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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Such a nice story Uma

Thank you
Love the starting, so Sooraj and Trisha know eaxh other from college time. Sooraj brought candy for her.
Raghav was so irritated when he heard about sooraj bringing favorite candy for her because only someone who you care only their choices you remember like Raghav for Trisha.
Yes that fact made him insecure and jealous
Than coming to the case, such a nice mystery. I love how Raghav and Trisha interrogate every suspect.
Glad you liked it I was nervous writing the case part
Specially Trisha getting irritated that how koyal was forced by his parents for marriage. Raghav was happy seeing heras he get assured that she will never maarry in her parents pressure.
Yes that purpose too is there in this case.
No clue who can be the killer and that's what make a mystery more suspenseful and interesting.
Glad I could glued you guys
I love the line when Raghav said that kisi Sooraj ki wajah se uska dimaag kharrab ho gaya hai) 😆
That shows his irritation
Though Trisha knew Sooraj but she is strict in her rules so she shouted but Sooraj took her with him.
Yes she is a disciplined person. So she has to get angry
All anger and frustration was visible on Raghav's face. He bang the table and move out.
He was so jealous
I am sure that Raghav and Bikram were confused as they don't know why Raghav is getting angry? (ab unhe kya pata in Dono ke beech kya pak raha hai) 😉
Yes they are so confused
Waiting for next update. Please update soon
Yes sure will update tonight

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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Waooo awsm story really.. Jealous Raghav..!!! So Trisha loves Candies.

Yes he is so jealous
Waoo...looks like the case s very complicated...bohot log hain shaq k dairey main...
Yes case is indeed complicated
love the dialogue "Aaj dimag kam nehi kar raha hai...lagta hain kisi Sooraj k wajese heat stroke hua hain" 😆
That shows his irritation and frustration
Sooraj Trisha ko jabardasti le gaya wo bhi infront of Raghav... Raghav ko to gussa ayegahi... Waiting fr next part... Nd ThanThankuu sooo much for the beautiful Update 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: babita..

Awesome start to the story Uma 👏👏

Thank you
Liked to see Trisha so well versed in kitchen and even made carrot halwa in such short time. The intro of Sooraj came as a surprise and i could imagine him giving her the candies.
Trisha is a perfectionist in every field
Liked her leaving for the office, as she is so particular about her noble job.
She is a disciplined person
So, Raghav got irritated, angry and raged over what Trisha was praising about Sooraj 😳 I liked his jealousy, his inner feelings came out which are unknown to him until now. !
Yes he can never bare her praising about some other man.
Liked the interrogations. No part left by the team, yet they all are so clueless about the culprit.
Liked Raghav's light comments in between the interrogations and lightening the mood of every one so tensed due to the case !
Case is indeed complicated hope I could do justice. Raghav knows to lighten the atmosphere by his comments
I loved Raghav's mention of sooraj and hotness taunting Trisha over her new friend 😉 His jealous mood is much much loved !😉
He is obviously being jealous and he has to be
Sooraj came and dragged Trisha, that was too much for Raghav and he left. The closeness of Sooraj and Trisha has come out as a shock to the team.
There is a reason for his behaviour you have to wait and c next part. Raghav has to feel angry by his behaviour
Strange feeling for Rajbir and Bikram of what's happening. Raghav's fist on the table and Trisha leaving with Sooraj. Many speculations and many words untold and never expressed.
When it comes to Trisha his brain stops working it has to be like that after all he loves her.
Raghav is shocked with some one's closeness with Trisha. And Trisha, i would now like to see how she talks to Sooraj and then if necessary will explain things to raghav. But it's too early in their relationship, which is of a boss and agent and like friends only.
Everything will be cleared in next part
Will wait for the other moves, and the interrogation taking new turns. Hope Sooraj can help them in the case. Or might be he himself is involved.
Am i thinking too much today ?? 😆
You have to wait and watch I can say only that now
Hugs Uma ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Good start Uma,,, ⭐️👏

Liked the intro to the guests n the way Sooraj is know to Trisha ! ... Liked how they met n the candies gifted... He knows her well n her taste as well... Long time fridnship... wont be liked by Raghav i guess.. 😳
Thank you glad you liked. Yes he has to be jealous

He is impressed by her brave role of an agent... Just that he is not from the same field... so has to be away from her office.. ! Carrot halwa... wow... Nice to see a cook in Trisha.. !
Yes she is someone who is really admirable and she can cook well.
Raghav is uncomfortable n seems breathless as Trisha distributed the candies of sooraj n was all praising him in the office.. !
He has to be after all he loves her.
From the moment she came she was speaking about sooraj. He can't believe that someone became so important to her in a short span of time. He threw his mobile out of anger.
Everyone looked at him.
Raghav murmured: sorry galthi se girgayi haath se. Boss aap continue ki jiye aap ki sooraj ke bare mein.
Trisha rolled her eyes in irritation.

The jealousy made him reacted like that... n i feel every one knows of the feelings of Raghav towards Trisha n now towards Sooraj as well... 😳
Yes when you are in love you tend to behave like this way.

The case is complicated . ,,, the girl was getting married as her Dad wanted him to... n the boy was a spoilt brat n had nothing much to do in his life other than doing all spoil boys do...
In all this the clues became zero n Raghav was found more irritated..
Yes a complicated case with a usual scenario we see around in our society
Raghav murmured: aur mera dimaang aaj kaam nahi kar rahi hai. Lagtha hai kisi sooraj ki wajah se heat stroke hui.

Hahaha,,, ,his feelings came out full of jealousy n possessiveness... 😉
Yes he is so possessive about Trisha

And then...

Everyone was shocked to see the closeness trisha and sooraj shares. Raghav felt extremely angry by seeing sooraj so close to trisha. He unknowingly stumped his fist on table.
Rajbir and bikram was surprised seeing this. They could make out that raghav was extremely angry. Before they could ask anything he left the cabin without talking to anyone. Bikram and rajbir looked each other trying to understand what's going on around them.


Even i felt shocked over Sooraj's bahaviour... He shudnt have taken Trisha from him... He rightly stumped his fists n was full of anger... I wish rescue to his heart as he sees nothing more then this again...
There is a reason behind all this. You have to wait till next part.
But... The Buts n ifs are more killing... n so will be for Raghav..
Will wait for the next...
Everything will be cleared in next part.
Uma... great start ... n I mean it dear... ⭐️👏

Thank you glad you liked it
Sorry for being late... Hope i wud be able to come on time for other parts...
Thanks !
No problem take your time

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Posted: 9 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Oh... after so many yrs he felt like an orphan again... getting fainted anytime... frustrated... Why Trisha wud do that... ??/
Yes she has a reason for it
Teaser again makes the relation of RaTri a still.. !
What he saw made me totally disturbed as well...
Soon all misunderstandings will be cleared.

Hope we get some clues of why sooraj is so close to her... Or he is among the one related to the murder... ??//
Everything will be cleared in next part.
Will see to it.. Thanks.. ! 😊
You are welcome dear

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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
last part


Trisha's residence

Trisha was extremely tiered when she came back to home, after all they had a very hectic day. She went to her room directly to take some rest. Trisha's mother went to her room to talk to her.
Trisha's mother: trisha tumare liye ek nayi proposal aaya hai.
Trisha: mumma aap phir se? muhey kiss se bhi nahi milna.
Trisha's mother: pehle sun toh lo. Sooraj ka proposal hai.
Trisha: what sooraj?
Trisha's mother: ha jab pata chala tum log pehele se ek doosarey ko janthe the woh log ek proposal rakha hamare samne. Hume bhi laga yeh acha proposal hai. Tum dono ek doosare se bahuth pehle se janthe the. Aur sooraj delhi main hai aur tumari naukari bhi nahi chodna padega. Tume kya lagtha hai?
Trisha: mumma iss tarah achanak?
Trisha's mother: tumari problem kya hai? Aaj tak tum bol rahi thi jisse nahi jantha ussse shaadi kaise Kare? Ab yeh toh sooraj ka proposal hai. Tum dono ek dooserey se ache se janthe ho. Tum apni zindagi mein successful ho aur tumari umar bhi shaadi ke liye perfect hai. Kai aisa toh nahi ki tumare dil mein koi hai?
Trisha was stunt.
Trisha: maa aap kaisi baath kar rahi hai? Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.
Trisha's mother: agar aisa hai toh sooraj ke proposal hum agae bade?
Trisha: mumma yeh shaadi ki baath hai. Zindagi bar ka faisala hai. Mein yeh soch samjh kar karna chatha hoon. Kal aisa nahi lagna chahiye ki mein ek galth faisala le li. Muhey kuch waqath chahiye mumma. Please try and understand.
Trisha's mother understood her emotions. She was revealed that at least trisha didn't say a direct cut no like usual proposals. She decided to give her some time.
Trisha's mother: ok fine. Take your own time. I really hope that you come into a correct conclusion this time.
Trisha's mother left from room. Trisha sighed in relief. She understood that for time being she is saved.
Next day morning - trisha's residence
Like usual trisha was getting ready in her formal wear after finishing household works. Trisha's mother came into her room.
Trisha's mother: trisha yeh tum kya pehnkar jaa rahi ho?
Trisha: mumma mein roz aisi formal wears pehn kar jaatha hoon. Aaj aapko kyaa hua?
Trisha's mother: exactly. Har rozz aisi kapde pehnkar jaatha hoon. Aaj ki baath alag hai. Sooraj tume milna aajaongi. Aur unhe acha nahi lagega. Toh tum aaj meri choice ki kapde pehnke jao.
Trisha (angrily): maa mein office jaa rahi hoon. Kissi function attend karne ke liye nahi. Aur yeh kya sooraj ka proposal aaya hai iska matlab yeh nahi ki mein hamesha sajsawarke bahar jao. Muhhey yeh sab bilkul nahi pasandh hai.
Trisha's mother: jantha hoon tume yeh sab pasandh nahi hai. Par mein kitni pyaar se tumare liye yeh kapde chunli. Socha pehli baar meri beti kisi risthey ko reject nahi ki maa hoon mein teri muhey bhi khwaish hai apni beti ko apni pasandh ka kapde pehnthe huae dekhna ka. Par muhey samjna chahiye thha. Meri beti badi hogayi. Aab iss budi ma aka choice kahan unhe acha lagega?
Trisha: oh come on mumma! Itna melodramatic hona bandh karo. Ok fine! Mein sirf aaj hi aapki choice ki kapde pehke jaa rahi hoon. Har rozz aap iss tarah muhey emotional blackmail nahi karegi.
Trisha's mother was happy. She handed over the salwar suit she got for trisha.
Trisha rolled her eyes in irritation and murmured: ghar mein mumma aur office mein raghav meri zindagi mein hamesha iss tarah melodramatic log kyun aajatha hai?

Cbi office
Raghav had come to office early today. He had not slept properly last night. He was so angry to see sooraj and trisha in one frame. The way sooraj dragged trisha had made him extremely angry. The closeness between trisha and sooraj made him scared. He knew trisha's nature. She is an introvert. She easily won't mingle with people. Sooraj was really close to her in her college days. That made raghav irritated. He somehow didn't like the fact that a guy being close to trisha. Even as a friend. He started feeling scared. Scared of losing his trisha. She is the only one who is close to his heart after his parents. He didn't want to lose her. After sometime he thought that maybe he was over reacting. Maybe sooraj is only a good friend to her.
After sometime rajbir and bikram too came. They were surprised to see raghav so early in office. Rajbir and bikram thought to speak about his behaviour last day. They went and sat near him. That's when the main door opened and trisha entered. The trio was astonished to see trisha in a beautiful red colour sleeveless mermaid cut salwar suit. She had worn a small stone bindhi and small silver jhumki along with it. She looked absolutely stunning. Raghav was mesmerised to see her like this. She wished everyone and started to move to his cabin.
Raghav: kya baath hai trisha aaj iss tarah sajsawarkar? kai tum kisi ladke se milne toh nahi jaarahi ho?
Trisha was embarrassed and she was feeling shy too. But she managed to hide it. Rajbir and bikram was finding hard to supress there smile.
Trisha: raghav kuch samay se mein notice kar rahi hoon tum hamesha meri shaadi ke bare mein worried ho? Aisa kyun hai?
Raghav was stunt. Though he always tease her regarding marriage proposals he really gets worried when he hear that someone is coming to meet her. Was he being that obvious even when he mask with his teasings? Or does trisha knows him too well?
Raghav: nahi aisa kuch bhi toh nahi.
Trisha: good! Ab tum meri get up ki bare mein chodo aur cabin mein aaj jao. Cyber cell ka records aagaya. Aur hume ek aur baar rohan ki sagaai ki photo age dekhna hoga. Aur bikram aur rajbir tum logko diya hua kaam ka kyaa hogaya?
Rajbir: hum adhe gandhe mein tume report duhngi.
Trisha: good! Let's get back to work.

Triisha's cabin
Trisha was going through the call records of everyone who attended rohan's engagement which she had asked from cyber cell and raghav was going through the video of the engagement once again.
Trisha: raghav kal tum sooraj se mila na tumhe sooraj kaisi lagi?
Raghav lost his control. Once again sooraj. But he composed himself.
Raghav: ek baar dekha tha miley kahan they? voh tho tume le kar gayi thi na?
Trisha: phir bhi tum to kisi ko dekh kar uska poora history bataoongi na. After all tum toh raghav Sinha the psychiatrist hoon na?
Raghav: baath kya hai trisha?
Trisha: sooraj ka proposal aaya hai muhey. Aur ghar mein sab log bahuth interested hai. Sooraj ke parents ko hum sab ache se jaantha hoon. Aur sooraj toh meri senior bhi the college mein. Tumari rai kya hai?
Trisha was eagerly waiting for his response. Unknowingly her heart started beating so fast. Whereas raghav was shocked. His worst fear had come into reality.
Raghav: mein kya batao trisha? Tumari zindagi hai tume faisala karna hoga. Waise tume kya lagtha hai?
Trisha: mein ne aab tak na nahi kaha
Raghav's face fell down. Trisha noticed that.
Trisha: aur haan bhi nahi kaha.
Raghav's face lighted up a bit. Trisha smiled and continued with her work.
After sometime
Trisha: raghav muhey ek interesting fact mili hai iss call records mein.
Raghav: muey bhi. Iss video ko dekho.

Sharma mansion
Cbi team had called everyone who attended the engagement function of koyal and Rohan.
Trisha: aap sab ko iss tara achanak yahan bulaya. I know bahuth takleef hui hogi. But ab waqath aagaya hai rohan ki khathil ko arrest karane ka.
Rakesh Mehra: kaun hai woh? Jisne mere bhai ko mardhala?
Raghav: patience mr.mehra.
Trisha: yeh case humare liye bahuth complicated tha. Itne sare log bahuth zyaada suspects. Itni jaldi yeh case solve karpayega humne kal socha tak nahi tha. Aap sab ne hamare saath bahuth cooperate ki thi. Iss ke liye hum aap sab ko humari dilse shukriiya ada kartha hai. Toh bataye kya aap mein se koi mr. yash dhanraj ko jantha hai?
Rakesh sharma: yash toh hema ki chechera bhai hai.
Trisha: exactly. Kya yash iss sagai mein shamil hui thi?
Hema: no use college hai na. issliye woh nayi aapayi.
Trisha: aap chuth bol rahi hema ji. Yeh aapki call records hai. Jis din rohan aur koyal ki sagai hone wale tha uss din aap bahuth baar yash ko call kiya. Jo tumne pichli 3 mahiney bhi itni baar nahi kiya. Hamre paas aap ki call records hai. Aur yash ki bhi. According to that saagi ke waqath yash ki phone ke location sharma mansion hai.
Raghav: aur ghaur karne waali baath yeh hai humne saagai mein shamil hui har ek insaan ko interrogate kiya. Including servants and waiters. But uss mein yash nahi tha. Aap sab yeh video dekho. Yeh saagai ka footage hai. Aur yeh dekhiye yeh rohan ki khathil hone se teekh pehela ka footage hai. Aur rohan ke ass paas yeh insaan ko dekho. Humse koi bhi iss insaan ko nahi jantha. Kyun ki yeh koi aur nahi hai balki aapki bhai yash hai. Disguise mein.
Trisha: yash toh medical student hai usko andhere mein kisi ke gale khatna itna difficult kaam nahi hai. Aap ne khel toh acha khela. Jab kisine aapke call records check kare toh aapko yeh bata kar stand karsaktha hai ki saagai ki kaam se apne bhai ko call kiya. Koi aapko shaaq tak nahi karega. After all aap the koyal ko rohan ke liye pasandh ki. Par aapki badh kismathi se yash video mein aayi. Yash ab cbi custody mein hai. Acha yeh hoga ab aap humse sach bolkar cooperate kiya toh warna aapke saasa aur bhi badi hogi hema ji.
Hema: haan mein use marwaya. Mere paas aur koi rastha nahi tha. Mein ne apni taraf se apne bigade huae devar ko sudharne ka poori koshish ki. Uss keliye koyal ko dhoonda aur uski papa ko itni badi contract dilwakar shaadi ke liye haan karwadi. Par woh toh kahan sudherga? Rohan ko bus apni doston ke saath ayashi karna tha. Jab humne uski bank account block ki tab woh koyal se shaadi karne ko tayar hui. Par phir bhi wo apni Ghandi zindagi ko chodne tayar nahi the. Apni sagai ki pichle din brothel gayi thi. Aur upar se uska arrest. Yeh baat sharma ji ko pata chala. Aur who shaadi cancel karna ka faisala le li. Par mere pathi ne mehra group ke 50% share sagai ke baath koyal ke naam karne ka faisala liya aur sharma ji ko iss sagai keliye haan karwadi. Aur yeh mein kaise pardhash kar sakthi hoon? Kyunki yeh saab joh hai meri bhi kaamayi hai. Mere papa ne hamari shaadi ke waqath iss mehra group of hotels ke liye paise de dhi. Mein aur rakesh bahuth hard work karke aaj iss sab ko banaya. Rohan toh sirf humare paiso se aiyashi kar rahi thi. Mere pathi manne ko tayar nahi the. Unhe toh apni bhai se andha pyaar hai. Kuch bhi karke rohan ko sudharna chathe the. Apni dhaulath ko de kar bhi. Par mein aisa kaise kar saktha hoon? Rohan ko kabhi bhi sudhar nahi hongi. Issliye mein ne faisla kar liya rohan aur koyal ki sagai nahi hogi. Aur woh toh bus ek hi halath mein hogi rohan mare toh tab. Mein ne yash ko contact kiya. Yash ko paiso ki zarrorath thi. Apni padayi ke liye aur apni behan ki shaadhi ke liye. Woh ek hunar baas student the. Usko andhere mein kisi ke gale kath kar ke marwana itni badi baath nahi thhi. Kisko shaaq nahi hone ke liye who disguise mein aaya. Aur mein ne pehle se security ko paisa de kar apni tarah rakhi fuse ko unplug karne ko aur generator ko bandh karne ko bhi.
Raghav: plan toh bahuth acha tha. Par bath kismathi se trisha ne aap sab ki call records pichli ek hafte mangwai aur jab unho ne sagai ke din aapki aur yash ki itni sare calls dekh kar pichli teen mahina ka call records magwai aur check Karli aap dono kabhi bhi iss tarah baath nahi ki jitna rohan ke khathil ke din mein ki thi. Bikram ne yash ka background check kiya. Aur woh ek medical student nikli. Humari forensic expert pehle hume bataya yeh kaam sirf ek trained insaan hi karsaktha hai. Aur mein ne video mein yash ko notice kiya kyunki humne sabko interrogate Karli par iss insaan ko nahi the. Naturally humne iss yash ko pakdi.
Trisha: mrs. Hema mehra hum aapko rohan mehra ki khathil ke jhurum mein arrest kar rahi hai.
[[[[I don't know why many suspected sooraj's involvement in this case. He had nothing to do with this case. This case was brought mainly for two reasons. First one to show trisha's irritation about koyal's marriage with rohan. That made raghav cleared that she is not going to marry someone whom she doesn't love under the pressure of her family. And second one I wanted to include crime aspect as the show is a crime thriller. Hope I did justice.]]]]

Caf coffee day
The entire team had come to caf. After all they had a very hectic case. They were just relaxing spending time together.
Rajbir: trisha aur raghav aap dono ne iss baar kamal Karli. Kal hume lag rahi thi iss case ko nahi solve kiya ja saktha.
Bikram: mein ne hema ko suspect takh nahi ki.
Raghav: hema toh khel achi kheli. Bar kismet uski saath nahi thi.
Rajbir: agar prateek sharma ne rakesh ki offer thukrayi toh iss naubath nahi aathi. Kaisi insaan hai daulath ke liye apni beti ki zindagi karabh karne jaa rahi thi.
Trisha: aur galthi sirf sharma ki nahi balki koyal ki bhi hai. Itni padlikhi ladki hone ke bawajhoodh bus apni papa ka business dealings ke liye shaadi ke liye haan kiya. Woh bhi uss ladke ko bina janthe huae.
Raghav: har ladki tumari tarah composed nahi hai trisha. Jise patha hai unki zindagi mein kya chahiye.
Trisha looked at him amazed
Trisha: tumare mooh se tareef? tume suit nahi karthi!
Raghav smiled. Trisha too. raghav was about to replay something but her phone beeped. Seeing its sooraj's message she opened it. She excused herself and asked the guys to carry on as she had to go somewhere urgently. Raghav saw it was sooraj's message and he understood she was going to meet sooraj. He unknowingly became angry. He excused himself and went out.
Raghav doesn't know why he was behaving like a teenager. Seeing trisha going to meet sooraj in between he felt like he has to follow her. It's not that he don't trust her but still he wanted to know the reason for her closeness towards sooraj. He spotted trisha's red colour dress under the tree near the parking area. He moved towards them. What he saw next was totally unexpected. Trisha and sooraj hugging each other. They looked so happy in each other's arms. Raghav felt like he will faint at any moment. Trisha is not usually a girl who hugs a man even if he is her best friend. The introvert she is' she is not comfortable with all this. He understood sooraj is really special to her and she had accepted his proposal. Raghav closed his eyes in frustration. After many years he felt like he became an orphan once again. He left from there.

Next day
Raghav had hardly slept in the night. The image of trisha in sooraj's arms was haunting him. He just couldn't forget it. So he came to office early. He tried to relax his mind by playing his favourite rubic cube. But for the first time in his life he was losing interest and loosing it each time when he was playing. He himself didn't knew when trisha had came to office. He was startled when he felt a hand on his shoulders. He turned and saw a worried trisha.
Trisha: kya hua raghav? Tum itni disturbed kyun ho?
Raghav didn't replay. Trisha was stunt.
Trisha: muhey tumse kuch zaroori baath karni thi. Par yahan nahi kai bahar chalthe hai? Tumara mood bhi theekh ho jayega.
She smiled.
Raghav: no boss aaj nahi acha yeh hoga aap muhey apni halath mein chode toh.
Raghav got up and left from there. Trisha was stunt. She had never seen him like this. He never behaved this rudely with her. what had happened to raghav? She tried calling him but his phone was continuously switched off.
Evening
Raghav had walked aimlessly after coming out from cbi office. He felt like lost after what he had seen between sooraj and trisha. He entered a shop to buy some comic books. Just to divert his mind. While he was selecting comic books he accidentally hit someone's shoulders. He instantly apologised and looked up only to get shocked as it was none other than sooraj. From whom he was trying to run away he had accidentally hit that same person.
Sooraj: aap cbi mein kaam karthi hoon na? trisha ke saath? I guess I have seen you in her office last day. Sorry I couldn't introduce myself that day. I am sooraj Malhotra.
Raghav doesn't have any other option. It will look rude if he didn't shook hands with sooraj.
Raghav: agent raghav Sinha
Sooraj: I have came here to select a gift for someone special in my life. But after coming here I guess I am lost. Can you help me please?
Raghav sighed when he heard someone special. He had came here to gift trisha. What an irony? He had to help sooraj in selecting a gift for his trisha?
Sooraj: aapni biwi ke liye pehli gift le ke jaa rahi hoon. So thodha nervous toh hoga. I guess you can understand.
Biwi? Did he just say his wife? How is that even possible? He had sent a proposal to trisha and how can he marry her this soon?
Raghav: agar mein galath nahi ho toh aap ne sirf ristha bheja hai shaadi ka trisha ke liye. So woh aapki biwi kaise bani?
Sooraj: trisha? Oh aap iss proposal ke bare mein janthi hoon. Mein trisha ki nahi apni patni Sophia ke bare mein baath kar rahi hoon.
Raghav looked at him confused. Sooraj could understand his emotions.
Sooraj: dekhiye mein aap ki confusion samjh sakthi hoon. It's a long story. Mein aapko kahi bait kar yeh sab kuch clear karthi hoon. Par pehele aapko meri madad karni hogi. Gift select karne ke liye.
Raghav was dying due to curiosity. But still he helped sooraj by giving his opinion. After selecting gift for sooraj's wife they went to a near by caf and sat there.
Sooraj: aap janthi hoon Na mein Trisha ki senior the college mein aur hum arts club mein bhi saath the. Sach Kahe toh bahuth bada crush tha muhey uss waqath Trisha keliye apne dil mein. Sirf main nahi bahuth Ladke Marthe the Trisha keliye. Par kisiko himmat nahi thi usse yeh bolna ka.
Raghav became uncomfortable hearing that many men were after trisha.
Sooraj: agar aaj bhi saath tha aur meri zindagi mein Sophia nahi the toh shayad mein trisha ko apni zindagi mein shamil kar lethi. Sophia meri colleague hai hum Mumbai mein hum saath kaam kartha hai. Aur pyaar bhi hogaya. Par mein Sophia ke bare mein apni ghar mein nahi patayi kyunki mein janthi thi meri ghar wale kabhi bhi ek Christian ladki ko accept nahi karegi. Mere parents ne pichle kuch saal se mere liye shaadi ke liye risthey dhoondh rahi thi aur mein kuch excuse kehkar hamesha bhaag jathi. Aur badh kismati se meri transfer hoogayi Delhi ke liye. Jab mein yahan aayi muhey pata chala mere parents aur trisha ke parents ab business partners hai. Aur mein unke saath trisha ko milne gayi. Par mein ne kabhi nahi socha hamari dosthi ko dekh kar meri parents proposal le ke jaongi trisha ke ghar. Jab muhey yeh baath pata chala mein turandh aayi trisha ko milne. Aap ko yaad hoga na parso shyaam mein aayi thi cbi office mein.
...Flashback...
Sooraj had dragged trisha out of the office and made her sit inside the car.
Trisha: what the hell sooraj? Yeh koi tarika hai kissi office mein aana ka? Hum ek bahuth important case ke discussion mein thi. Iss tarah achanak muhey wahan se le aana ka kya naubath aayi?
Sooraj: hamari dosthi ko dekh kar mere parents ne meri proposal le aayi thi tumare liye tumari ghar.
Trisha: what? Tum fikhar math karo mein apni parents se baat karthi hoon aur unhe samjthi hoon hum sirf dosth hai.
Sooraj: nahi tum ab mana math karo.
Trisha: matlab tum muhjse shaadi karne chathi ho?
Sooraj: nahi trisha aisa nahi hai. Sach kya hai ki meri zindagi mein koi hai. Sophia meri colleague.
Trisha: yeh toh bahuth achi baath hai. Tum Sophia ke bare mein apni parents ko kyun nahi batathi?
Sooraj: tum meri parents ko nahi janthe. Agar voh log ko yeh pata chala mein ek christain ladki ko pyaar karthi hoon woh hum dono ko zindaa jalalengi. Iss liye hum ne Mumbai mein hi register marriage kar li.
Trisha: what? Tum iss tarah chup chup ke shaadi Karli?
Sooraj: aur kya kartha trisha? Mein Sophia ko nahi chodh saktha. Aur mere ghar wale unhe accept nahi karegi. Ek problem hai. Hamari marriage register hone mein ek hafte lagega. Uske baad hamari shaadi legal ho jayega. Tume muhey madad karna hoga.
Trisha: kaise?
Sooraj: bas jab tumari parents iss proposal ke bare mein kahegi tum bas itna kehna tume sochne ke liye waqath chahiye. Tab tak meri shaadi register hogi. Aur uske baad mein sara sach sabko bata dhoongi. Agar tum na kahogi voh log kis aur ke proposal le aathi hoon. Mein tumari tarah kisi aur ko nahi trust karsaktha.
Trisha: sooraj iss tarah chooth bholna muhey nahi lagtha it's a good idea. Hamari families ke beech dosthi bhi thooth jayegi. I think hume sach bata dhena chahiye. Ho saktha hai voh Sophia ko accept kare
Sooraj: trisha mein apni family ko achi tarah janthi hoon. Please trisha I request. Ek baar meri shaadi legal ho gayi tho tab mein sari sach sabko batadhoongi.
...flashback ended!...
Raghav sighed. So that was the matter. Trisha was just helping her friend. Then why did she mention about her proposal to him? Was she trying to read his mind? Trying to see his feelings for her?
Raghav: agar aisa ho toh kal aap trisha ko caf ke bahar milne kyun aayi?
Sooraj: voh meri shaadi legally register hogayi. Mein yeh patane aayi thi trisha ko. Aur humne discuss Karli hamari parents ko sach kehna ka.
Raghav: aur aapne trisha ko hug kyun kiya?
Sooraj looked at him.
Sooraj: aap muhey interrogate kar rahi ho? Mein bahuth khush thi. Aur apni shukhriya kar rahi thi apni dosth ko. After all trisha ne muhey madadh Karli. Ek friendly hug toh banthi hai.
Raghav sighed in relief.
Raghav: aur aapki family aur trisha ki family ne kaise react Karli? Aapki shaadi ke bare mein sunkar?
Sooraj: unhe bahuth bada shock laga. Muhey almost ghar se bahar nikli. Par trisha ne toh kamal Karli unho ne meri family ko convince kiya. And guess what voh log hamari shaadi accept Karli. Sophia aarahi hai aaj Mumbai se. hamari family ne bahuth jaldh ek reception host kar legi. Aapko zaroor aana hoga trisha ke saath.
Raghav: ya sure.
Raghav congratulated sooraj for his marriage. He had so much agony in his mind against him. Everything went after hearing truth. Trisha was only helping a friend.
Cbi office - night
Trisha was extremely upset. One side raghav had behaved unusally rude with her and on other side her parents are upset with her for giving them hope even after knowing about sooraj's truth. They are not talking to her. She wrapped up her work and went towards her car. Suddenly she felt a hand around her nose. She could smell chloroform and before she could realise she fainted.

After sometime
Trisha opened her eyes. She was shocked to see herself lying in a bed in an unknown bedroom. She saw her dress lying neatly on the hanger. She saw she was wearing a black colour kurthi which looked like a man's. she was shocked and unknowingly she started panicking. She composed herself. She got up from the bed. She saw her painting in the wall. She was astonished to see it. She walked towards the door. It was not locked. She opened it. She walked towards the hall. She felt a pair of strong arms around her waist. She was startled. She turned around and was relived to see it was raghav.
Trisha: tumne toh muhey dhara diya. Yeh kahan hai? Aur kya ho rahai?
Raghav: yeh mera ghar hai. Aur mein ne tume kidnap Karli.
Trisha: what? Par kyun?
Raghav: tum iss kurthi mein bahuth khoobhsurat lag rahi hai.
Trisha: yeh
Raghav: meri kurtha hai. Mein ne change Karli.
Trisha looked at him.
Raghav: nahi mein ne kuch nahi dekha. I swear. Mein ne lights switch off Karli.
Trisha blushed profusely.
Trisha: tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho?
Raghav: tume saaza de rahi ho. Tum aur tumari voh dosth sooraj ne muhey bahuth jealous feel karwayi.
Trisha smiled.
Raghav: mein aaj sooraj ko dekha hai. Unho ne muhey saari sachayi patayi.
Trisha: aur voh meri painiting tumari kamre mein?
Raghav: mein ne kiya hai. Har roz tume dekhne ke liye
Trisha: kyun?
Raghav: kyunki mein tume pyaar karthi hoon trisha. I love you.
Trisha was stunt. She had tears of happiness.
Raghav: waise trisha sab kuch janthe huae bhi tumne sooraj ki proposal ke bare muhsey rai kyun poochi?
Trisha: bas dekhna chathi thi tum kaise react karun
Raghav: kyun?
Trisha: because I love you raghav.
Raghav kissed on her cheeks.
Raghav: tume muhey list dena hoga. Iss tarah kitni male doston hai tumara. Muhey ek aur bar jealous feel nahi hona.
Trisha: aur tume jealous feel karne ki zarooth nahi hai. Mein sirf tumari hoon.
He kissed on her lips.
The end!

ps; hope I did justice to the story. sorry for all the mistakes committed.
Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome story dear loved reading it soo much .so soorajs parents put forth proposal for trisha .loved how Trishas mom asked trisha about what she feels for suraj and trisha asking to give her some time. loved the melodrama done by Trishas mom to get her agree to wear the Indian dress love trisha think that how melodramatic her mom behaves at home and raghav at office. simply loved Trishas bond with her mother .loved to see Raghav irritated in this update .loved the RaTri scene where trisha was telling Raghav that she has received a proposal from surajs family but she had not said yes yet .liked to see the relief on Raghavs face .so finally the case is solved thanks for writing such a awesome case .loved it a lot .the ccd scene was so awesome the team prasonf RaTri loved that a lot .again liked too see Raghavs irritation when trisha got a message from suraj and she went .really felt bad when Raghav saw Trisha hugging suraj. so the next day trisha tried talking to Raghav but he behaved rudely with her .felt so bad for her .so finally Raghav got to know what's the truth that all this was a natak and suraj is married to Sofia .so trisha helped suraj .such a true friend she is .loved to see Raghav irritation when he got to know many boys were after trisha in college. finally such a awesome and romantic confession. loved it a lot .Raghav kidnapped trisha and took her home and changed her clothes .trisha must be really scared when she got up .simply loved the confession a lot .so finally they are together. thanks a lot for such a awesome story. loved reading it soo much.
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thanks for the update dear
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Such a nice update dear,
Trisha got proposal from Sooraj family. I love how Trisha said that marriage is a decision for rest of her life so she needs some time. And then Trisha wearing salwar. 😊
Are Trisha tum ne soch bhi kaise liya ki Raghav will give you opinion on some other guys proposal. Raghav was yotaly irritated, frustrated and angry. I love the conversation when :
Trisha: mein ne aab tak na nahi kaha
Raghav's face fell down. Trisha noticed that.
Trisha: aur haan bhi nahi kaha.
Raghav's face lighted up a bit.
I could imagine his face and reaction..
Raghav got his life's biggest shock when he saw both hugging. His bad dream came true, his annoyed behavior is justified.
Sooraj clear all his doubt and I love the line when Sooraj said that is Raghav interrogating him?
Raghav kidnapped Trisha and take her to his house. I love the conv.
Trisha: what? Par kyun?
Raghav: tum iss kurthi mein bahuth khoobhsurat lag rahi hai.
Trisha: yeh
Raghav: meri kurtha hai. Mein ne change Karli.
Trisha looked at him.
Raghav: nahi mein ne kuch nahi dekha. I swear. Mein ne lights switch off Karli.
Trisha blushed profusely.
Trisha was so shocked that Raghav changed her clothes then his clarification..

Love the whole story dear, please continue writing more such stories.
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Awesome story dear...
I liked the way her mother told her about the latest proposal for her from sooraj and giving her own reasons as to why this guy was perfect for her. Trisha had a real difficult time in buying some time for her...
Her mother being melodramatic was just sooo cute... this is a common scene in families where girls are in professional jobs and the mothers want their daughters to be properly dressed up with jewellery and make up... i have myself faced such situations with my mother...👏
I liked how Raghav came early on time and thinking about the proximity between these two...
Everyone surprised to see her dressed up so casually today... they must have been so shocked... she looked so different today...
Raghav pondering over the fact whether he was being overtly obvious that he didn't like to hear about so many proposals for her.. nice ...i loved it...
The way they solved the case was awesome... the culprit was just unexpected👏👏

((I suspected the involvement of sooraj because i was very sure that sooraj will be involved with some other girl(my gut feeling). Knowing that koyal was being forced for this marriage, i suspected that sooraj and koyal were together and that might be the reason for groom's murder. Sooraj being close to Trisha could easily come to know about their moves and escape from being grabbed... this was all my pov.))

The ccd get together was nice... the way Trisha was against a girl marrying just as a return for a business deal...and then Raghav praising her for knowing what she wanted... all claps to you for this👏👏👏
Raghav following her and getting frustrated at seeing them hug each other... expected from him as he loved her so much...
Raghav behaving rudely with her out of frustration and then his leaving the office... just shows how possesive he is for her...so romantic...
Sooraj meeting Raghav and asking him to help him out with a gift... i had butterflies run through my stomach... i got scared for a moment...
Then the truth about their relation and the way she helped him out in getting sophia accepted in sooraj's family... she is a real helper to everyone... so mature...loved it so much...
Trisha being worried about the friendship and relations between the two families... she is a very responsible daughter and cares for her family...
The punishment he gave to her was just lovely... full of romance... very well written by you...
Raghav making her painting and the final confession...👏👏👏
Trisha telling him that she just belonged to him... so romantic...
All in all a lovely story... there were so many lovely moments in this story... hope i haven't missed anyone in my review. Please keep writing such wonderful stories...👏🤗

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