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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Sorry once again for being late...

No problem
I loved the way the entire team cares for each other and the way everyone came forward to help Rajbir and his friend... lovely...
Team is like a family so they care for each other a lot
The case again is quite interesting... these things do happen in our hospitals... you have taken a case where a patient is murdered in the hospital... i would say that the doctors are also not untouch from such things with them... if not murder but atleast the misbehaviour, the violence from patients and their relatives and the ill treatment towards them even after working so hard... i'm saying this after working in many reputed govt hospitals of Delhi... such things do happen...
Yes these scenarios are so common to we doctors especially to those who work on government hospital
The way hospital authorities gave in under pressure is well presented... a genuine and truthful person like siddhi has to bear the brunt of political pressure... sad but yes... TRUE
That's so commonly seen now a days
Raghav hearing the conversation between her mom and Trisha and later asking about her choice of guy for her was sooo cute...👏
He never leaves a chance to irritate her and whenever it comes to her marriage he is so bothered
The way the team is trying to solve the case is interesting...
Thanks
The precap looks scary... i think it would be related to the powerful people involved in the case and maybe the astrological prediction comes true for her... Raghav will obviously do anything to save her...
Waiting for the next part eagerly... please update soon...
Raghav will obviously save Trisha. Can't reveal much about the story line
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: babita..

Baat hamari pakki hai, wo toh honi hi hai --- RaTri ki bat toh pakki hi hai 😃

So the light hearted story in making ! Lovely concept and fine presentation Uma 👏👏
Thank you
Liked how as a team, everyone were ready to help Rajbir and went to Raipur.
The case is of gundaraaj where no one have guts to go against them and they feel free to murder anyone and do anything they want.
The team is like a family and they care for each other a lot. Unfortunately these things do happen in our country
Liked how Raghav overheard the phone call of Trisha and then asked her to be astrological and let's get married becos her suhaag can save her. This seems ridiculous to her, but he sees a point in this.
I wish they get married even if it is for Trisha's safety. 😳😉
He was just trying to irritate her. He knows she don't believe in all this
Lovely scene where Raghav asked her about her taste for her future hubby and she unknowingly told him about Raghav and his qualities. The burying herself in the magazine was amusing and the blushes she had, gave a relief to raghav and his heart !
Though he hide it in his teasing he is so worried when he hear about her marriage
Now is the time to meet the Gunda Yuvraj, will wait for the further story in the case !
Awesome, an awesome piece of work Uma ⭐️⭐️ Loved it and will wait for the case moves and how RaTri scenes go on and we get light hearted scenes this time.
Thank you glad you liked it
Trisha's life in danger -- time for her suhaag ( Raghav ) to help her ?? 😳
Raghav will definitely save her can't say much about the story line

Hugs and loves Uma 🤗 ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Az07

Teaser

Raghav and Trisha was sitting in the car. It was extremely windy night and they could make out it can rain at any time. Suddenly thundered. Trisha and Raghav looked at each other.
Raghav ( smrik): Trisha tume Thunder se Dar nahi lagtha?
Trisha: nahi kyun?
Raghav: oh ho! Agar tume Dar lagthi tho tum an muhey Dar ke wahey se hug karthi hogi. Tum film mo mein Dekha nahi
Trisha rolled her eyes in irritation
Trisha: Raghav what rubbish? Tum Bahuth movies Dekthi Ho

Irritating Trisha, but loved the situation they both are in 😉
Nice teaser Uma 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Love this teaser a lot... Raghav filmye bohot dekhta hain...bechara!!!!!!! Usse laga Trisha usse heroine ki tarah darr k wajese hug karlega...really Awsm... Waiting for next part... Update soon... Thankuu soo much for the teaser
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..


Irritating Trisha, but loved the situation they both are in😉
Nice teaser Uma👏👏



Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note

Will try to update this story by tonight
This will be last part of the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Az07

Note

Will try to update this story by tonight
This will be last part of the story



Will wait eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38


Will try to update soon Manisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Will be in wait Uma😊



I have almost finished writing
Only a bit left will post by tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Yuvraj singh's residence

Raghav and trisha had came to interrogate yuvraj singh as they came to know his involvement in shreyas's murder and they were sure about his involvement in siddhi's missing. Yuvraj was a middle aged man who looked decent and he completely denied about his involvement in shreyas's murder and siddhi's missing.
Yuvraj singh: aap logo ko mein bata chukha hoon mein uss murder ke din raipur mein nahi thi nahi uss ladki ki ghayab hona mein mera koi haath hai. Zaroor aap logo koi galath fami hui hai. Mein ek social worker hoon.
Trisha: acha agar aisa hai toh aap shreyas ko jaan se marne ki dhamki kyun dhi? Woh bhi kai baar. Office mein ghar mein. Hamara pass sabuth hai. Shreyas ki colleagues aur ghar wala ne byaan dhe thi. Aur shreyas ki call records bhi hai hamare pass. Aap ne kai baar aapki personal number se aur mobile se unhe contact ki hai.
Yuvraj: ha yeh sahi hai mein unhe contact kiya unhe galth fami hui hai mere khilaf corruption ke case file kar rahi thi.
Raghav: ( sarcastically) lagtha hai logo ko aap ke bare mein bahuth zyaada galth fami ho rahi thi. Aisa kyun?
Yuvraj: dekhiye aap mere samay barbad kar rahi hai. Muhey aaj ek bahuth important function attend karna hai. Mein ne ek mass wedding rakhi hai. Mere ghar ke pass auditorium mein. Shyaad aap log nahi janthe aaj ek auspicious din hai. Jahan shaadi sirf varmala pehney se hota hai. Mein aur mere aadmiko uske sisile mein bahuth kaam hai.
Since they don't have strong evidence they can't arrest him. Raghav and trisha came from there after giving a warning that he shouldn't leave the city still the case is solved.

Outside the residence

Raghav: yeh yuvraj zaroor chuth bol rahi hai. Unhe pata hai siddhi kahan hai.
Trisha: haan raghav. Muhey bi yahi lagtha hai. Woh ek bahuth acha khiladi hai. Khel toh bahuth safayi se khela hai. Mein cyber cell ko kehkar iss ghar mei aur shaadi hall mein kitne bhi phone locations hai unhe track karne ko boltha hoon.
Trisha called rajbir.
Trisha: rajbir tum aur bikram turandh yuraj singh ke ghar mein aajao. Aur unh par nazar rakho.
Trisha cut the call.
Trisha: aur hum uss hall mein
Raghav(smirk): waise trisha garland exchange karke shaadi karne mein tumara rai kya hai?
Trisha: raghav!
She shook her head with disappointment.

It had almost became night. Raghav and trisha who was keeping an eye on the hall and the yuvraj singh's men could see as time passed there were many people coming to hall for wedding ceremony. Since it was a mass wedding there were a lot of people and media. Cyber cell was tracking every call in that location and up to now they couldn't get any information about siddhi through these calls.
It was a windy night and they could make out that at any time it can rain. Suddenly they heard the noise of thunder. Raghav looked at trisha.
Raghav: tume thunder se dar nahi lagthi?
Trisha: nahi kyun? Kya hua
Raghav: agar tume dar lagthi tho tum dar ki wajhe se muhey hug karlathi. Tum movies mein dekha nahi hai kya?
Trisha: raghav! What rubbish? Tum movies bahuth dekthi ho.
She rolled her eyes in irritation. He smiled seeing her irritated face.

Raghav's phone rang and he attended it since it was bikram on other side. Trisha saw his chain had fallen down accidently. Trisha knew raghav always wear that chain since it was gifted by his mom. She took it and since he was busy and engrossed in phone she put it around his neck. Raghav was shocked. He cut the call and looked at her amazed. Whereas trisha was confused at his reaction.
Trisha: kya hua raghav? Tumari chain necha gira hua tha. Mein janthi hoon yeh tumare liye bahuth valuble hai. Tumari maa ne dhi na. Tum phone mein busy the aur yeh mein bhoolne se pehale tume dhe thi.
She replied innocently.
She saw him removing the chain.
Trisha: tum usse kyun utarahi ho?
Raghav: ritual complete karne ke liye. Jo tumne shuru ki thi.
Trisha looked at him trying to understand his words meaning. Raghav put the chain around her neck. That's when she realised what yuvraj singh had said in the evening about marriage through exchanging garlands. She looked at him nervously. They both were lost in each other's eyes and trisha started blushing.
They came back to reality when they heard trisha's phone ringing. She attended it as it is from cyber cell. They have forwarded a call to them from yuvraj singh. They heard him giving instructions about siddhi. Trisha asked the IT expert to send the location of the man whom yuvraj was giving instructions
Trisha immediately called rajbir and asked him to follow the route forwarded by cyber cell. Raghav and trisha too started from there.

After sometime

Raghav and trisha had reached a mental asylum following the location of men sent by yuvraj thakur. Bikram and rajbir too reached there. They secretly followed the gundoos maintaining a distance so that they don't realise cbi team following them.
They saw them going inside the asylum and they followed them. The asylum didn't have much patients and it was almost in the outskirts of city. Much to everyone's shock they saw the gundoos opening a room which was really dark and siddhi was tied up with metal chains in her legs and hands. Her mouth is also plastered. Before the gundoos could trigger bullet over siddhi's head they were encountered by the cbi team.
While encounter was happening raghav saw a man who is going to shoot trisha in her chest. He quickly reached her and pulled her by getting shot in her heart. Trisha was stunt and raghav unknowingly hugged her out of fear.

The gundoos were arrested and handed over to police. They had the recordings of yuvraj singh's phone calls which they have tapped in this evening were he was giving instructions to kill siddhi as she is the prime witness of shreyas's murder. If she gives her statement against his gundoos he will arrested. As she is a threat to him he had made her kidnapped and they were torturing her in the asylum. Since cbi got involved yuvraj got scared and instructed his men to kill her. Since the cbi team had all evidences they had arrested yuvraj singh. Siddhi was in a bad condition. She had been bet so badly and drugged by the gundoos. She was starving for more than 48 hours. She was severely dehydrated and was immediately rushed to casualty. The team had made rajbir to stay with her and her family. Trisha, raghav and bikram went after meeting her parents as they have to do other works related to the arrest.

Public guest house

It had became midnight when raghav, trisha and bikram had returned after finishing the paper works of the case. Since it became midnight they can go back to Delhi only tomorrow and they had been provided a government guest house to stay back tonight. Rajbir is still in hospital with siddhi and her family. Trisha had granted leave for him for next few days as she know he had to support siddhi who had gone through such a severe trauma.
Everyone retired to there rooms as they were extremely tired and had a stressful day. After freshening up trisha came to the balcony of the guest house and stood there. Sleep was far away from her. She touched her neck and felt raghav's chain. She remembered how he wore her that chain saying that he is completing the ritual. She knew though unknowingly they had got married. She remembered her mother's words that panditji predicting her life in danger and only her husband can save her life. She was almost going to get shot dead today but raghav have saved her. Like raghav said is astrology too a science? Being a person who believe in facts she never believed in these kind of stuffs so far. But what she had experience today made her believe that maybe its true.
She always loved raghav. And unknowingly her wish had came into reality. She was astonished to see raghav standing at her back.
Trisha: tum kab aayi?
Raghav: jab tumne meri khayal mein khoi tab?
She smiled shyly.
Trisha: mein ne toh na jane mein tume yeh haar pehana diya par tumne kyun muhey yeh pehanathi ?
Raghav: tume shaadi karne ka mauqha mein kaise haath se nikhalu? Aur mein jantha hoon tum bhi muhey pyaar karthi ho.
She blushed. He cupped her face with his hands.
Raghav: i always loved you trisha. Jab se tume mile tab se. Kabhi himmath nahi hui tumse yeh kehne ki.
Trisha smiled.
Trisha: i love you too raghav.
Raghav: toh batao apni mumma ko unhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorath nahi hai. Tumari shaadi ho chuki hai.
Trisha: unhe heart attack hojayengey.
Raghav: toh ek aur baar shaadi karlethe.
Trisha blushed. Raghav kissed on her cheeks.
The end!
Ps: i hope you guys liked the update. The garland marriage is inspired from parineeta movie. Hope you guys liked it.





Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago

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