Journey for love.... (cross-over with....) update- pg 6, 7 {31/10/14} - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
What a suspense!Its so interesting! Plz update soon! Can't wait! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great Update. Please Update Soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry guys for being late... Thanks for your comments and likes...


Here goes the update:

Naveen asks if he could see the pen and Akash gives the pen to him. Naveen carefully looks at the pen and open it. He separate all the parts of the pen and looks at everything very closely. Raj also looks at the parts and shows the body of the pen to Naveen. Naveen looks at it and smiles a little. He pulls out a small chip from the body of the pen. Rajveer (Raj) gets up from his place and brings his laptop. He switches it on and puts the chip in the card slot. He is about to open it but before that a handsome man of approximately the same age as the two Major's wearing a jeans and t-shirt enters in the room furiously opening the door which created a huge noise. The three get up suddenly and look at the door. Akash dosen't know the new guest but Naveen and raj are shocked seeing him. He is about to shout but before that Naveen speaks...

Naveen: gunny tum yahan???? Tum kab aae??????

Gunny (the man who entered): Tumne mujhse itni badi baat chupai... Teen din se princess ka koi pata nahi aur tum dono ne mujhe batana bhi zaruri nahi samjha...

Naveen: gunny tum chutti pe the aur hum tumhe pareshan nahi karna chahte the...

Gunny: (he said shouting) Nav pareshan!!!! Chutti gayi bhad mein... princess se zyada mere liye koi important nahi hai... Aur ye tum bhi jaante ho... Naveen kya princess mere liye kuch nahi hai... Kya mein tera dost nahi hun???

Naveen was trying to speak but gunny was too angry and hurt. He was just scolding/shouting on Naveen and Rajveer. Akash was stunned looking all this. Suddenly another man of approx. same age entered the room looking hell angry. He came and stood beside gunny. Naveen spoke on seeing him...

Naveen: Abhi tum yahan????

Abhi: nav haemin tum dono se ye umeed nahi thi... Hamari princess teen din se lapata hai aur hamein aaj malum pada... Voh toh achha hai gunny ne hamein phone karke bata diya varna tum dono toh humse kabhi kuch kehte bhi nahi...

Nav: abhi, gunny dekho yaar mein tum dono ko batane hi waala tha par tum dono ko batane se pehle mein sab kuch janna chahta tha.

Gunny: Major Naveen Singh Ahluwalia stop giving your excuses. Princess ke lapata hote hi tum bhi ye samajh gaye the ki ye sab iss case se juda hai... Hum sab jaante hain ki ye case kitna dangerous hai... Aur tumne itni badi baat nahi batai...

Gunny was shouting on Naveen when Raj shouted silencing everyone.

Raj: shut up all of u... just shut up... Vahan nia ka pata nahi kya haal hoga aur tum teeno usse dhundne ki jagah lad rahe ho... Aur ab toh choti bhi gayab ho gayi hai...

Saying this he moved out of the room angrily. Gunny and abhi were shocked listening to the new information. They both looked at Naveen shocked. Naveen just asked them to first sit and then he'll explain them everything.

Naveen: Akash first let me introduce you to both of them he is Major Gunraj Singh Randhawa aka gunny and he is Major Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan aka abhi and guys he is...

Abhi spoke in b/w: DCP Akash Saluja...

Naveen: Yes, ok so abhi and gunny tumhe ye princess ke lapata/kidnp hone ki baat kahan se pata chali????

Gunny: Do din se mein princess ko call kar raha tha but uska phone nahi lag raha tha aur tum aur raj phne nahi utha rahe the isliye meine finally sam ko phone kiya and then she told me everything and then I informed abhi and we both came here.

Naveen: That means you know everything about gudiya and nothing about choti...

Abhi: yes

Akash: a... Naveen who's princess and choti????

Naveen: oh I am so sorry Akash I forgot to tell actually we call Captain Naina Singh Ahluwalia as princess and Ananya as choti.

Akash: ohhh...

Akash understood one thing that Ananya was very close to all of them but he didn't knew why Ananya never told about them.

Naveen: About naina you all know and about Ananya I think Akash could tell better...

Akash then tells everything after their return from Goa. (Skipping some personal part in between)

Gunny: iska matlb hai choti ko uski kidnapping ka pata tha...

Abhi: Agr usko pata that oh usne apni kidnapping hone kyon di????

Naveen: iska jawab toh bas iss chip mein hai...

Till then raj came back and sat on his previous place. His eyes were blood red and he was sweating badly... Naveen asked him to play the chip and he did the same...

The chip started with Ananya's voice...

Akash agr aaj tum yeh chip sunn rahe ho matlb mein tumse dur hun aur tum meri team ke saath ho... I am Flight Lieutenant Ananya Rawat, a team member of the Hawks. Akash yaad hai meine tumhe kaha tha ki meri family se mein tumhe ek din zarur milwaungi... aaj meri puri family tumhare saamne hai...Bhaiyya mujhe pata hai aap bhi vahin ho aap bhi sab kuch sun rahe ho... Akash mein tumhara apni family se introduction karwana chahungi... Akash Naveen bhaiyya meri masi ke bete hain... mom dad aur musa mausi ki death ek plane crash mein ho gayi thi... Tab mein 7 saal ki thi... bhaiyya 8 saal ke aur princess 5 saal ki... Mom dad ki maut hum sabke liye ek sadma thi... Mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai jis din hum ma-papa aur mausi-mausa ka antim sanskaar karne ke baad ro rahe the tab princess hamare paas rote hue aai... meine usse pucha ki vo ro kyun rahi hai toh usne kaha ki hum dono ro rahe hain isliye voh ro rahi hai... Meine aur bhaiyya ne turnat apne aansu ponche aur usse smile di... Usne bhi uske baad apne aansu ponche aur hamein bahut pyaari smile di... Uski uss smile ne mujhe ye ehsaas dilaya ki voh kitni choti hai... kitni masum hai... usse toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uske mom-dad kabhi usko hamesha ke liye chod ke chale gaye hai... Uss din meine ek faisla liya tha ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaae mein uski ye muskurahat kabhi kam nahi hone dungi... Hum dono ko apna bachpan khona pada iss duniya mein jeene ke liye par humne hamesha princess ke bachpane ko protect kiya... Humne puri koshish ki uska bachpan usse koi na cheen sake... Bhaiyya ne puri koshish ki ki mein apna bachpan jee sakun par mein bhaiyya ko sab kuch akele kaise sambhalne de sakti thi... Mein bhi ek bachhi thi aur mujhe bhaiyya ne mujhe mature banaya... Par aaj bhi mein bhaiyya ke liye vahi choti hun jo tab thi... Tab bhi mujhe bhaiyya chahiye the aaj bhi chahiye hain... Hum dono ke mom-dad ki maut ke 6 mahine baad mom aur masi ki ek frnd jo USA mein rehti thi India aai aur tab unhe hamare baaree mein pata chala... Voh frnd thi gunny ki mom... tab aunty hamare liye permanently India shift ho gai aur phir hum unke aur gunny ke saath rehne lage... Gunny ne kabhi hamein paraya mehsus nahi hone diya... gunny aur bhaiyya bst friends ban gaye... mujhe bhi ek frnd mila aur naina ek aur bhai jo usko bahut pamper kare... Naina hamesha hum sabki ladli rahi hai... She's our princess... Aunty aur gunny ke saath shift hone ke baad humne apna school badla... bhai aur gunny ek hi clas mein the... tab mujhe Abhimanyu adhikari aka adhi mila... adhi aur mein bahut ache friends ban gaye... phir adhi ki unn teeno se bhi dosti ho gayi... adhi aur mera dono ka flying mein interest tha... phir hum college gaye... college mein raj, abhi aur sam mile... raj aur abhi bhai aur gunny ke class mate the... aur sam naina ki... Phir hum sabka ek gang bana... Adhi aur mera flying mein interest tha... Humne airforce join ki... Dono ne training saath mein li... sam ne bhi hamare baad airforce join ki aur voh hamari junior thi... Bhai, gunny, raj aur abhi ka hamesha se army mein interest tha... unhone KMA join kiya... ussi beech aunty ki heart attack se maut ho gayi thi... Hum ek baar phir anath ho gaye par iss baar hum sab ek saath the ek dusre ki takat ban ke... Uske baad bhai ki life mein bahut kuch hua ki bhai ke liye Naina ne bhi KMA join kiya... Bhai ki life ke bare mein main nahi bata sakti... voh sirf bhai hi tumhe bataenge... Jab princess ne KMA join kiya tab humnein realise hua ki hamari princess ab badi ho gayi hai... Samajhdar ho gayi hai... par uske andar voh nanhi si bachhi aaj bhi thi... Uss bachhi ko usne andar daba liya tha par Raj ne essa hone nahi diya... Raj ko naina se pehli nazar mein pyaar ho gaya tha aur ye baat sirf mujhe malum thi... KMA mein raj naina ka mentor bana aur raj, gunny aur abhi ne usko ek army officer banaya... Jab naina ko sabse zyada meri zarurat thi tab mein uska saath nahi de paai... Tab ye sab naina ki dhal bane aur naina ka saath diya... Issi beech naina ko raj se pyaar ho gaya... Par jab tak usse ye samajh aaya bahut der ho gayi thi... Voh tut gayi thi... Tab mera dil chahta tha ki sab uch chod ke naina ke paas chali jaaun par mein essa nahi kar sakti thi... Tab gunny, abhi, adhi aur sam ne naina ko sambhala aur usse ladne ka hausla diya aur aaj sirf inn sabki vajah se mein, bhai aur raj zinda hain aur tumhare paas hain... akash mera sab kuch mera ye pariwar aur meri hawks ki team hai aur ab ismein tum bhi shamil ho chuke ho... Akash mujhe nahi pata pyaar kya hota hai bas mujhe itna pata hai you are special to me very special... May be this is love... Mein tum se apne dil ki baat kehna chahti thi par bas apne aap ko rok leti thi kyunki mein pehle apna mission pura karna chahti thi... Mein tumhare bare mein sabkuch jaanti thi par tumhe apne bare mein nahi bata sakti thi... mujhe nahi pata ki aage kya hoga... Mera kya hoga... mein agar ab mar bhi gayi toh mujhe ek tasalli hogi ki meine tumse kuch nahi chupaya... Akash tumhare saath bitaya har lamha mere liye khas hai... Aur Goa mein mujhe ye ehsaas ho gayi ki mein tum mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho... Aap sab jaan na chate ho ki jab mujhe malum tha ki mein kidnap hone waali hun toh meine aap sabko kyun nahi bataya??? Voh isliye ki agr mein aapko bata deti toh aap mujhe bacha lete par mein essa nahi chahti thi... Mein princess ko vahan dusmano ke beech akela nahi chod sakti thi... I know hamari princess bahut strong hai usse kisi ki zarurat nahi hai kyuni usko aap sabne essa banaya hai... She's the best par kya karun behen hun... Aur ek behen se badke usse pyaar kiya hai... Akash yaad hai tumne mujhse ek baar pucha tha ki meri life ka sabse khusi ka din kaunsa tha??? Jab princess ki 16th b'day thi tab meine aur bhai ne princess se pucha ki usse kya gift chahiye??? Tab princess ne kaha ki uske paas iss duniya ka sabse khubsurat tahfa hai... Usne kaha uske paas ek essa bhai behen hai jinhone usse kabhi ma-papa ki kami mehsus nahi hone di... usne kaha ki usko nahi yaad uski mom kaisi thi par usse pata hai ki uski mom-dad bhi usse itna pyaar nahi de sakte jitna bhai, gunny, aunty aur meine usse diya hai... usne uss din mujhse kaha ki uski mom mein aur aunty hain... Akash usne mujhe apni maa kaha (her voice was broken it felt as if she was crying by now...) toh tum hi batao agar mein uski maa hun toh mein usse musibat mein akela kaise chod sakti hun... Jab mujhe bhai ka phne aaya unhone mujhe warn kiya tha... Meine apne informers se pata lagaya toh mujhe pata chala ki shayad voh log mujhe bhi kidnap karein... Meine bas itna kiya ki unhe mujhe kidnap karne ka mauka diya... Mein aap sabse bas ek promise chahti hun ki aap meri princess ko bacha lein... Akash agr mujhe kuch bhi hua toh mujhse waada karo ki apni life mein aage badoge aur kabhi mud ken ahi dekhoge... aur aap sabhi yahi karoge... meine jo kiya hai apni marzi hai sab kuch jaante hue kiya hai aur iska koi zimmedar nahi hai... bhai plz kabhi apne aap ko guilty mat samjhna... Mein aap sabse bahut pyaar karti hun... Agr mujhe kuch ho bhi gaya toh bhi mein khushi khusi marungi... Thank you Akash for the lovely memories of Goa... Welcome to tem LOVE Akash... Akash i just want to say I... I... I luv you...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Yeipee! I am d first to comment! Hearttouching update dear! ⭐️ Eagerly waiting for d next chapter! Plz do PM me! 😳
Edited by akanksha1319 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Its really good... please do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
yaar aisa kiu rahi ho tum??!! pata bhi hai kitna tension rehta hai??!! ab jaldi next part update karo. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
that ws a very emotional update
but loved it
superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Please continues ASAP
It is really good
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
wow.. lovely update..plz continue😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awesome
Just loved it
Read all the part ine one go
And in the last part am crying dear
Do cont soon

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