RaTri story: Tum bin...jaaun kahan..Last Part on page 17 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07



May be it's because I am too depressed these days
Didn't mean to hurt u


No its not about hurting me dear...its just about frankly expressing what you felt...so you said that...i am fine with any kind of reviews😊
I won't say anything about how you are feeling these days as i know these are your personal matters and you will come out of it soon😊
Take care ...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Coming to this thread in a while dear 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Coming to this thread in a while dear 🤗


Sure bhabhi🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Manisha, thanks dear for this awesomely a great update sweetie 👏
What i loved the most is Raghav's determination and his faith in God and his love! I liked the way you have presented the ending dear, it's fabulous in every ways.
First is the outcome of Raghav's efforts! His love made everything fine and Trisha got support to her heart that yes she can be fine.
Second, the time Raghav had to tell the truth of infertility to Trisha. Loved how they both conversed. The love, the closeness, the need, all came out from their hearts and souls that are ONE now.
Third, the ending is so sweet. Liked how you maintained the happiness in the eyes of the lovers. They are yes happy, happier and going to be more happiest in the coming days. The things untold are loved to be imagined! The life ahead is the beginning of a new life, so nothing got detailed of their union. Loving to imagine them
The Title suits the ending - tum bin jaaon kahaan! They have got each other and each other's love! The story ahead can be imagined the way it appears to be. And i loved you have given a lovely message from the POVs of RaTri. Trisha wanted him to move on as she won't be able to give him a baby and he saying that for that he has to reborn again. I mean, the love is shown so purely with hearts and souls so mingled in each other. Both are ready to sacrifice. Trisha, her love that Raghav rejected And Raghav the babies in their life that Trisha had hard time to.
Awesome and a stupendous ending to a sweet story! Loved it more and luv ya more ❤️🤗
Thanks, i enjoyed the story with my heart!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Hope you all like it...please forgive me for any mistakes ...which i know are there...loves to everyone..🤗

Like ?? I just loved and adored it Manisha di 👏👏 Such a loving update with a superb finish to a sweet story !!!! ⭐️⭐️
Loved the moment when Raghav was still standing outside the OT and felt for Trsiha to come back to him and hold him !
Loved the moment when her father asked how his princess is !!! Loved the moment when upon learning the truth, Trisha asked him to move on and he said for that he has to take another janam and for that he has to... and she put her palm on his face, not to speak up the devastating sentence !
Loved the moments of reaching home, Trisha getting to sit on her Chair, and finally they saw purohit announcing the date of their marriage !!!
Like them, me too very happy today Di ! RaTri who are meant for each other, have got each other and their love is eternal, unconditional and full of love ! I liked the way the story got ended, but feelign bad that it ended.
Loves to U di, for the lovely story, so unique and so thoughtful and full of love expressed, with no hurdles anymore 🤗
Beautiful update and getting a Diwali gift from you, love you and thank you di, huggies ❤️


Thanks a lot Sweetie...I am so glad that you could feel the emotions which i tried to portray...Yeah RaTri are meant for each other...Really your appreciation means a lot to me sweetie...🤗
Lots of love to you too sweetheart❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nishi05

Beautiful... 👏

It's the beginning of their new life.
Thanks for the beautiful story.
Love it... Love you sweetie ❤️🤗


Thanks a lot Devyani for your love...I love you too dear🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Awesomely superb update Manisha... ⭐️👏

Loved the end to one of the most beautiful story i have ever read... !!!
Raghav changed Trisha's life n made every one happy with her having a hope in her eyes... Though she felt of a last scene of her life... but raghav was determined to get her back from God... His tears fell... but his heart never did... !
Operated successfully... ⭐️⭐️
Felt so emotional over the reality of her not able to...
And felt too much for raghav when he had to tell the reality to his love.. ! I cud understand how he must have been feeling... but he composed himself n did same to his love... ! I felt for Trisha who asked him to move on in his life... but loved raghav saying...

.tum chahti ho ki main tumhare liye apne pyaar ko bhula du...no Trisha...is janam mein to yeh possible nahi hai...agar tum chahti ho ki main tumhari ichha poori karoon to mujhe doosra janam lena padega...aur uske liye mujhe apni life abhi...
you made us emotional Manisha... 😳😃

Trisha made him silent and the silence said it all...

Loved the team who are more than family to RaTri gave their full support to them... ! N finally Trisha joined her office... n what a welcome... !
Now as both are going to tie the knot to their beautiful love... i fell very happy inside that raghav did what he meant... he got his love back to him... from death n from God.. !

Purely a lovely story all in all... ! Beautiful outcome to the sad phase... n lovely faces after the shades of black... !
Thanks dear sis for this gift... feel like Diwali is celebrated with great fervor... !
Thanks again n again n God bless... ! What a beginning to their life... !!! ⭐️


Thanks a lot Bro for your lovely words...your love has made me write my story once again...so thanks a lot to you bro❤️
I am so glad you liked my effort...lots of love to you from your sis🤗

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