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Posted: 18 years ago
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if more ppl are interested i can add more to my idea!

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Raoul
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ive decided to add more to my idea just for fun.

Its the next day. Sandeep wakes up to Rohan making chai for him. Sandeep is pleasantly suprised, but as usual doesnt show it really lol. They begin chatting and Rohan starts to tell Sandeep about his story.

Zoya is sittin at the cafe lost in her thoughts. Urmi comes and tries to talk to her. Zoya is still lost in her thoughts smiling. Urmi pretends to call Rohans name and Zoya looks around trying to find him. Urmi breaks out laughing, Zoya is slightly peeved. Urmi begins teasing Zoya about Rohan. Urmi then says shes going to go see Sandeep and Rohan and starts running to his house. Zoya chases her telling her to stop all the while Urmi is laughing. Zoya catches up to Urmi and as she is entering Sandeep's house she bumps into Rohan. She looks up at him and he starts looking at her(filmy i know lol). A moment passes and Sandeep interrupts them and tells Urmi and Zoya that he and Rohan or going to see if they can get him a permit and loan for openning his hospital/clinic. Rohan says bye and Zoya is at a loss for words. End Scene. Aek Chabhi Hai Padoss Mein! music lol.

Feed back would be great again!

Keep it real and take life easy

Raoul
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is interesting Raoul 👏 Are you going to make this into a full fledged fanfic? It would be great.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I definately could. If you or others want to more than yeah ill add more. Or i might just do it for fun.

Keep it real and take life easy

Raoul
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yeah, go for it! It's good.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Should i make a new post or just add to this one? It doesnt seem like too many ppl are reading this post much ne more or atleast not responding so maybe i should just make a new thread? What do you think?

Keep it real and take life easy

Raoul
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nice plot Night-Wing.Loved reading it...expecting more.....I had not read it before...
It would be great idea if u could open it as a new thread.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can i just say.. i wud love to see a muslim guy with zoya... i dunno why they have shown a single muslimg family falling in luv with other ppl... it represents us muslims kinda in a bad way cuz then our parents fink we r gonna fall for the wrong ppl...

instead of rohan... plz change the actor name into raihan... thx cya

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