Prishna OS: Love Will Find A Way Part 3 Pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kinshukluvsj

beautiful story , please continue to the romance

thanks again

Thank you Shonez. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: XxAsiyaxX

Interesting i like it and i want you to post part 2

Thank you Asiya and yeah part 2 will be coming up. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2

Prishna romance ka intezaar hai... lovely OS!!

Thank you I'm glad you like it. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for the nice comments and for liking my OS and thank you to:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This Part may seem a little rushed so sorry for that and Firstly Thank you all for the lovely comments and I made it as Romantic as I could, but I'm no Love Guru so it may not be romantic for all of you, I'm still new at writing Romantic stuff ☺️. So anyway here is Part 2, Enjoy!

Part 2: Jabse Hai Jaana Maine.

Pinto and family then start to leave to go home after the function and Pinto doesn't want to leave but just stay with Krishna. Sargam had understood that he wanted to stay so she started teasing him "Kya Devar Ji just wait for a few more days then Krishna is all yours" Pinto just blushes and is embarrassed and says "Bhabhi what are you saying?" The Singh family went home and Krishna and family also packed everything up and got ready for bed.

At night Pinto stealthily comes to Krishna's house. He looks through her Window and sees her sleeping peacefully. He enters through the window and goes near Krishna. He saw her sleeping and touched her face. Krishna who was lightly sleeping felt someone touch her face and instantly opened her eyes to see a pair of handsome eyes looking right down at her. She is shocked at first then she smiles and then realises that Chanchal will wake up and see. She was about to say to Pinto that Chanchal will wake up and Pinto instantly puts his hands over her mouth to stop her from talking and quietly takes her from there and more next to the Window where he came through. He let's go of her and takes something out of his pocket. It was a bundle of Bangles which were multicoloured (the ones he got for her) Krishna looks at the bangles and smiles and looks down as she is shy.

Pinto instantly smiles and makes her look at him. 'These bangles are for you' says Pinto and takes it forward to Krishna. Krishna was about to take it from his hand when he backed them away. Pinto then says 'Wait, these bangles will surely be worn by you but I will put them on for you' Krishna was surprised and was about to say something but Pinto stops her by saying 'No these bangles WILL be put on you by me' then he put the bangles on for her and just looks at her and smiling as Krishna was looking at the bangles on her hand and was happy and had the biggest smile on ever on her face.

Pinto who is looking at her says to her 'This is just Great, I came here all the way and that too at night and you are just looking at the bangles and not me' then Pinto makes a cute angry face. Krishna laughs and says 'Pinto Ji thank you soo much for these bangles I love them'. Pinto then replies to her that just a Thank You won't do, he needs something that will help him get through the night. Krishna is confused in what to do but gets an idea and hugs him. Pinto hugs her back and when they break out of the hug Pinto says 'that's not what I had in mind but chalega'. Pinto then says 'Ok Krishna I am going home now, you must be tired so go and get some sleep'. Krishna smiles and says 'Ok Pinto Ji' and gives him another hug. Pinto then quickly kisses her on the cheeks and runs out of the Window but on the way stops and looks back and at her and says 'Goodnight My Future Wife' and Winks at her and goes. Krishna is surprised of what just happened as it just registered in her brain and smiles while blushing and then goes to bed when she hears Chanchal say "Didi Pinto Ji ab chalegayye so come back to sleep now".

Part 3: Still Thinking... 😕 😆

Edited by FizaluvsKinshuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww Fizu U updated . Thatzz Great . I completely lovedd it . This was such a sweet scene .And chanchal in the last really cracked me up 😆😆 . Do update soon dear .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful OS. Love it. I wish the creative team read and apply some of your work in AB. I am sure you won't mind.😉 They seem to be stuck when it comes to Prishna's romance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww amazingg OS
just loved it fiza
love the end when chanchal say "Didi Pinto Ji ab chalegayye so come back to sleep now".
waitin for part 3
Edited by XxAsiyaxX - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
really sweet Prishna scene...please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Fiza! amazing OS! love it. I am glad your writing these. Keep writing and making Sigs!!!!

<3 it

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