FF..~~Yehi Hai Zindagi~~.P: Sixth updated

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I was thinking to write a FF.....Do comment on it....Modz del this topic if I am not supposed to write...!!! 😳😳

The sun is rising and the chirping of the birds enhance the beauty..All around the world people set out for work but the way of CGians is slightly different....CG k sabhi log Rasik, Ratiraam, Rangeela aur Bashir apni shops khol detay hain...
From one of the house the voice of crying baby was heard....A woman was trying to calm her......"Arrey my baby! kia hogaya? Kiyun ro rahi ho?" (Yeh hai Mahua....Saurav ki patni.....In dono ki ik hi beti hai Milli....aap soch rahay hogain yeh kaisa naam hai to yeh inko mandir ki stairs per milli thi u iska naam Milli par gaya likin pora CG aur M.S isko apni beti ki tarah hi pyaar kartay hai...)

Sa:Arey kiyun ro rahi hai...Lao mein chup karwao...Tum jakar chai banalo...
Tu aisay chal raha hai inka pariwaar jahan itna khayal rakhnay wali pati ho waha laraai ka to naam hi nahi....😳😳 Chalein CG k dosray logoon say miltay hain.....

Dhrr...Dhrr...Dhrr...."Pammi! darwaza kholo...Pammi meri gal tu suno...." Surprised!!! Yeh kon hai??? Yeh Sukha Singh hain.....Inki aye din apni patni say laraai rehti hai....Iss bar inki patni yani Pammi insay is liey naraaz hain k inho nay Pammi say yeh baat chupai k woh Pammi ko surprise party day rahay hain....😆😆😆 Pammi issi lye inhain ghar mein ghusnay nahi day rhiii...😆😆
Pa: Dekhain Sukha Ji aaj mein aapko maaf karnay wali nahi....Poora CG jaanta tha k aap party rakh rahay ho per mein nahi....
S:Pammi just look into the matter....The surprise won't remain if I would have dassy nu....!!!! 🤣🤣🤣
Sukha Ji aisay hi hain....Chalein agay chaltay hai warna inki laraai tu khatam hi nahi hogi.....
Arre yeh tu idhar hi mil gaye...Yeh Ratiraam ji hain.....Single ready to mingle...!!!! Inki sweets ki dukaan hai.....Hmm inko disturb nahi kartay...Rangeela bhi pass mein hi hain.....Insay bhook k waqt hi baat hogi waisay yeh paan bohat acha banatay hain.....
"Are bhai!!! Yeh kia sunti ho Niresh ki amma....Bijli ka bill phir say zayada agaya....." Rukkain...Yeh Gupta Ji hain Yeh thoday say puranay khayalat k hain...In k do betay hain Rahul aur Niresh.....Niresh ki apni job hai likin Rahul film star banay k sapnay hi dekh raha hai.....Inkay ghar per kabhi fursat say aayegain pehlay aap ko CG ki chand say tu milwadain...chalein chaltay hai....😊😊😊
Arre yeh kia yeh tu ja rahi hai par kidhar.......Hmmm Sandeep Babu k.......Yeh Urmi hain.....Rasik aur Sujata ki beti....

Sandy is working on his PC...
Ur: Ahemm Ahemm..!!!
Sa: Janay bahara....Aye aur humaray sath kuch meethay pal bitayee...😍😍😍
Ur: Sandeep Babu aap bhi...
Sa: Babu nahi Sandeeeep kaheiye zayada APNA lagta hai.....
Ur: Poochain gay nahi kia laaii hoon....
Sa: Apkay phool jaisay nazuk hathoon say zehar bhi kha lay gain....😳😳😳
Ur: Itni jaldi aapko zehar nahi de rahi...
Sa: Yeh tu sheeva-e-husn hai...Aashiq ko tarpana...!!! 😉😉😉
Ur: Aap kabhi serious bhi hotay hain...
Sa: Chand taray tor doga...Suraj ko mor doonga...Tum ik baar haan kardo....Mein serious bhi hojao ga...!!!!
Ur: Acha bas!!! pappa nay mithaii bhijwaaye hai aap k liye kha lijye ga...
Sa: Pappa ka ashirwaad aur mithaai ki khushi jabhi achi hogi jab aap is husn k ashiq ko apnay haatho say khilayeegii.......


Sorry guys....!!! I have to go and leave my FF ...!!! Will continue it tomm or maybe today's night...!!! Bfr that do tell me are u likin it or not...And do u want Filmy Sandy or Urmi is ok....I can make Sandy serious just need ur opinions.....

Waiting for urs comments.....Eagerly....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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good attempt.....keep up and dont leave ur stories incomplete........n why would the viewbies del it.......we r not so bad yaar..... 😳 😳 😛 ...little bad bana parta hai... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fazila~

good attempt.....keep up and dont leave ur stories incomplete........n why would the viewbies del it.......we r not so bad yaar..... 😳 😳 😛 ...little bad bana parta hai... 😛



No u all r very nice..!!! 😳😳😳 I left it coz I wanna know whether u ppl like filmy Sandy...!!! Anyway will continue it then plz lemme know..!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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do continue...i think sandy babu serious hi thik hain...if u want a filmy one...make it a dream.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haan, dont change them......keep urmi filmy n sandy same serious in front of others and luchaa with urmi hehehehhe 😆 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good job.. 👏 👏 👏 and please do complete it and i also prefer Urmi filmy and Sandeep Serious.. 😃


Looking forward to more..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thnx everyone for your replies....
&nbs p; Part II
Sa: Urmi...Urmi...darwazay per kiyun khari hoye ho....
Ur: Husn-e-ashiq......
Sa: Kia???Kia keh rahi ho Urmi kon ashiq kaisa husn...Kaisay batein karti ho...
Ur: Wo..wo mm...aap wo mithaai...aashirwaad....meray haath.....zehar...
Sa: Bus Urmi tum aati bhi sochti hoye ho aur jaati bhi sochti hoye ho.....
Ur: Aap nay abhi kuch nahi kaha....
Sa: Mein kia kahoon ga...!!!
Ur: Chi..
Sa: Ab kia hua....!!!!
Ur: Kuch nahi aap mithaai kha lay mein ja rahi hoon...
She put down the sweet box and run outside leaving Sandy surprised….

Sa: Yeh Urmi bhi na…

Ur….(while running towards Bashir's house…) Zoya…Zoya…..

Zo: Haan Urmi…!!!!( yeh zoya hai Bashir miyan ki beti…Bashir miyan ka ik beta Mushtaq aka Mushi aur ik beto Zoya hai…Ik mamlay mein Gupta Ji aur Bashir Miyan brabar hain….????Betay k maamlay mein….!!!!)

Ur: Zoya pata nahi mujhay kia hogaya…Yeh Sandeep Babu bhi na….
Zo: Urmi phir say…!!!
Ur: Haan phir say…..
Zo: Likin aisa kaisay….
Ur: Pta nahi
Zo: Waisay aisa lagta tu nahi…!!!
Ur: Bus zoya kabhie kabhie ho jata hai…
Zo: Ho jata hai matlab tumhay iss say koi problem nahi???
Ur: Problem kaisii??? Ik pal ki khushi bhi kaafi hai…
Zo: Yeh baat tumhay khushi deti hai???
Ur: Haan nahi tu aur kia gham deti….
Zo: Kya Rasik Uncle bhi thay…
Ur: Pappa??? Zoya pappa kiyun hogain…??? (getting a hint that Zoya has gotten sth else….)
Zo: Tu sirf Rasik uncle k saamnay hi tu wo tumhay aisa keh saktay hai….
Ur..(With a lot of surprise…): KYA???
Zo: BEHAN..!!!!
Ur: What…..??? mein tumhay Sandeep Babu ki behan lagti hoon…..Zoya mein tumhay choroon gi nahi…..
Urmi runs towards Zoya….
Zo: Acha baba sorry…!!! Mein kaisay nahi janu gii k tu hi tu hai Sandeep Bhaiyya k liye perfect choice…
Urmi blushes….
Ur: Bus isi ka tu intezaar hai….Na jane kab say…
Zo: Sabr ka phal metha hota hai….
Ur: Aur sabar nahi hota…!!!Kash meray paas bhi Aladdin ka chiraag hota aur mein apni har wish poori karti…..
Zo: Hmm…!!!

The scene shifted to Sukha's house…where a guy is getting ready wearing SUPERMAN shirt…No!!! you got it wrong its not Jugle its SUKHA……😆😆😆

(ab aisa hua kaisay??? Well yeh tu aap jaantay hain k Pammi nay Sukha ko andar aanay say mana ki atha khair jaisay taisay wo andar aa gaye likin Pammi apnay room mein bethi hain lock kiay hoye….Haan Sukha wohi pehnay rehtay jo wo pehan rahay thay likin chirya ko kia pata k Sukha bhaisaab ki Pammi Bhabhi say laraai hai woh tu unper kar k chali gaye…..Ab bechara Jugle nay apnay pitashree ki madad ki aur apnay kapray inhay day diye………..)

Rahul entered the house...He thought Jusle is reading the newspaper....

Ra:(while thinking) Wah!!! Jugle nay aaj pants pehni hai....

He come forward and start tickling on Jugle....yaani Sukha's stomach....

Su: Oye ki kar raha hai......

Part II end on Rahul's shocked face...!!!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please do carry on..I too prefer the serious Sandy & filmy Urmi combination.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ya do carry on.. I liked you presentation.. Looks interesting 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks everyone for liking my FF and waiting for its parts….!!!!

I would request to all the FF writers if they have sth in mind for the continuation of this FF then plz write it....I won't mind if someone is gonna help me...!!!

Part III
Su: Oye Rahul yeh kia kar rahay ho...
Ra: Wo....wo....uncle ji aap yahan per Jugle k kapray kiyun pehnay hoye hain???
Su:Mujhe ik baat batao ik baap apnay putr k kapray nahi pehan sakta...!!!
Ra: Haan per aap...????
Su: Arey mera room lock hai....
Ra: (dunno how to handle the situation) acha mein chalta hoon...
Sukha entered the room of Jugle where another "torture" was waiting for him....
Jugle was getting ready when Urmi entered…..
Ur: Jugle…!!! Aap abhi tak tayyar nahi hoye…
Ju: (with a 100000 watt smile)… Nahi bs ho raha ho tum betho kharay kharay nazuk paon dukh jaye gain……..
Ur: Tumhay meray pao k baray mein kab say khayal honay laga….
Ju: Bus….!!! Bachpan say hi mein nay hameesha tumhara hi khayal kia hai….
Ur: So sweet….She pull her cheeks and then........Tish A SLAP….
Ju: (All surprised) Daddy Ji aap….???
Su: Oye mein nahi hona tu phir kon hovay ga…?????
Ju: Daddy kia hamesha ghalat waqt per atay ho…
Su: Oye chup kar….!!!! Ab bhaag yahan say….
Ju: Daddy Ji….
Su: Jao…..
Su…(while thinking) ab yeh Pammi kaisay manay gii????
The scene shifted to Urmi and Zoya…
Ur: Zoya mujhse sabr nahi hota….Zo: Per Urmi tmhe achi tarah maloom hai k sandeep bhaiyya tumse pyaar kartay hain….
Ur: Nahi kartay hogain tu ab tak tu karna shro kardia hoga….(well….. aap thoday say paresshan hoye hodain Urmi k is statement say…Bhai..!! Asal baat yeh hai k Sandeep Babu…!!! Urmi k bachpan k pyaar hain….)
Zo: Tu Urmi pata kaisay chalaye…???
Ur: Isi ka tu afsoos hai kaheein aisa na hojaye k mein "devdasni" ban jaon…
Zo: Per Urmi tu sharaab piyegii….
Ur: Kon kambakhat sharaab piyay ga…Mein tu aanso say hi tarr hojao gii…..
Zoya with tears in her eyes…
Zo: Bus Urmi tu bhi na mazaaq mein ik dum serious hojati ho…
Ur: Per Zoya tu batana mein kaisay Sandeep Babu k dil ka haal kaisay janu…
Zo: Koi na koi tareeqa tu zaroor nikal aye ga…
Then a car is shown parked outside the house of Rasik… An handsome guy came out of the car and entered Rasik's shop…
Key: handsome guy: Hg
Hg: Aap Rasik uncle hain…
Ra: Haan mera naam Rasik hai…Aap kon???
Hg: Mein Rohan….
Ra: Maaf kijye ga mainay aap ko pehchana nahi….
Ro: Mein aap k friend Aakash ka beta…
Ra: Arey aap Aakash k betay hain…..Chalein andar chaltay hain….
Now the scene shifted to Urmi and Sandy….
Ur: Sandeep Babu aap bhi na thoday ultay hain…
Sa: Kiya matlab ulta???
Ur: Matlab yeh ik jawaan larki aap say baat karti hai aur aap itnay teray jawab detay hain aap kabhi seedhi baat kartay hain….
Sa: Tum bachpan say hi filmy ho Urmi…!!!
Ur: Mein filmy tu nahi magar Sandeep Babu jab say dekha aap ko mujhme filmy keera agaya….Sorry sahi shair ban nahi paya…
Sa: Haan tu tum nay meri baat ko xtend kia hai…..Bachpan say hi tu dekhti a rahi ho…
Ur: Acha aap mujhay clearly bataye…
Sa: Kiya…
Ur: K aap kitna waqt lain gain…
Sa: Kiya karnay mein Urmi tum bhi na bohat khainchti ho baat ko itni tu rubber band bhi nahi khichti…
Ur: Uski elastic limit kam hoti hai na….!!!
Sa: (with a laugh) kia Urmi bilkul bachi ho….
Ur: Haan bachi hii hoon mera ehsaas tab hoga jab mein aap ko chorr kar chali jao gii…
Sandy put his hand on her mouth…
Sa: Aainda mujh say door janay ka mat kehna…
Ur: (All shocked) Sandeep Babu…!!!
Sandy put his hand away all shocked to utter a single word….Urmi with a big smile runs to her house….
Now the screen splits in two….Urmi and Sandy thinking
Ur: Sandeep Babu mujh say door nahi hona chahtay….!!!
Sa: Mujhay Urmi ki door janay wali baat kiyun buri lagii…
Ur: Haan who bhi mujhay chahtay hai bus keh nahi patay…..She blushes….
Sa: Mera hath khud bakhud uth gaya kia mujhay waqai uska saath acha lagta hai????
Ur: Sandeep Babu jitney bhi chupaaiye unhai meri mojoodgii achi lagti hai…..
Sa: Jab kal Urmi chali gaye tu mujhay bura kiyun laga…!!!
Ur: Shayad meray chalay ana ka bhi unhay ehsaas hua ho…
Sa: Yeh kia horaha hai mujhay….Kissay poochoon…???
Ur: Bus ik dafa Sandeep Babu ik dafa mujhay apnay dil ka haal tu bataye…..Main aap k dil ka haal jannay k liay baichain hoon…
Sa: Haan shayad mujhay Urmi say pyaar hogaya hai…
Sandy went outside to meet Urmi and tell her "what he feels"…He heard Rasik talking on phone in his shop to someone…
Ra: Haan mein samajh raha hoon…….Bus aap say kia chupana aap tu baray bhai jaisay hain……Haan ji bilkul…….Arre aap ka hi ghar hai jab chahein aa jayein……Bus ik dafa aap Urmi ki baat pakki kardain….
Sandy was left shocked…!!! He did not believe in his ears….
Ra: Sach boloon to main Urmi ko CG mein nahi bihaaon ga…….
Sandy eyes started shimmering with unshed tears….He returned to his home…..And look at the sky….
Sa: Kahan ho maa……Mu..muj…mujhay a.aa..aaaj aa..aap ki za.zaroorat hai….
Sandy couldnot control himself and break down…..!!!!!

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