Ek Ristha Aisa Hai! Ratri TS! Last part on pg 14 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry review bahut lamba ho gaya ... i couldn't help myself... each and every part of this update was worth mentioning... i just wished i didn't miss anything.
Loves❤️ and hugs🤗to you for an awesome story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
read it, it's awesome Uma 👏👏
Will review in a while. I sat to review but some guests at home so will review in a short while. Pls gimme some time.

Loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
So touched by the update Uma, it's lovely and fabulously beauteous 👏👏
Overwhelmed by the reactions of one and all. Trisha's reactions to relieve herself from the proposal of Sooraj and the way she diverted her Mom from the rishta. I liked her mood swung and she did not respond even in a No. This made the update more interesting till the last !
Her mom made her wear the red traditional clothes. O i wanna imagine her in them becos she looks different buy always beautiful in those attires.
Angry young man Raghav has every reason to show off his anger and frustration. I liked him jealous, tired but angry for what he saw so close meet of sooraj and trisha. He can't imagine anyone with her, and here he has seen him and is scared of losing her. Awww..
I loved her looking stunning and Raghav himself got mesmerized by her looks.
For the first time i saw Trisha teasing Raghav by asking him about Sooraj 😳 The way he reacted and the way he got furious, it's an indication how he was feeling so low to learn a proposal coming for her from that sooraj. His anger is justified 😉
Liked the way the case is solved and Hema is captured with her own mistakes done. Uma, you have done every justice to the case becos doubting sooraj was like every case coming with suspense so it came to our mind that might be sooraj is involved, just like that. Felt good that he is not involved !
The way they talked after the case, Raghav looked more serious over the fact the she is a composed lady who takes decisions by thinking and not by coming from her parents. The sooraj incident is haunting him and the time he saw them hugging he lost himself and even every hope that one day he will confess his love to her. Very subtle but very emotional part and times for Raghav. Felt so bad for him as he was not able to sleeep for the whole night.
The lost Raghav moved out of the office after being so rude to her, he is not in his senses i noted ! But the meeting of sooraj and him was fruitful. He looks like a gentleman and even already married so that there is no hindrance for RaTri to move on. I felt so relieved when Sooraj told his truth of being married and he helped him chosing the best gift for his wife. Now Raghav is relieved too 😉😉
I liked how Sooraj noticed that he was interrogating him while asking about the meet and hugs. I can see him judging out some thing between him and Trisha 😊

First time in my life i have seen such a beautiful kidnap 😆 Loved Raghav kidnapping Trsiha and even changed her in to his kurti without seeing anything 😉😳 😳 ❤️
Loved the way he came from behind and exposed himself to her. The blushes said all. The painting that he has to watch her daily, the ever thought of losing her, and now getting her for life ! Raghav's love for Trisha is so pure and blissful that Trsiha is so lucky to have him in her life. She wanted to know his reactions and he wanted to see her reactions.
Felt amused when he asked for the list of her majnoos all over the world so that he has to feel jealous 😉😆
Liked the way he kissed her cheeks and then on her lips when she said, main tumhari hoon !
The story ended but i wanted to see more of them in this story ! But what a finale to the masterpiece you have presented Uma ⭐️⭐️
Loved it and will miss the jealous and helpless Raghav who gets her in the last after such a turmoil he felt inside himself !
Nice ending, will wait for more to read from your pen Uma. Pure justice to the story and the case ! Loved it to the core !
Thanks and loves ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
A tensing situation for Trisha when she got the proposal from sooraj... But what makes me wonder is she did need to think over this proposal that she is doing for the first time...
Looking stunning in the red outfit.. she almost made everyone around crushed ... 😳
Not good to see a shattered Raghav.. but he was fuming over the scenes he was watching of Trisha n Sooraj... Anyone wud fail to understand whats cooking between them,,,

So Trisha hid the truth of his marriage n asked Raghav abt his views for Sooraj... Double blast killing him at the spot.. 😉 I just cud imagine how he must be feeling when he saw them hugging... Nothing was more kiiling than that...
The case took time but got solved from the ideal team of CBI... Liked to watch the case.. !👏
The composed Trisha makes Raghav worried as he is not aware of her feelings for him... n what he saw later made him dead for every second..
I liked the pace of the story... It goes like every incident clockwise taking a good shape and all came into its place..
The truth coming from Sooraj n Raghav getting some relief... n afterwards almost interrogating him for the meeting he had with her.. 😳 His intentions are pure... Why he hugged his Trisha... 😆
Now the kidnapping... What a twist in the tale... ! The boss is kidnapped by her agent n is at his home... n all was beautifully picturized... 😉😳
Nice to see them confessing at last.. n all things got cleared.. ! Right way to know whats going on in her mind n whats plan are his.. RaTri got their moments n the kisses proved it later..

Beautiful n very nice like an epic.. ! ⭐️👏 I loved this story the most.. ! The jealousy turning into frustrations n then truth coming to him n he punished her with a kidnapping.. i mean this was the main part that i have never came across with in any story yet... !
Hats off Uma... for this brilliance n a lovely story with an interesting case solved... !⭐️
Great... thanks,, !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a awesome story uma ma'am
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome story dear loved reading it soo much .

Thank you
so soorajs parents put forth proposal for trisha .loved how Trishas mom asked trisha about what she feels for suraj and trisha asking to give her some time.
Both of there parents felt they both are perfect for each other seeing there friendship
loved the melodrama done by Trishas mom to get her agree to wear the Indian dress love trisha think that how melodramatic her mom behaves at home and raghav at office. simply loved Trishas bond with her mother .
That's the usual scenario in many of our houses
loved to see Raghav irritated in this update .loved the RaTri scene where trisha was telling Raghav that she has received a proposal from surajs family but she had not said yes yet .liked to see the relief on Raghavs face .
She just wanted to know about his feelings for her

so finally the case is solved thanks for writing such a awesome case .loved it a lot .the ccd scene was so awesome the team prasonf RaTri loved that a lot .
The team is more like a family
again liked too see Raghavs irritation when trisha got a message from suraj and she went .really felt bad when Raghav saw Trisha hugging suraj.
Yes that was a tough part for him to see his Trisha in some else's arms
so the next day trisha tried talking to Raghav but he behaved rudely with her .felt so bad for her .
Indeed she tried but Raghav was too hurt this time
so finally Raghav got to know what's the truth that all this was a natak and suraj is married to Sofia .so trisha helped suraj .such a true friend she is .
Yes she was just helping her friend
loved to see Raghav irritation when he got to know many boys were after trisha in college.
Trisha is a women many can fall for
finally such a awesome and romantic confession. loved it a lot .Raghav kidnapped trisha and took her home and changed her clothes .trisha must be really scared when she got up .
Yes she was any girl in her position would be
simply loved the confession a lot .so finally they are together.
Thank you I want it to be unique
thanks a lot for such a awesome story. loved reading it soo much.

Thank you dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for the update dear


You are welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Such a nice update dear,

Thank you
Trisha got proposal from Sooraj family. I love how Trisha said that marriage is a decision for rest of her life so she needs some time.
There parents felt since they know each other they will be a perfect couple
And then Trisha wearing salwar. 😊
Yes she was forced to by her mom
Are Trisha tum ne soch bhi kaise liya ki Raghav will give you opinion on some other guys proposal. Raghav was yotaly irritated, frustrated and angry. I love the conversation when :
Trisha: mein ne aab tak na nahi kaha
Raghav's face fell down. Trisha noticed that.
Trisha: aur haan bhi nahi kaha.
Raghav's face lighted up a bit.
I could imagine his face and reaction..
Trisha wanted to see his reactions about her marriage proposal
Raghav got his life's biggest shock when he saw both hugging. His bad dream came true, his annoyed behavior is justified.
That was a tough part for him. To see his Trisha in some one else's arms. The introvert she is
Sooraj clear all his doubt and I love the line when Sooraj said that is Raghav interrogating him?
Raghav was indeed doing that
Raghav kidnapped Trisha and take her to his house. I love the conv.
Trisha: what? Par kyun?
Raghav: tum iss kurthi mein bahuth khoobhsurat lag rahi hai.
Trisha: yeh
Raghav: meri kurtha hai. Mein ne change Karli.
Trisha looked at him.
Raghav: nahi mein ne kuch nahi dekha. I swear. Mein ne lights switch off Karli.
Trisha blushed profusely.
Trisha was so shocked that Raghav changed her clothes then his clarification..
Wanted the confession and end to be unique

Love the whole story dear, please continue writing more such stories.
Thank you

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Awesome story dear...

Thank you
I liked the way her mother told her about the latest proposal for her from sooraj and giving her own reasons as to why this guy was perfect for her. Trisha had a real difficult time in buying some time for her...
Her parents thought they are perfect for each other in every ways.
Her mother being melodramatic was just sooo cute... this is a common scene in families where girls are in professional jobs and the mothers want their daughters to be properly dressed up with jewellery and make up... i have myself faced such situations with my mother...👏
Same here me too. I think it's a common situation
I liked how Raghav came early on time and thinking about the proximity between these two...
Everyone surprised to see her dressed up so casually today... they must have been so shocked... she looked so different today...
Indeed he is. He has rarely seen her dressed up. So he has to be mesmerised by seeing her.
Raghav pondering over the fact whether he was being overtly obvious that he didn't like to hear about so many proposals for her.. nice ...i loved it...
Though he mask with teasing he is worried whenever he hear about proposals for her and since he loves it's obvious that he don't like that
The way they solved the case was awesome... the culprit was just unexpected👏👏
Thanks

((I suspected the involvement of sooraj because i was very sure that sooraj will be involved with some other girl(my gut feeling). Knowing that koyal was being forced for this marriage, i suspected that sooraj and koyal were together and that might be the reason for groom's murder. Sooraj being close to Trisha could easily come to know about their moves and escape from being grabbed... this was all my pov.))
That was a good twist. I didn't think that way. Anyways koyal is a genuine girl may be she is too good
The ccd get together was nice... the way Trisha was against a girl marrying just as a return for a business deal...and then Raghav praising her for knowing what she wanted... all claps to you for this👏👏👏
I like the team bonding and Raghav pointed out a fact which makes Trisha different from other girls
Raghav following her and getting frustrated at seeing them hug each other... expected from him as he loved her so much...
That was big shock to him. Knowing Trisha's nature can't blame him if he MU
Raghav behaving rudely with her out of frustration and then his leaving the office... just shows how possesive he is for her...so romantic...
That shows how much he loves her
Sooraj meeting Raghav and asking him to help him out with a gift... i had butterflies run through my stomach... i got scared for a moment...
Then the truth about their relation and the way she helped him out in getting sophia accepted in sooraj's family... she is a real helper to everyone... so mature...loved it so much...
Trisha is matured and practical. At the same time she values relationships a lot. She don't want the relationship of there families to be broken
Trisha being worried about the friendship and relations between the two families... she is a very responsible daughter and cares for her family...
Indeed she is
The punishment he gave to her was just lovely... full of romance... very well written by you...
Wanted it to be unique
Raghav making her painting and the final confession...👏👏👏
Trisha telling him that she just belonged to him... so romantic...
All in all a lovely story... there were so many lovely moments in this story... hope i haven't missed anyone in my review. Please keep writing such wonderful stories...👏🤗
No dear you haven't thanks for such a lovely review

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Sorry review bahut lamba ho gaya ... i couldn't help myself... each and every part of this update was worth mentioning... i just wished i didn't miss anything.

Loves❤️ and hugs🤗to you for an awesome story.


Thanks it means a lot

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