looked at the pen Ananya had gifted him and caressed it lovingly closing his eyes remembering Ananya. He was in his thoughts when he felt a hand on his touch on his shoulders. He opened his eyes and looked at the man in front of him. There stood a man with dignity in army uniform. He looked at his name batch which read MAJOR NAVEEN SINGH AHLUWALIA. Naveen raised his hand for handshake and both the men shaked their hands and exchanged pleasantries.

Naveen: Welcome to KMA Captain Saluja.

Akash: Thank u sir.

Naveen: This pen is very special to u. (He said looking at the pen in Akash's pocket)

Akash: (caressing the pen) Yes sir, it is, it is the first gift from my heart.

Naveen: You love her very much.

Akash: Sir more than anything. She is my life.

Naveen just smiles and says: I know u have many questions in mind but before that please freshen-up. I'll show you your room.

Akash: No sir I m fine. Everything is less important than the person for whom I have come here.

Naveen was about to force him to freshen-up but one look in his eyes showed him the determination and he just asked him to follow. Both went to a room where one more person was sitting wearing a blue checks shirt and black jeans. As they stepped in the room he turned around and stood up. His eyes were red and one look on him could tell that he had been crying. He was holding a photo frame in his hand which he kept down as soon as the duo entered. Akash looked at the photo and saw that it was of the man in front of him with a beautiful girl hand-in-hand. Both were smiling and had a twinkle in their eyes. Naveen moved to the man and asked with his eyes if he was alright. He replied saying he is fine. He asked Akash to be seated and Akash sat on the in front of Naveen and the other man.

Naveen: Akash let me introduce you to him. He is Major Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.

Akash forwarded his hand saying "Captain Akash Saluja" and both the men shook their hands.

They sat on the sofa and before Akash could ask any question Naveen spoke.

Naveen: DCP Saluja...

Akash was shocked hearing his actual designation. Naveen looked at his shocked expressions and replied...

Naveen: I know everything about you. Mein tumhare saare questions ka bhi jawab dunga but usse pehle mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai.

Akash: sure sir.

Naveen: Its just Naveen DCP Saluja.

Akash: Then its just Akash.

Naveen: Akash Ananya akhri baar kal subah tumse ek coffee shop mein mili thi. Am i right?

Akash: yes

Naveen: Uske baad se uska phone switch off hai. Kya usne coffee shop mein tumhe kuch bhi bataya tha ya kuch diya tha?

Akash: Naveen usne bataya toh kuch bhi nahi tha bas ye pen diya tha aur bol rahi thi ki agar voh mujhse dur hui toh ye pen mujhe uski yaad dilaega. (He says showing them the pen)

Naveen asks if he could see the pen and Akash gives the pen to him. He gives the pen to him. Naveen carefully looks at the pen and openit. He seperate all the parts of the pen and looks at everything very closely......

To be continued...
Guys if i get a gud response then may be i would update next part before mid night...

Next Part: pg 7

Edited by arjun_riya - 10 years ago