New mystery story: Saturday is for murder? UPDATED Final part on pg 5

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Az07
Lovely update
Yet no clue about who could be the murderer
Loved Trisha's tension as it showed her responsibilities of a team leader
The head hit scene was just awesome
Loved how Raghav got connections with Trisha's causal talk
NowRatri is undercover as Fake Dulha Dulhan eagerly waiting for next part

Thankyou so much for liking it!

Last part will be the final update. The killer will be out.

The head hit scene will have a small role in the next part too.

Will try to update soon!

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CrazyHasii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Wonderful update. 👏

I was grinning while reading but couldn't help but to laugh when I read Rajbir will be the pundit 🤣

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: CrazyHasii
Wonderful update. 👏
I was grinning while reading but couldn't help but to laugh when I read Rajbir will be the pundit 🤣

Thankyou so much! Glad I could make you laugh! 😊

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

awesome update dear .loved how the case is progressing. all the RaTri scenes were soo cute could imagine RaTri in it .Really enjoyed reading them .OMG rajbir as a pundit and RaTri as fake bride groom that will be soo interesting to read thanks a lot for this wonderful update

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome update dear .loved how the case is progressing. all the RaTri scenes were soo cute could imagine RaTri in it .Really enjoyed reading them .OMG rajbir as a pundit and RaTri as fake bride groom that will be soo interesting to read thanks a lot for this wonderful update

Thankyou so much!

Its a great compliment for me if you could imagine what I write and enjoy.

Will update last part soon!

Glad you liked it!

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Here's a teaser for the last part.

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" Trisha koi apne shaadi me gun laata hai. I mean dekho maine kurta pyjama pehna hai gun kaha se launga. "

" Oh god. Do one thing. Mere left side pe waist ke paas pallu ke peeche ek gun hai. Take that and shoot. "

" Trisha-"

"Do it raghav. Fast. "

How can someone carry a gun and a saree, raghav wondered. But it was trisha. She was always so unpredictable. That's why he had fallen for her. She was unlike other women.

Raghav came closer to her. He tried not to touch her. He had to focus on the case. He took the gun from her waist, but while doing so brushed her stomach unknowingly.

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

awesome teaser dear loved it soo much

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nymphadora12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome teaser dear loved it soo much

Thankyou! Will try to update soon!

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Such a romantic teaser. So Something went wrong and Raghav and Trisha need gun. Raghav kabhi apne sath gun carry nahi karta hamesha Trisha use bachati hai this time also Trisha apni dulhan ki dress me gun chupa kar layi hai. Raghav kaise control kare but he need to focus on case so karna pad raha hai. Eagerly waiting for the next update. Please update soon 😳