Baat Hamari Pakki Hai! last part - Pg 8

Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#1
Part 1 pg 4

New Ratri Story! Baat Hamari Pakki Hai! Teaser!


Trisha didn't notice Raghav was standing behind her as she was trying to pacify her mother in phone.
Trisha: Mumma please try and understand yeh Bahuth complicated case hai aur jald Se Hume yeh solve karna hai ek ladki ki Jaan Khatrey Mein hai. Issliye hum Raipur jaa Rahi hai. Mere pass itna waqath nahi tha Aap Bahar Gayi thi aur muhey flight ka waqath Ho raha tha. Issliye aapse Milne baggaher Gayi. Sorry!
After few seconds
Trisha: come on Mumma mein ek cbi officer hoon. Mera Jaan hamesha Khatrey mein hain. Yeh Baath Panditji batana zaroori nahi hai. Aur yeh Kya sirf apni Suhaag hi muhey bacha saktha hai. Muhey In Sab cheez mein koi yakeen nahi hai. Yeh Sab andhavishwas hai. Ab mein phone Rakthi hoon. Raipur phonjkar aap ko call karthi hoon. Bye!
After cutting the call she turned back only to seeing Raghav standing there with his usual mischievous smile. She was embarrassed as he heard her conversation with her mother about her Suhaag.
Raghav: waise Trisha tumari Mumma ka Dar jais hai. Astrology Bhi ek Tarah ki science hai. Panditji Aisi kuch nahi bologey.
Trisha: come on Raghav ek din Sab marjayengey. Sirf apni Suhaag aapko Bach saktha hai yeh Sab film mein Hota hai
Raghav ( smirk): kyun tumari Mumma ki Tasali ke liye hum Raipur jake shaadi Kare?
Trisha blushed profusely
Trisha: Raghav!
She just didn't know whether he was just teasing to irritate her or did he indirectly confess?

I will continuing this only after my TS ek Ristha and Tum bin finishes
Let me know your opinion about this story. Should I continue this after my on going TS finishes?
Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

52

Views

10.1k

Users

8

Likes

33

Frequent Posters

Desaitara1234 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Wow such awesome teaser. Loved it a lot do continue soon
Ani09 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Uma so cute teaser,
Trisha as usual was arguing with her mom and Raghav was silently listening to their conversation. Raghav asking her to get married in Raipur. Raghav always confuse her that whether he was teasing or confessing 😉. Will wait for it.
babita.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#4
OMGeee !
Raghav was so desperate to tell her about his feelings. I just wish ye baat pakki hi rahe 😳

Thanks for this new story for the future. I feel our future is safe in RaTri's stories writtne by you and others ! 😃
braveheartdoc thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Cute and awesome teaser... Trisha being urged by her mom to get married as according to some pandit, her life can be safe only if she marries someone... who else other than Raghav could save her as always... though she doesn't believe in all these myths but Raghav would definitely do something... he won't let her life be in danger ever.
Please continue soon but i would request you to first finish your current story and Tum Bin first.
Tasha1994 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#6
such a awesome teaser dear .loved it soo much
Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Uma so cute teaser,

Trisha as usual was arguing with her mom and Raghav was silently listening to their conversation. Raghav asking her to get married in Raipur. Raghav always confuse her that whether he was teasing or confessing😉. Will wait for it.



Raghav like usual listening to Trisha's conversation with her mom
He always confuse her that's maybe because he just don't want to be too obvious and at the same time he wanted to give her subtle clues too
Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: babita..

OMGeee !

Raghav was so desperate to tell her about his feelings. I just wish ye baat pakki hi rahe😳

Thanks for this new story for the future. I feel our future is safe in RaTri's stories writtne by you and others !😃



Raghav is so desperate to tell her about his feelings for her
Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Cute and awesome teaser... Trisha being urged by her mom to get married as according to some pandit, her life can be safe only if she marries someone... who else other than Raghav could save her as always... though she doesn't believe in all these myths but Raghav would definitely do something... he won't let her life be in danger ever.

Please continue soon but i would request you to first finish your current story and Tum Bin first.



Trisha being a practical girl doesn't believe in all myths and superstitions
Of course who else can save Trisha when she is danger other than Raghav and vice versa too they both won't allow any danger to happen each other
Yes I will continue only after Tum Bin
This story too is a two shot
Az07 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Banner updated hope you guys liked it

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".