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Hi,
This is my cute experiment with ratri scenes and the lovely thoughts about ratri in my mind. 😉
Part 1
Somewhere in the rare party
The dealing was going on between a drug smuggler and a person having a big suitcase which had approx 10lakhs in it. This dealing was continuously witnessed by a person standing near the bar and drinking Virgin margaritas (a non alcoholic drink). Suddenly he rushed out from the party and call to someone and said - "vo muche mil gaya Hai..." and he was about to continue when suddenly he was hit from back and become unconscious.
After two days
On 10:30am CBI HEADQUARTER (Delhi)
Trisha (busy in her phone talking with her mother) - "Maa, me office me hi Hu aur Kahan hongi" and suddenly reacted "what! App kya keh Rahi ho mom Mera Koi boyfriend nahi hai"
Meanwhile Raghav entered in her cabin with a smirk on his face and looking towards trisha in red top and off white colored pant.
Trisha-"OK mom, I will talk to you later "
Raghav -" mom ka call tha, unka shak karna to Banta Hai.."
Trisha - "what but why?"
Raghav-"are ab Lagatar itne ladko ke proposal ko reject karogi to... "(smiling at trisha)
Trisha-" fine ab mom ki side lena band Karo and Come back to the point, she was about to continue when her attention was taken by her blackberry phone which has caller ID of dilip sir and she attainded it quickly.
Raghav-"kya Hua Bulawa Aya Hai? "
Trisha-" ha chalo ek Naya case hai"
In Dilip Sir cabin
Trisha - "jai hind, sir"
Dilip sir-"trisha ek naya case aya hai, police officer Arjun Singh kayi dino see drug smuggler Shera ka peecha Kar Raha tha. Jisme vo apne colleagues Anil Kumar aur Suresh Thakur ke sath undercover gaya tha par..."
Trisha-"par what sir? "
Dilip sir-" par pichle do dino me hume noida me do lashe mili hai ek Anil ki aur doosri Ashish Singhania ki. "
Raghav-" Ashish singhania vo mashoor business man. "
Dilip sir-" ha! Arjun ka kehna hai ki Ashish bhi us drug smuggling me Shamil tha. Anil ki lash ke pass see humme Arjun ki watch mili hai aur jo goli Anil aur Ashish ki lash me se mili hai vo Arjun ki gun see chalice hai. Sare saboot Arjun ke khilaf hai isliye Arjun ko arrest Kar liya gaya hai.. So we have to solve this case as soon as possible agar yeh baat media ko pata chal gayi to police force ki bohot badnami hogi. "
Trisha-" yes sir we will take care of it.jai hind"
Trisha(after leaving the cabin) - "Raghav Arjun tumhari bohot accha dost hai so I think ki tumhe usse baat Karni chahiya. Tab tak me aur Ranbir Suresh Thakur se milte hai."
Raghav-"fine"
At noida police station
One person is standing near the police station beside the tree as soon as Raghav entered the police station and the person called and said "shikaar aa gaya"
Inside the police station
Raghav-"Arjun kya tumhne apne colleague Anil Kumar aur Ashish Singhania ka khoon Kiya hai?
Arjun-"Raghav tum to mere dost ho tum to jaante ho me aisa nahi Kar Sakta. Do din Pehale me aur Anil Shera ka peecha ek rare party me Kar Rahe the par jaise hi me party se bahar nikala Suresh ko call karne ke liye vaise hi kisi ne mere Sar par var Kiya aur me bahosh ho gaya jab ankhe khuli to me Anil ke Ghar me lash ke pass tha jaha se police ne mujhe yaha laya.
Raghav-"tumne Dekha vo con tha jisne tum pe var Kiya. "
Arjun -" nahi usne picche se var kiya tha. "
Raghav-" Tumhari gun se nikali goli Anil aur Ashish ko kaise lagi. "
Arjun -" nahi pata (said worryingly)
Raghav-"kya tumne kisi ko apni gun di thi ya apne se door kami chodi ya ratri thi "
Arjun-" nahi aise me apni gun kisi ko nahi deta par... (said after thinking a lot) ha! Yaad aya use din Suresh ne meri gun mangi thi. "
Meanwhile Trisha and Ranbir went to Suresh house but could not find him. At Suresh house all the things were messed up and they found drops of blood on the floor of hall but in the whole house they could not find Suresh. When they were going to leave they find the ring which was near the dining table
Rajbir - "shayad ye ring Arjun ki hai Maine uski photo me dekhi thi."
Trisha-"OK! We have to inform Raghav about this. "
Trisha called raghav but the his phone was silent so he was not able to attend it.
At noida police station Raghav was interrogating Arjun, suddenly a black passenger van came towards police station and Six to seven men got out from it and rushed inside the police station with there ammunition.
One of the person wearing black cloth in order to hide his face said to police inspector - "Arjun aur Raghav ko Hamare Havale Kar do varna sab mare jaoge."
Police inspector - "OK fine le jao aur ha boss ko Mera Salam bolna"
Raghav do not take a second to understand that the police inspector is involved in it. He took out his gun to protect himself.
Police inspector placed the gun on Arjun's head and said - "Raghav! Chup chap Hamare sath chalo varna Isko Mar doonga. Put your gun down aur koyi chalaki nahi ."
One of the person of that gang placed the gun on raghav's back forcing him to move
Raghav - "fine, use Koch mat karna me chalta Hu tumhare sath
Who were they and what will happen all in next part
Hope you all like the first part of the story. All comments are welcomed bad or good😊😳

Edited by 1973deepak - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow thanks for this wonderful os loved it a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

wow thanks for this wonderful os loved it a lot

Thanks and the second part is full of ratrilicious scenes
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Liked the story a lot... very similar to the show and I could relate to it...
I also loved the RaTri tiff in the start... gave me a warm feel 😊
Now Raghav phans gaya... offo mera bechara Hero... 😭
Looks like next is gonna be a lot of action 😉
Waiting for more... update soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amreen...

Liked the story a lot... very similar to the show and I could relate to it...
I also loved the RaTri tiff in the start... gave me a warm feel 😊
Now Raghav phans gaya... offo mera bechara Hero... 😭
Looks like next is gonna be a lot of action 😉
Waiting for more... update soon!!

Thanks for your lovely complement and yah I have written little bit similar to normal episode but it has lovely ratri scenes stuffed I second part and it also has action and how team will find raghav. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely story
Bf part was hilarious
Raghav in trouble hope Trisha will save him
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so Knight in distress 😉. Nice start. I read it yesterday only but couldn't reply, waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Flashback- "Raghav and Arjun kidnapped from police station. "

When Trisha came back to CBI Headquarters then she was called by Dilip Chauhan in his cabin
Trisha (After entering the cabin she saw police inspector standing by the side of the table) - "jai hind sir you called me?"
Dilip-"yes, Trisha meet Mr. Kunal Sharma police inspector of noida police station aur inke Anusara tumhaare Raghav ne apne kuch logo ke sath milkar apne dost Arjan ko bhagaya hai.
Trisha - "What, sir yeh kaise ho Sakta hai aap jaante hai ki Raghav apni duty ko bohot value deta hai and he can't break laws for his personal affairs.
Kunal-" so, according to you Ms. Trisha I am telling lie aur yeh goli jo muche Lagi hai yeh bhi jhoot keh rahi hai (holding his wound tightly and pretending that he saying truth)
Trisha - "Ho sakta hai ki koi misunderstanding huyi ho.."
Dilip - "Enough Trisha, Raghav Arjun ke sath gayab hai aur uska phone bhi band hai Upar se pressure hai ki jald se jald is case ko solve kiya jai. So until Raghav ke uper se charges nahi hat Jate ki use Arjun ki bhagne me madad nahi ki tab tak he is suspended from CBI and jaha bhi dikhe vahi use arrest Kar lena kyoki he is still accused.
"Trisha-" but, sir... "
Dilip -" No arguments Trisha aur jaate samay darwaza band karte Jaana. "
Trisha was shocked and saw a big mischievous smile on inspector Kunal Sharma while leaving the cabin

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Trisha (in the conference room) -" Bikram pata lagao ki noida police station se nikalne ke baad vo black passenger van kaha gayi and swati please try to trace Raghav and Arjun Mobile phones
Trisha - "Suresh Thakur ke baare me kuch pata chala.."
Rajbir-"jayada kuch nahi par ha jis din Arjun aur Anil us rare party me Shera ka peecha kar rahe the tab Suresh usi party me tha. "
Trisha -" Interesting... vo usi party me tha par Arjun ka kehna tha ki vo Suresh ko call karne ke liye bahaar gaya tha. Ab Suresh ka milna aur bhi zarooriho gaya hai.
Bikram - "Boss, yeh rahi police station ke samne vale atm ke bahaaar lage cctv camera ki photage. vo black passenger van Delhi se bahaaar ki or gayi hai
Swati-" Mobile ka location trace nahi ho pa raha hai shayad sim ko destroy kar diya gaya hai.
Trisha - "OK, fine to humme us Highway ke aas paas jitne bhi purane godown and factories hai unhe check karna hoga. they are perfect place for hiding."

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They were randomly checking each of these..
and finally reached to a old factory which was closed from 2years.
Trisha - "Guys! yeh last factory hai is highway par and i have a gut feeling ki hum jin logo ko dhoond rahe hai vo yahi honge."
Rajbir and Bikram turn towards left side to enter the factory and start searching for Raghav and Arjun while Trisha and Swati were searching around the factory.
Swati - "Boss, yeh dekho vohi black passenger van
Trisha -" OK, lets search it
When they were searching the van they found Raghav's calculator watch which proves that Raghav and Arjun were their in this van.
Trisha (thinking) lagta hai Raghav ne yeh watch jaan bhoojhkar yaha chodi hai kyoki watch ka buckle thik hai aur na hi koi damage hua hai.
Suddenly Rajbir shouted-"Trisha! come fast Raghav.., Raghav.. "
Trisha and swati rushed inside the factory and they saw Raghav who was unconscious and has many wounds and cuts on his body.
Swati-" Oh my God! hume Raghav ko jald se jald hospital le jana hoga. Bohot khoon beh chuka hai.
Trisha - "Ha sahi kaha mai aur Rajbir Ragjav ko kisi private hospital me le jaate hai. kisi ko bhi yah baat pata nahi chalni chahiye ki Raghav hume mil gaya hai.
Bikram and Swati nodded in a positive manner

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On 9:30pm at hospital
Trisha -" Rajbir tum ghar chale jao bohot raat ho gayi hai mai yaha ruk jaati hu aur yaad rakhna kuch bhi ho jaye yeh baat leak nahi honi chahiye ki Raghav yaha hai
Rajbir - "Trisha I will take care of it."
Doctor (interpreted in between) - "excuse me jo patient under admit hai uska koi rishtedaar hai kya.
Trisha (take a deep breath) -" Jo bhi baat hai aap muche batayi ye
Doc. saud in rude way) - "kya aap uski rishtedaar he"
Rajbir come close to Trisha 's ear and whispered - "lagata hai yeh hume tab tak kuch nahi bataye ga jab tak Raghav ka koyi rishtedaar nahi ata."
Trisha listened to Rajbir and suddenly said to doctor.
Trisha - "Ji ha aap mujhe batayiye me uski wife hu"
Rajbir was totaly shocked and was standing still.
Doc. - "thik hai par sirf aap hi under a sakti hai aur koi nahi.(giving sign towards Rajbir)
Rajbir immediately leave the hospital.
Doc -" Dekhiye Trisha ji Sarpar bohot jor se mara hai kisi ne jisase internal bleeding hoyi hai aur vah response nahi kar rahe hai. "
Trisha (standing in shock) -" kya... "
Doc. -" Agar unhe kal subah tak hosh nahi aya ro unki jaan khatere me a sakti hai so aap please... hope you understand. (giving hints to Trisha that the survival chances is less) "
Trisha pushed the doctor and run inside the room where Raghav was lying on the stretcher.

Will Trisha be able to save his love, all in next part
I will post the next part either tomorrow or day after tomorrow.
please tell me how was it.
if any queries or difficulties ask me. 😊
comments either good or bad are welcomed. 😳

Edited by 1973deepak - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow I just loved the way how Trisha supported Raghav even when all the evidences are against him! That's what happens when u r in love Trisha who is practical & straightforward who believes in straight facts just ignored all her laws from her favourite procedure manual
And I loved the fact how Trisha took over the case & how she understood everything with one clue like Raghav always does
Best moment was " Main Unki Wife Hoon!" I can imagine how stunned Rajbir would be
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Wow I just loved the way how Trisha supported Raghav even when all the evidences are against him! That's what happens when u r in love Trisha who is practical & straightforward who believes in straight facts just ignored all her laws from her favourite procedure manual
And I loved the fact how Trisha took over the case & how she understood everything with one clue like Raghav always does
Best moment was " Main Unki Wife Hoon!" I can imagine how stunned Rajbir would be
Waiting for next part

Thanks for your nice comment and yah in case of Raghav Trisha believe him blindly and if it would be in real episode than rajbir's stunned face ko dekhne ka maza hi aur tha. 😉

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