Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta! Ratri FS! part 5B on pg 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waitng fr last prt...update soon dear..
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hope your health Is fine uma .waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am so sorry for the delay will reply soon individually
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Part 3

Raghav knew he had hurt Trisha so badly this time. Even being totally opposite to each other they always had a bond of trust. His one mistake have broken it and that has shaken Trisha so badly. Trisha had totally gone into a silent mode with him. He would have handled her if she had shouted at him but her silence is killing him. He can't bare her silence. He absolutely have no idea how to manao her. Even if she talks it will be related to work.
Days started passing slowly Raghav tried his level best to melt her anger but Trisha was still not in talking terms with Raghav. One day he heard her speaking with her mother over phone related to her marriage proposals. Raghav felt restless. He always felt restless when ever he hear about marriage proposals for her. He saw her leaving the office early in the evening. He understood she is going to meet some guy who had sent marriage proposal for her. He decided to follow her.

Cafe coffee day

Trisha apparently had no interest to meet some random guys selected by her mother but at the same time she can't neglect her mother's words. Her mother had personally arranged a meeting with this guy and if she didn't turn up it will be an insult to her mother.
He was apparently a decent looking gentle man who has been topper from IIT Delhi now working as a VP in a famous IT Industry in Delhi. He started talking about himself and his likes and dislikes and how he liked her instantly seeing her photograph.
Trisha actually didn't know what to say. She knew she can't give her usual excuse that she can't quit her job as the guy is working in Delhi itself and he seems to respect her profession.
That's when she felt a hand over her shoulder. She was astonished to see Raghav.
Raghav: Kya hua darling? Kaun hai yeh? ( pointing towards the guy)
Guy ( astonished): darling?
Raghav: Haan apni girl friend Ko darling nahi toh aur Kya bolegi?
Trisha was astonished. Girl friend? What is he doing?
Trisha: Raghav!
Guy: Tum inhe janthi Ho?
Trisha: of course mere colleague hai.
Raghav: Sirf colleague nahi balki boy friend Bhi hoon.
Trisha: Raghav! Yeh Kaisi behuhdi mazaak hai?
Raghav: mazaak mein nahi Tum kar Rahi Ho. Janthi hoon muhejse galthi hui aur Tum muhejse Naraz Ho par Iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki Tum Kisi Bhi idiot Ko Shaadi Ke Liye Milne aayegi.
Trisha ( angrily): Raghav behave yourself. Kuch Bhi Bolijarahi Ho. Aap please Bura math maniye yeh hamesha pranks karthi Rahthi hai.
Raghav: suniye Bhai sab yeh meri girl friend hai muhejse Naraz hai. Yeh Sirf muhey irritate Karne Ke Liye aapko Milne aayi hai. Agar aapko abhi Bhi mere baath Ka Yakeen nahi hai toh Trisha ki Haath mein laga hua mehendi Dekho. Uss mein meri naam likha hua hai.
Trisha was shocked. Raghav forcefully showed her mehendi to the guy. Though her mehendi design started fading Raghav's name was still seen as her mehendi had became really dark after applying it.
Guy: yeh tumne theek nahi kiya Trisha. Sirf apni boy friend Ko irritate Karne Ke Liye muhey use kiya.
He left angrily angrily from there.
Trisha was extremely irritated and angry. Raghav had a naughty smile.
Trisha: what the hell Raghav? Tume yeh sab mazaak Lagtha hai. Ab unho ne jake yeh sab meri mumma Ko boldhoongi
Raghav: come on Trisha Tum uss jaisi bewakoof Ko Milne aayi like really?
Trisha: shut up. Tum iss Tarah muhejse Milna aaye huae guest Ko insult nahi karsakthi. Woh Bhi meri mumma ne bheja huae Aadmi Ko.
Raghav: tumari mumma ki choice itna Karab kyun hai? Kahan se milti hai inhe yeh jaisi logo Ko?
Trisha: Raghav how dare you insult my mother like this?
Suddenly they heard a noise from back. They both turned towards the source of noise. A man dressed in black suit was standing in front of them. His dress code made them understood that he is the manager of the cafe.
Manger: excuse me! Aap pati patni ghar jake kyun nahi ladthi? Iss Tarah mere cafe mein bait kar doosere logo Ko kyun parishan kar Rahi Ho?
Trisha and Raghav became totally embarrassed. Once again some one had misunderstood them as a couple. Trisha closed her eyes in irritation and left from there. Raghav too followed her.

Parking area

Trisha was about to open her car but Raghav forcefully stopped her.
Trisha: what the hell? Just leave me.
Raghav: Trisha mein Hazaar Baar tumse Maafi mang chuki hoon. Ab toh apni Narasgi chodo. Aur iss Tarah ladko Ko Milna bandh Karo.
Trisha: excuse me! Tum kiss Haq se yeh bolrahi Ho?
Raghav: Tum muhejse pyaar karthi hoon uss Haq se.
Trisha: excuse me? Tumari dimang Karabh hogayi hai Kya? Pyaar woh Bhi tumse? Sapna mein Bhi Aisa nahi Hoga.
Raghav: so you don't love me?
Trisha: no
Raghav: Pakka?
Trisha: Haan.
Raghav: ok then let me see.
Trisha looked at him as she didn't understand what he meant. She was astonished when he leaned towards her and suddenly kissed on her lips. She was too shocked initially but then afterwards she got melted in his kiss. Her eyes were closed and Raghav looked at her and smiled.
Raghav: just look at you.
Trisha opened her eyes and she herself was shocked. He left from there with a smile.

Trisha's residence

Trisha sat in front of the dressing table and touched her lips. She could still feel his touch. Trisha's mother entered her room and saw Trisha lost in her own world.
She forcefully shook on Trisha's shoulder. Trisha came back to reality.
Trisha: Kya hua mumma?
Trisha's mother: yeh toh muhey tumse poochna chahiye tha. Kya hua tume Aaj? Abhi takh tumne change nahi kiya. Aur Tum apni duniya mein Khoye hua hai?
Trisha didn't know what to say.
Trisha's mother: aur Kaun hai tumari woh boyfriend? Jisne cafe aayi thi?
Trisha: mumma woh kuch Bhi nahi tha. Aap fikhar math kijiye. Woh Sirf Ek prank tha.
Trisha's mother looked at her. She could sense that something is there which Trisha is hiding. But at the same time she also know Trisha will never lie to her. She decided to wait till Trisha sort of things herself and be ready to express herself in front of her.


Pre cap: Ratri's life in danger
Ps: my health is deteriorating for past few days I have wrote this upto now and stopped so I am posting it till what all I have written don't have energy to continue at moment will finish this as soon I feel better. Hope you guys will like it. Really sorry for the delay and for such an update


Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
thanks for the update uma .off to read it.get well soon dear .no worries about the updates .they can wait pls take Care of your health
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Uma 🤗
How are U now dear ?? Pls don't take stress and take adequate rest first !

The update !
I knew initially that Trisha will make Raghav days to manao him, but she would go to meet some guy as proposed by her mother ?? 😳 I mean this is a blow to him and for her, she was only doing her bits to give all the respect to her Mom's efforts.
I won't blame Raghav though he did what he should not 😉 He deliberately entered the cafe and started being so familiar with Trisha as a boy friend. I was like amusing myself over his deeds.
I felt pity over that guy's insult, yet felt so good that good he is gone 😉
Loved how the manager embarrassed both of them and took them as a couple 😛 Loved his words to address them a couple
The scene at the parking area was too loving ! The way he took her and kissed, Trisha lost to him and had no words at all to say. ❤️
The mirror scene made it so clear how she feels for him. And now her mother is waiting for the reality to come out. I wish sooner the better 😃
Lovely update, loved it to the core 👏👏
But at the same time feeling so bad for your health.
Pehle Manisha and now aap
Pls pls take a very good care of yourself. The weather is too bad for everyone ! May God be with U always.
Loves and huggies ❤️🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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At first pls take care of yourself dear... Take rest nd you need not say sorry...
Love the update a lot...Trisha went to meet another guy suggested by her mother for marriage.,...RaTri scene in cafe was too good... Raghav introduced himself as Trisha's boyfriend...manager misunderstood RaTri as couple... Nd oh Raghav kissed Trisha n parking area!! In home Trisha was trying to feel him by touching her lips...really awsm update...precap s so scary... Waiting for next part dear...
Take your medicines in time nd take rest dear... Get well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update uma .really loved it a lot .so now Trisha is really angry with Raghav and it's natural the guy she trusted soo much didn't share anything with her .her anger is soo justified.Raghav trying to convince Trisha but she is not getting convinced now .so now Trisha went to meet a boy for marriage .loved how Raghav entered the cafe and acted as trishas boyfriend. loved how the cafe manager assumed them as hubby and wife leaving them embarrassed. the parking scene was soo awesome. the way Raghav kissed Trisha and the way Raghav told her to look at herself was soo cute .really loved that scene soo much .so now Trishas mom has got to know there's something in her mind .hope Trisha tells her mom soon that she loves raghav. hope Trisha forgives Raghav soon thanks so much for such a awesome update. really loved it a lot.

take care of your health uma .so worry about updates. take rest and get well soon.
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Hi Uma, fever slightly less right now, so decided to reply to your update..
Raghav having a real tough time in trying to manao her this time, obviously she was too hurt this time...
Raghav like a lover boy following her to the CCD and calling her darling...so cute and romantic... She must have been so shocked to see this...
Raghav seeing off that guy with his tactics... She got all the more angry and the manager mistook them as a couple... So sweet... They just argued like this only...what's the fault of the manager...
Best part was the parking lot scene, the kiss and the way he asked her to look at herself... She can not hide her love in front of him when he is up to his pranks...
Her mother now has some doubts about something going on in her mind...she waits for Trisha's confession herself... Let's see what happens further...
The precap is so scary...what might have happened..
I'm waiting eagerly for you to get well soon completely my dear... Take rest and when you are absolutely fine, complete this lovely story of yours...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Teaser

Raghav looked at her angelic face. He actually didn't want to spoil this lovely moment but he had already seen the consequences of hiding one truth from her. He somehow have to reveal about the Ranchi kiss incident to her before she learns about it by herself
Raghav: Trisha Mein Tumse ek Baath Kehna Chathi hoon
Trisha looked at him anxiously
Raghav was feeling like a kid caught for his mischievous act
Raghav: woh mein actually
Raghav didn't know how to say for the first time in his life he was nervous

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