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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all sorry for being late
Not well but have to go for work because of leave issues so I am so much stressed
Coming to update it was really sweet
Trisha's mood swings being a sorted women she is Raghav became shocked initially but tried to pacify her
Her demand of Chaat and Raghav being hygienic conscious so natural
Trisha being pampered by Raghav so sweet as every pregnant women needs that from her husband
Now Trisha is in 3rd month that makes me scared hope she won't have issues in future
Hope the emotional part won't be prolonged and v get a happy ending for this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Az07

First of all sorry for being late
Not well but have to go for work because of leave issues so I am so much stressed
Coming to update it was really sweet
Trisha's mood swings being a sorted women she is Raghav became shocked initially but tried to pacify her
Her demand of Chaat and Raghav being hygienic conscious so natural
Trisha being pampered by Raghav so sweet as every pregnant women needs that from her husband
Now Trisha is in 3rd month that makes me scared hope she won't have issues in future
Hope the emotional part won't be prolonged and v get a happy ending for this story

Thanks for the review uma updating the next part on hope you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm update dear.. Raghav s taking care of Trisha so nicely...love the part where he said that Trisha s most important for him...panipuri nd chat scene was too good... Getting scared for Raghav nd Trisha... Waiting eagerly for the next part... Update soon dear... Nd tnku soo much for the lovely update..

thank for commenting shaina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Pleasant update from the very start.. ⭐️👏
It was so nice to see RaTri so happy with kid coming in their life...
All is going well... No medical probs.. no tensions... no other probs if any cud be..
Loved to see a caring Raghav preparing Brkfst for Trisha n loving her so much..
The care,, the love,, the concern are the only things that a wud be mother longs for... N Raghav is providing them all to her.. Loved to see this..😃
Now that she is left alone at home... a bad element is after Trisha n Raghav as well..
Raghav sent somewhere on a call... n some person came to home with a bad intention to Trisha...
Is he Vidooshak... ??/ I am sensing something bad happen to her...
God forbid she is saved..
Is the Title for this mishap... Yu na rutho humse.. ??
Feeling a worried situation here for RaTri.. n will wait for the next..
Thanks dear.. God bless you.. !!!

Thanks for commenting bawa bhai. Posting the next update now hope you like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

RaTri TS ~ Yu na Rutho humse

Chapter 4




Raghav drove as fast as he could to the place he was told to the place he was told to come. He had left immediately after getting the call without informing anyone. And he was sure that the all was from vidhooshak. He purposely didn't tell anything to trisha as he knew she would like to company with him and he didn't want to put her and the baby's life in danger as he knew how dangerous vidhooshak could be he soon reached the place .It looked liked a under construction building. He soo started searching for vidhooshak. He soon sensed some movement on the fifth floor so he ran up the stairs . coming t o a screeching halt he took out he gun and pointed it out at vidhooshak who was standing with his back to raghav.

Raghav - vidhooshak maine kaha tha na tum jald hi main tumhe pakad lunga dekho main aaj main iss khel ko hamesha hamesha ke liye khatam kar lunga Vidhooshak -Raghav itni bhi kya jaldi hai khel khatam karne ke liye ,pehale apne patte (playing cards) dekho to sahi par abssos iss bar tumhara Ekka (Ace) mere paas hain .Raghav - matlab kya hai tumhara.

Vidhooshak -matlab yeh hai ki (turning around holding trisha at gunpoint ) tumhari pyari Patni aur iss ke pet main pal raha tumhara baccha mere Hatoon main hai .Trisha - Raghav she screamed. Pls mujhe bachao (She said struggling to free her self )


Flashback (few hours ago )

Trisha opened the door expecting it to be raghav but was shocked to see vidhooshak in front of her eyes. First time in her life she was feeling scared of something She quickly tried to close the door but it was too late vidhooshak sprayed something in front of her which made her faint in a moment. She didn't remember what happened after that .


The world seemed to be slipping for Raghav seeing Trisha at vidhooshak gunpoint. Raghav - (angrily )vidhooshak yeh sab karne ki tumhari himmat kaise hui .tumhari dushmani mujhse hai na to .Trisha ko kyu beech main laa rahe hu ,Pls trisha ko Chhod do . Main keh deta hu agar trisha ko ya mere bachhe ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe nahi chodunga. Vidhooshak -aaise kaise raghav. Hamari itni purani dushmani hai .aaise kaise main sab kuch Chhod du .Raghav was really getting scared by now he was really worried about trisha .Raghav - pls vidhooshak trisha ko chood do .Tumhe mujhe marna hai toh mujhe maro par pls trisha ko chood do In the meantime trisha was struggling hard to free herself from vidhooshak but couldn't. Vidhooshak who was standing near the stairs said vidhooshak -lo raghav kar di puri tumhari kwaaish, Chhod diya trisha ko he left Trishas and Trisha rolled down the stairs as vidhooshak was standing on the edge on the stairs and pushed her down .Trisha rolled down to the last stair her hand instantly went to her stomach she clutched he and started screaming Aah Ahh .Raghav just couldn't believe what had happened. Vidhooshak had pushed trisha down the stairs. He saw vidhooshak pointing the gun towards him but he soon escaped and ran down the stairs to see trisha lying there life less. He took out his gun to shoot vidhooshak but vidhooshak had escaped from the construction lift .Raghav saw that trisha had got hurt on her forehead due to the fall .He was just hoping for their baby to be safe Raghav - trisha aakhen kholo trisha,Aaken kholo he demanded but seeing her unresponsive he took her in his arms and carried her to the car he quickly put her on the back sea t and drove the car to the near by hospital as fast as he could .He soon reached the hospital .He carried her to the emergency room the doctors on duty came there and started checking her at once. Doctor -Kay hua hain inko Raghav - trisha stairs se gir gayi hai .pls app jaldi kuch kijiye pls app meri patni aur bacche ko bacha kijiye . Doctor -hum apni puri koshish karenge, app shanti rakhiye. Soon they shifted trisha to a private room here the doctors were treating her .Raghav was waiting outside anxiously. He wasn't able to believe how his life had changed .He silently prayed to god asking why is he doing all this with him why he always has to suffer .He was brought out of his thoughts by Rajbir call, Rajbir - raghav kaha ho tum .akdum kaha chala gaye tum .tum theek to ho na ?Raghav - yaha kuch theek nahi hai Rajbir he narrated the full incident to Rajbir. Rajbir was shocked after reading all this he told raghav that they were reaching there as soon as they could, soon the whole team Trishas mom reached there .Raghav was still sitting there he was looking soo disturbed. Rajbir - Raghav kuch bata chala .Raghav - nahi Rajbir doctor kabse use treat kar rahe hai Vo mujhse kuch bata bhi nahi rahe hain ,mujhe bahut daar lag raha hai Rajbir he said literally in tears Rajbir came close to him and hugged to comfort him .soo the doctor same outside and said Doctor -yaha raghav kaun hain .Raghav came forward and said main... main hu raghav kya hua sab theek to hai na meri wife aur mera bacha dono theek to hai na .Doctor- dekhiye aap ki patni trisha to bilkul theek hai unhe thodi der main hosh bhi aajayega par ...Raghav - par kyaaa..Doctor- par Mr Raghav hum aapke bacche ko nahi bacha paye. humne bahut koshish kari par bleeding bahut hoyi thi aur jiss tarah se Mrs trisha girgayi thi uss sab ke bad bacche ka bacha namumkin tha .I am really sorry. App trisha ko thodi der main dekh sakte hai .Raghav was totally devastated after hearing the news .she just couldn't believe that his life had changed soo much in a day. Tears started coming from his eyes and he slumped on the chair near by .everyone else there were also shocked after hearing about RaTri's loss . Rajbir tried to console raghav who was crying by now .Rajbir - santh hoo jao raghav .Pls agar tum aaise tut gaye to trisha ko kon dekhega, uss ka to soch Vo kitni tut jayegi se saab jab use batta chalega Raghav - main trisha ko face nahi kar sakta main use yeh sab nahi bata sakta trisha yeh sab sun ke toot jayegi .Trisha's mom -par raghav beta batana to tumhe hi padega na ,tum Pati ho uske. Raghav was still crying Trisha's mom came close to raghav and hugged him Raghav - Tum mere jamai kam bete jaise ho .main chahati hu ki tum trisha ko ye sab batao aur iss daur se saath saath bahar niklo, main mere bachoo ko udaas nahi dekh sakti


Soon raghav entered Trishas room and sat by her side .He took hold of her hand and kissed it he caressed her forehead and kissed her again. Trisha slowly opened her eyes and looked at raghav. Raghav - trisha kaisa feel kar rahi hu tum abb Trisha - main theek hu raghav par raghav hamare bachhe Vo to theek hain na use to kuch nahi hua .Raghav - trisha tumne kuch khana hai main kuch leke aata hu (he said trying to avoid the question ).but trisha held his hand and said Trisha - raghav baat ko mat talo batao mujhe hamara baccha to theek hai nai .usse to kuch nahi hi .Raghav just couldn't control his tears and started crying holding her hand. Trisha - Raghav tum ro kyu rahe ho batao na kya hua hai Raghav - trisha humne hamara baccha kho diya hai .doctors usse nahi bacha paye .Trisha - tum jhoot bol rahe ho na .main janti hu hamare bache ko kuch nahi hua .I can feel it she took his hands and put it on her stomach, dekho bolo tum jhoot bol rahe ho na .Raghav - nahi trisha humne hamara baccha kho diya hai he said .tears came in Trishas eyes and she started crying loudly. Raghav tried to control her but she was out of control. Raghav tried to hold trisha in his arms but was shocked when trisha slapped him on him cheeks .

So here it Is .Sorry for the delay in posting. I am really very nervous now .Hope you like the update
Sorry if I have made some mistakes. Pls forgive me for that .
Edited by Tasha1994 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Very emotional and sad update Tasha !
I got scared almost when i read that Raghav has reached to Vidooshak and that with Trisha in his hold. He did what he wanted and did not listen to Raghav. The mishap was deliberate and planned 😭 and all got lost from RaTri's hands.
I could not see a shattered raghav crying 😭 But hats off to his Mom in law who caressed him and asked him to go to Trisha.
But the last scene was much harder than any. Trisha wanted to know about the baby and raghav was trying to delay. And when he told the truth, tears engrossed both of them. 😭 😭
Trisha slapped Raghav 😭😭 ?? 😭😭 she finds him responsible for the mishap.
Very sad one. Will wait for the reaction of raghav and his tricks and requests to manao Trisha !


I am really very nervous now .Hope you like the update
Sorry if I have made some mistakes. Pls forgive me for that .

Hey Tasha. pls don't ever say that dear ! I can understand your nervousness but U have not done any mistake here 😊😊
Thanks and loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
It was indeed an emotional part
Trisha being kidnapped by Vidhushak and at gun point Raghav being helpless bot Raghav and Trisha were scared for the first time in there life
He just threw a pregnant Trisha from stairs and Raghav apparently could do nothing
Raghav was so broken by the news of Trisha's miscarriage and he don't have the strength to reveal truth to Trisha. He can't see her break down
Trisha's emotions was expected her state of shock and not ready to believe the truth of her miscarriage
For a women it's a tough phase and her anger on Raghav is justified she always trusted him blindly that he will never allow anyone to harm her or there baby
I really hope Trisha won't have issues in future as she was in third month of her pregnancy and you will give a happy ending to this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear its really very emotional story, so sad that vidhusakh escaped from raghavs hand after hurting trisha and there unborn baby 😡 really very emotional moment😭😭 but i liked how trisha's mom consoled raghav and hugged him as her son and helped raghav in getting the courage to face trisha after all this. Rajbir consoled raghav, such a beautiful friendship they have but why trisha is blaming raghav for all this and she slaped him ?🤔 but i can understand that she had lossed her child and its very painful moment for any mother to hear these words and to face these situation 😭 and after this what will be raghav's reaction towards trisha
Very emotional story tasha and Thankyou soo...much dear for the story , i loved it.
It touches the depth of my heart and after reading this i have tears in my eyes😭😭. thankyou sooo...much for this❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a emotional part it is...oh that vidushak 😡 how dare he s...he kidnapped Trisha from Raghav's residence... Nd put her at a gun point!!!He pushed Trisha from stair case nd spoil RaTri's baby 😭 They lost their baby!!! Trisha's mom nd their team member consoled him so sweetly..Oh Trisha slapped Raghav... Very bad!!but her anger s justified...waiting for the next part... Update soon... 😉
Edited by Shaina744 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for being late Tasha...
Awesome emotional update this is... the way vidushak kidnapped Trisha and used her against Raghav...and than pushing her down...Raghav must have been shattered to the core seeing all this.
Everyone including Rajbir, Trisha's mom are supporting him in this crucial time...just shows how important they are for each other...
Raghav avoiding the question from Trisha was so natural, he knew she would be devastated...but ultimately he had to tell her...
Her reaction is shocking for him but if we think from her angle...thats justified...now he is going to have a tough time pacifying her and regaining that love and trust in him... vidushak has once again managed to make him all alone...
Lovely presentation dear...
waiting for next eagerly...

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